Mr. Disc

by CrackedInkWell

13: Back Through the Looking Glass

“Oh, and for art, I thought it would be nice if the students could interact with their drawings, at least, temporarily of course,” I told the dumbstruck Cherliee about my report on today’s class. I told the guard that before I go, I should go to her to fill her in on what has happened today in her schoolhouse; and the fact that I’ll have to take my leave since I’ll be going home.

“That’s… that’s quite a days’ work right there.” She said before she sniffed. “So how were the students?”

“Well, they were uncertain at first, but after they got to know me they were quite good to work with. They were interested in what I had to say, and these superpowers made learning quite entertaining to them.”

“So did,” she sniffed for a moment, “did you run into any trouble with my students? Other than you’re um, (sniff) breakdown?”

“I have. I had to discipline Diamond after I caught her bullying Applebloom. Applebloom is alright now, but for Diamond, however, I gave her extra homework and a… let’s say, a little spell on her so to make things fair.”

“A spell? Is it serious?”

“No, it will wear off until tomorrow, as long as she doesn’t speak to anyone during that time, she ought to be fine.”

Even with a suspicious look and a sniff, she replied. “I’ll just take your word for it for now. So you’re really leaving?”

I nodded, “I am. And I’m sorry I have to leave on such short notice.”

“No,” she sniffed once more. “It’s understandable. You are going home after all. And don’t worry about me; I can still look for another substitute.” She blew her nose in a wad of tissues. “But I do appreciate for taking your time in teaching my foals for the day.”

“You’re quite welcome, Ms. Cherliee.”

_*_

A few hours later with the sun beginning to set, I was back in the Crystal Palace with Celestia, Cadence, and Twilight. Back in the room where all of this had begun.

“Once again, I’m terribly sorry about what our Discord has done,” Celestia said for the four-hundredth time. I know that’s she’s sorry for letting things getting completely out of hand, but I told her for the four-hundredth time that it’s not her fault.

“Just out of curiosity,” Cadence said getting my attention. “When you first came here, you said that I’m a ‘Principle’ in your world. May I ask a principle of what exactly?”

“Oh, with the Cadence I know, she’s the principle of a new elementary school that’s just reopened up. Uh, Crystal Elementary was it? Something like that. Anyway, I’m not exactly sure how good your other you is since I just try to pay attention to my job.”

She nodded. Twilight motioned her head towards the mirror. “I’ve got the portal open again so you should pass through with no problem.” I looked at the mirror, I didn’t see anything different about it, to me, and it still looked like a mirror. That was until I put my lion’s paw to the glass, and it looked like it just slipped right though!

“What the…” I craned my neck to the other side of the mirror, I put the claw through it but I didn’t see it come out from the other side.

“Okay, I have to admit,” I said, taking my bird claw out. “That is actually kinda cool.” Lewis Carroll, maybe you were onto something after all!

“So,” my royal boss said. “I believe this is goodbye on our part.”

“Eh, I suppose so. Before I go, I want to say two- no, three things here. First, is the other me gonna follow me home?”

“I already made precautions to make sure that doesn’t ever happen,” Twilight said with a smug grin.

“Second, I want to thank you for taking care of me while I was in a place I wasn’t quite familiar with. And three,” I pointed to Twilight. “You know Applebloom’s sister, do you? Apple…”

“Jack.”

“Thank you. Can you do me a favor? Keep an eye on Applebloom, just check if she’s okay now and then? Alright?”

Twilight nodded.

“Well, once again, thank you all.” And before I stepped through the looking glass, I gave a chuckle before saying: “And, in case you don’t see me again, good afternoon, good evening and goodnight.”

And with that, I stepped through the mirror and fell back into the kaleidoscope.

_*_

I came tumbling out of there like a bowling ball that missed all the pins. Once again, there was the dizziness that spins everything like I just got off a mad merry-go-round. But once things got into focus, I saw that I was back at the school. I looked down, “Hello, normal hands. Hello, normal legs. Hello, clothes…” I felt the rest of my head, “And hello, normal face.”

Standing up, I took noticed what time it was, the sun was beginning to set and there are still a few cars around, my boss’s car and a police call being among them.

