“…. And then I got slapped by your principal for disappearing on short notice. Any questions?” I told my last class of the day. Like the others, they couldn't really believe what they were hearing from me. But since there was some free time near the end of each class because the assignments were so short, I decided to tell them where I “disappeared” to for the past several days.
The reactions varied from class to class. Some found my story entertaining while others weren't that surprised since they already know my reputation. Yet out of all the students, the one I paid close attention was Fluttershy. It wasn't that she was surprised or weirded out or even fascinated by my story; rather, she didn't make a reaction at all.
One of the students raised her hand, “So… Principal Celestia was a horse thing and the rest of us were ponies?”
“Yep.”
“Does that happen very often?”
I shook my head, “No, that’s actually the very first time that’s ever happened to me.”
“Are you going to draw it all out?” another student asked.
“After what I’ve just seen, it’s a guarantee.” Right then, the school bell rang for the end of school. “Have a good day and be sure to think about what your next upcoming project is going to be,” I told them as they all packed up and at a group at a time left the classroom. All that is, except for Fluttershy.
“Ms. Shy? Is everything alright?” I asked her.
“Is… Is it really true?” This caught me off guard. “I-I mean, you being in Equestria and all that.”
“My dear, it was just a delusion.”
“Um, not that I don’t doubt your story, but this time… I think you just lied to me.”
“Pardon? Ha, Fluttershy, it was just a-”
“No. No, it wasn't.”
I think I blinked a few times. “I… What are you talking about? You can’t say for a moment that you think that what just happened to me actually happened. Right?”
“Mr. Disc, it’s okay, we both know it was real. Twilight told us.”
“Come again?”
“Um… I-If you don’t want to talk about it, I understand. Anyway, I’ll see you next week Mr. Disc.”
Stunned, I couldn't help but watch her take her bag and made her way out the door. She couldn't possibly have known, right?
A yip followed by a crash was heard coming from outside of my door. I turned to find that a couple of students have just tripped Fluttershy. “Opus, careful there, Klutzershy!” One of them said before walking away laughing.
I guess it was a flash of anger that made me snap my fingers. As soon as my right hand snapped, I heard those bullies yell and spontaneously fall over. I got up from my seat and leaned through the doorway, and sure enough, that part of the hallway’s floor was covered in ice. Me and Shy watched them try to get up, slipping along the way.
Although I admit, I wish I could have played the blue Danube waltz as they fall repetitively on the floor. Fluttershy looked up in surprise; I smiled, putting a finger over my mouth.
“Just between us?” I asked.
“Um… Okay. Thank you.”
“You’re welcome, Fluttershy.”
Oh snap, this was good.
This was great.
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Yes.
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You're very welcome!
So THAT'S from whom Ms. Frizzle got her magic school bus! Thanks for solving the mystery! Have mustache approval!
Yaaaaay! Mr. Disc is like a superhero now :) :) :)
YES, BEST ENDING. *claps*
Seriously, the main 6 in human-land know about Twilight and stuff, so Mr. Disc should fit right in with the "we know about alternate pony dimension"
It makes so much sense! Guh. Thanks for the story, and the fabulous ending! I didn't see it working out this well, but you pulled it off!
Yay! He keeps his powers!
lets hope he doesn't decide to be Roy Mustang for Halloween and then burns the whole school down with a snap of his fingers
Daaangit, a sequel would be awesome. I love this story.
5281395 I to believe a sequal would be amazing!
I do enjoy this story, though I feel it was a little short.
5298598 I wish I could do readings... I would do one lol. BUT it would not be good at all, and I would break it.....
5299791 OH I will be doing that!
5299791 Sadly I find that Scribbler mostly dose DARK or SAD fics. Its kinda sad really, I dont like to hear sad fics all of the time and that makes up 97% of her story readings...
I'll try around and ask a few readers if they would be willing to do a reading on one of your stories; I would really like to see more to this story it would be kinda intersting to see were it goes from here. Either way atleast I tried lol
5382708 Ah crap, who's gonna clean all this up?
YES!! He still has his magic! Woohoo!!!
(weirdly happy because of this)
All right...
5386452 I'm was trying to link them together, but for some reason it doesn't read it as a prequel.
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If you put the story ID of the original story into the sequel's box when editing, then the original story will automatically link to a sequel on its page.
5387995 To your credit, it is. I had the exact same video posted for those who guessed correctly. But, as you could see, I deleted it, along with my entire past comments.
I've been putting this story off for a while, I really need to get to reading it.
