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CrackedInkWell


"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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With the Equestrian Girls movies out, taken place in a universe that everypony from Equestria is in human form, I've decided to do a thought experiment.

The following story has to do with their version of Discord (simply known as Mr. Disc), and what would happen if he had stumbled into the land of Equestria.


A huge thank you to his Highness PrinceCelestia for making the cover art.

Edited by ginger468 and SecretBrony01

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 328 )

Do you realize that in the first Equestria girls movie, humans can't go into the relm portal of Equestria. He would need to be turned into a pony.

Interesting take on human Discord. Most people make him a guy with a chaotic nature who loves making trouble. Your Discord is actually really normal; the only thing stopping him from being 100% different from pony verse Discord is his creativity and this mental disorder of his.


Can't wait to see more! :heart:

5146690 Did you miss the part where he turned into a draconequus?

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GMD

Yayyy, fourth comment!!

...Yay?

Interesting take on it.

Sadly, I don't think the Discords will get along. They both have really different personalities, but you never know!

This is gold. I'm... I'm SO happy the Discords get along! This is great. Please sir, can I have more?

Conflict between the discords or conflict with discords and ponies

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5165146 how many ponies will scream about the apocalypse when they find out about this?

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5165169 I bet pinkie will tell everyone about mr.disc, no one will believe her, and then leave both discords all confuse when they hear 'the end is nigh'

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5165201 "at least there aren't three discord"
Suddenly, Eris appears

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5165219 :pinkiehappy: but seriously, if you're going to do conflict between the two discords, at least wait until the ponies find out about mr.disc

Comment posted by CrackedInkWell deleted Nov 26th, 2014

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This is Discord
Ya know, the guy who effs realiy and makes the laws of physics his female dog

5167258 Before there was anything, there was chaos.

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Oh no. Everyone in Ponyvill is going to freak out......... This will be fun! :pinkiecrazy:

“Well… I… Just… But…” He stammered. His eyes twitched and looked at every direction. Ah great, I think I just broke myself.

Only Discord could do that :rainbowlaugh:

Okay! Now if you three don’t mind, I’m going to head off for a ‘Welcome-to-Ponyville-second-Discord party! See ya at three

Poor poor ponyville. Poor poor twilight's sanity

Comment posted by CrackedInkWell deleted Nov 26th, 2014

Could you please please do the next chapter from one of the other mane 4 or another pony POV? It's nice to read mr.disc, but I really want the other reactions first hand (maybe write it as a intermission or side chapter if you want to continue doing discord's pov) :heart:

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Comment posted by CrackedInkWell deleted Nov 26th, 2014

It just occurred to me that in Keep Calm and Flutter On, Discord had a moment where there were multiples of himself. Not sure if this fact would make this scene never happen, but it's worth noting I suppose.

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That was very obviously a transient creation of Discord's. A separate entity entirely is a different matter.

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The guy who read your story in 15 minutes flat after seeing it in recently updated fics! MAHAHA:pinkiecrazy:

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How are we doing this?!
I don't even know you!:rainbowderp:
Its insanity. I tell you, INSANITY!

Comment posted by CrackedInkWell deleted Nov 26th, 2014

No but in all seriousness this is a amazing story you have written and you have most expertly stolen my attention. I have enjoyed these first few chapters and I see a lot of potential in this fic. You have most certainly have earned my like and I will be most definatly be following this story. That said you are a excellent author and I hope that you will continue to display the same level of skill through out this story.

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It always pays to be open for suggestions, two heads are better then one! You will find that no matter how good of a idea you may have 99.99 percent of the time someone has a better one. The only suggestion I can offer at the moment though is perhapes Profeser Discord teaches old Disc a lesson on chaos it would be hilarious to have Disk stuck in a Desk as Discord starts explaining the complexity that is chaos. Like have him say things like did you bring your lunch or maby give him detention.:rainbowlaugh: Though it isn't that original of a thought to have the teacher be teach so I wouldn't be surprised if you thought of it already.
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No it is not Robin. Though I would suggest that you respected the wishs of the author and go easy on the font size, nobody enjoys it and a simple explanatory mark tends to get the point across.

Seatbelts, everyone, it's time for a field trip! TO THE BUS!

5208315 Twist: I hope it's a normal field trip...


CMC: With Mr.D? No way!

I always thought the key was to have just the right amount of insanity. With either too much or too little you can't contribute to society in a meaningful way.

Comment posted by CrackedInkWell deleted Nov 26th, 2014

"Oh, I hope this is going to be a normal field trip!"
"With the Disc? No way!"
"Awwww!"

Nice to see Mr Disc is getting the hang of his powers.

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