I had a good idea where my boss might be, so I went up to her office, knocked and opened the door singing: “Celie, I’m home!”

There leaning against her desk with an officer nearby was Celestia, my human, boring haired boss. And the very first thing she did was to give me a good smack in the face.

“Ow.”

“Julius Author Disc, where on this planet have you been?!”

“Ouch.”

“You’ve been gone for days and there’s a student in the Police Station, so where have you been this whole time?”

Let’s see… One of my students had pushed me into a portal into an alternative universe where you are a horse with a horn and wings that you are the ruler over a kingdom of ponies, ran into myself, and had superpowers that turn all reality upside down.

“I had one of my episodes and I ended up in the countryside. Hitchhiked the way back and now I’m here.”

Sure it was a lie but at least it was believable. My boss facepalmed, “Disc, did you take your medicine then?”

“I thought I had...”

“Just… You know what, never mind, just make sure you come back to work tomorrow.”

“Yes, Ms. Boss.” I saluted the officer, “Sorry about the search party.”

“At least you’re here, now we can call it off.”

“Have a good evening.” And with that, I made my way out of the office.

As I strolled down the hallways, I couldn’t help but reflect on the last few days. Sure, now I have more ideas for paintings to last me a good few months now. And that I’ve learned something from my other self, that being that I can be so dense at times.

I spotted the room number 113, my classroom, I took out the key out of my pocket to see what happened to it. I opened it up and the room is disappointingly clean. Not another drop of paint on the floor since I’ve left.

As I sat down in my chair at my desk, my thoughts started to wonder, should I tell my students about my “hallucination” about being in a world of colorful ponies? What do I do now knowing Applebloom’s secret? And what do I do now that I don’t…

I looked down at my right hand, ready to snap.

“What if…” I muttered aloud. I looked around to check to see that I was alone. Perhaps there’s only one way to find out. I took a deep breath, closed my eyes and thought, ‘Well, here goes… something.’

Snap.

Author's Note:

And that's the end everyone.

Wow, this was quite the story and quite the thought experiment. I'm truly surprise that this story would do as well as it has. But like anything, this story has to come to an end.

Now, I think I might wanna take a break from writing stories on FIMFiction, now, please don't panic, I'm not gonna be gone. I'll still come by to reply to comments, read up stories and whatnot. And besides, soon I'll be in a position where I won't have proper internet for two weeks.

So I have ta ask, what did y'all think?
That is, if you don't mind.

Comments

[Philosophysics]

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!

(BASH HEADS)

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!

THE MASSES DEMAND A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!

FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FUMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BOOMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CHAOTIC MR. DISC!!!!!
TWO!!!!!!!!!!!

HOPEFULLY COMING OUT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(SING IT WITH ME!!!!!!!! ALL CAPS!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh yeah!

[Spiritofchaos227]

5237651 *singing* SEQUEL! OH SEQUEL! MR. D BECOMES A HERO! ( yeah ) PHUNCHES BAD GUYS IN THE FACE! ( yeah! ) GETTING ALL THEM HONEYS ( YEAH! ) Questioning his sanity because his magic is slowly turning his mind into that of a spirit of chaos! ( YE- Wait, what? )

[Grey Rebl]

5237651 I'm inclined to tell you that my brain couldn't possibly handle the mental "volume" and caused reality to break from itself. Now, there's nothing but silence in my head, a mental deafness as you will. It was quite peaceful, I must say.

[Philosophysics]

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Whew... Think that'll work?

Feel free to ask for help!

We're all here to support,(Nudges invisible complete stranger) right?

RIGHT!

[AnormalUnicornPony]

Nice ending.

[EternityFlame]

5237725
5237733

STILL NEEDS A SEQUEL AND BY THE BEARD OF CELESTIA... I um really hope you make a sequel... Um... If...if thats all right with you

[Spiritofchaos227]

5237733 Oh, Okay. But, I warn you, we are coming. We will not rest until we get a sequel. I have ideas that I would LOVE to share... This is not over. Mr. D will live!

[Philosophysics]

5237820

How about you just start off with him beginning to teach students with his new found powers?

Then later when there has been enough exposition have the government come and arrest him?

Much more later have the Mane Six over there attempt to contact there pony selves?