544113 lol so are the movies
5448575 Alright, I'l try this with you only once, and then just give it up...
First of all, remember where you are. This is FIMFiction, this is a place where rediculus ideas about any character comes in all the time. This is a place where those who write stories can write for the fun of it and even they know that their stories aren't to be taken way too seriously. The same goes for all of my stories too. And besides, we're dealing with a sorce material where even it has flawed logic.
Second, when you went on to tell me that I'm wrong because of A, B, C and D, I couldn't help but wonder if you stop for a moment to think why. Why would this author make AB a closeted lesbian? For you, I admit, she's probably too young (although we're not exactly sure what her real age is at this point as far as I'm aware), but I do agree with her trying to discover herself though. Which goes to one of the personal reasons why I wrote her the way I did. At her age, I can personaly relate to because I'm a closeted bisexual myself, and at her age, I could relate at around that age to try to figure out myself and being afraid (I'm still am) about what would happen if those I know and love find out (even if it was true or not). Plus, you'd make it sound as if AB is in love, but I don't think so. I think it's more of the lines of puppy love for Scoot's, but the fact that she's a close friend and a girl that probably would want her to keep her mouth shut. (There's a reason why I haven't let AB come out here.)
But part of trying to explain myself, I want to thank you though, you just gave me an idea for sequel I'm working on.
5469751 no that's not what I meant, have you ever seen Mr. Peabody and Sherman , I'm thinking about M.P.A.S' (Mr. Peabody and Sherman) ending.?
5448683 its a picture i have downloaded that i cant put because i cant find the picture on google
5485919 One loves his maddness, while the other wishes to control it. And Discord is Mich more immature than Mr. Disc.
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5485934 When I wrote this, I did find a difference between the two. Discord is used to the madness, in fact, to him without it would be like telling someone to never breathe again. He's also is a kind of immortal god in which he can create anything he pleases. Mr. Disc on the other hand, is human who didn't have powers, and since he's mortal and living in the human world, he's been told that his madness must be cured or be locked away in a asylum for the rest of his life.
5485972 Awe crap, who's going to clean this up?
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To be fair Discord has control over his madness and has powers, but Mr. Disc, as depicted, does not have control (except via medication) and until now no powers. They're both used to it, but for Discord it is what makes him different and unique. To take away his powers is like cutting off the wings of a pegasus or removing a unicorn's horn. For the other it's a deficiency or least makes him abnormal. Frankly giving him magic powers muddles things a bit.
It's a little unclear here if there is any larger concept of the relationship between the two world. If Mr. Disc has magic somehow, then it logically follows that maybe the humans do too, they just don't have any way to channel it and would be terribly afraid of it if someone used it to their detriment.
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You really should work on your spelling. :P
It may be a place where you can write stories for the fun of it, but it's also a venue for others to read your work. It's good to see that you are using the random tag, because otherwise it would be somewhat more reasonable to complain about such differences . Some people will take stories seriously and some won't, but you should pay attention to the story as a whole because the less random/ridiculous/? it is in general, the more peculiar and frustrating moments of randomness or ridiculousness will be to the reader.
Additionally, it's important to realize that, since you're the author, adding something to a story or changing it from MLP canon implies that there is a reason beyond randomly feeling that way one day. It is not the real world where things are beyond knowing why they are true. If AB is a lesbian here, it is because you decided such and a certain portion of people will be bothered by that, some of them because it either appears to be or is the case that you haven't got a good reason for that to be true.
5514708 Oh, now I get it! That was a bit unintentional actually, I was trying to include the number 13 somewhere. I guess I walked into that joke.
5675448 From my favorite book of all time.
6767557 death.
Oh man, that was great dude! It looks like there's a sequel, so, OFF AN A LATE NIGHT ADVENTURE I GO!!!!
WHEN WILL I SLEEP, NOBODY KNOWS!
This is definitely going into my favorites.
I'll admit that I like this take on a EG Discord. He tries to be a good man and his time in an asylum as well as his medication is an interesting way to apply his 'reformation' to a human setting. Well done.
In a story that myself and Werekitty write that takes place in the same world https://www.fimfiction.net/story/299667/the-sour-grapes-chronicles-equestria-girls we envisioned him as a former Physicist prodigy who got a little too close to the truth and now works as the quirky janitor who works at Equestria High and yet seems to know more than he lets on.
I can't help but wonder what Desi Cordington would be like if he ever met Julius Disc.
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Thank you, and remember, this is merely one of four stories I wrote about him.