Then you get the team ups maybe?

Ooh! How about you get some Sentai Ranger action going on where the human version of Twilight Sparkle enters the scene!?

AND HAVE ALL THE MANE SIX(PONY) BECOME CHIBI VERSIONS OF THEMSELVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????

How's that?

[silent_stars]

I have to say, having read through some of your other work, your writing is improving. I DID like this story a lot, very funny, and I look forward to whatever it is you do next (and if it's not on this site, keep me posted, if you could ;>).

[CTCSHOTER77]

5237784

You guys wouldn't rest even for cookies?

[RatingTitan2]

I absolute love the ending here, purely fantastic.
And aside from the few errors, it was really a wonderful idea and you really added a different twist than i was expecting
This was enormously fun to read and I hope it was just as fun to write!!

[Spiritofchaos227]

5237844 No!... I can't eat most cookies anyway. Allergic to soy... Hates chocolate... Cookies don't have much to give me.

[AvidSeason]

If you don't make a Mr. Disc 2, I WILL MURDER ALL YOUR FAMILY!!! and then ill bake them into cupcakes and feed them to you.

Inner Pinkie be quite! Anyway I kind of voice her thoughts. Make another one! Please, it's too good to leave it like this.

[RazDelacroix]

5237934
CURSES! If only I had a working microphone! Still, a good read overall. Certainly highlights the difference between Spirit of Chaos and actual medical breakdown problems. Handled well I thought. And I cannot help but think that the snapping of the finger is when we the episode cuts to credits. Then, to our horror, the two Discords start MST3K'ing the credit names.

[Asdera3485]

5237889
Mr disc has pwers and discord tries to take over.

[Superbowl]

5237934 Does the video have to be public?

[lazyreader19]

I enjoyed the story. The final "Snap" at the end was a really good ending. Had some good impact. #feelsgoodman

And the story on the whole I enjoyed very much.
It was a fun read, and Mr. Disc's character is so friendly and a good example of Discord-powers being put to good use.

I'm definitely happy I fav'd this and followed it, and I'm glad I'm following you.

I am not going to beg for a sequel, since you ended this so well. But part of me hopes someone makes a youtube reading anyway now that it's been mentioned.

Also enjoy your break! Trust me, as my username will denote, I have much experience in not writing on this site. It has been pleasant so far.

[Superbowl]

5239337 Darn. I would've done it but I don't want to have any explicitly pony-related videos on my channel. Here's hoping someone else does it then.

[Mr Marshmallow]

That CLIFFHANGER!
AARGH!

[Rhulain]

I DONT WANNA GET OFF MR. DISC'S WILD RIDE! I DONT WANNA GET OFF MR. DISC'S WILD RIDE! I DONT WANNA GET OFF MR. DISC'S WILD RIDE! I DONT WANNA GET OFF MR. DISC'S WILD RIDE! I DONT WANNA GET OFF MR. DISC'S WILD RIDE!

[mad haxz]

WHERES THE SEQUELshizznat.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/0106.jpg

[Kovy]

And we still argue?

Huh, wow.

[Ariel Schnee]

"Snap."

Please let that do... something.

If it does...

He could become the human world's new God of Chaos then.^_^

[PinkiePieFox]

This story is possitivitly chaotic and amazing!

Chaotazing!

[winterdragon]

my reaction after reading this fic:

[ThEvErYdErPyBrOnY]

5382708 WHAT WAS THAT

[the_sane_maniac]

Brilliant. I really liked it.

Now then! Onto the sequel!

[PlaceHolder]

I spotted the room number 113

Ha.

[EpicShadowz]

Might want to change crystal elementary to the canon crystal prep.

[The Cryptic Cipher]

“Disc, did you took your medicine then?”

"take"

~T.CC

[CrackedInkWell]

6258829 thanks, I shall fix that immediately.

[Sunny Starscout]

Awwwww. Don't leave a cliffhanger. You hurt me dear

[Silver Inkwell]

“Well, once again, thank you all.” And before I stepped through the looking glass, I gave a chuckle before saying: “And, in case you don’t see me again, good afternoon, good evening and goodnight.”

[Silver Inkwell]

Snap.

Sequel Bait!!!