Abuse my love a thousand times, However hard I try, Heartbreaker; your time has come, Can't take your evil way ♫♫♫
One changeling is going to become a martyr for her entire race. How, you ask? Well, by becoming friends with ponies, of course!
She's doomed...
Don't expect very long chapters with this, as it's just a short set-up for what will be a much longer sequel.
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Has potential, and I want to see what you do with it.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
I read it. Happy?
But seriously, I'm looking forward to seeing more Tenna adventures.
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5093715 Thanks! I'll try to do my best and not disappoint!
This might be one of the best stories I've read recently. Love you, baby.
Looks interesing. I will return once more chapters are out. Or once I dont feel so tired.
Hmm, this looks interesting. I'm looking forward more, but I'm saving my Like to further chapters.
Oh, and that's a Dream Theater reference on the titles, right?
5095888 Heyyy, someone got it! Yeah, I decided to title the first actual chapter and the story after Dream Theater since Dream Theater tells stories through their music
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Yeah, I couldn't miss my second favorite band. And I really like the song, A Nightmare to Remember.
Though the chapter has nothing to do with the song.
5096704 Middy! I haven't heard from you in forever! We need to do something sometime.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5096704 My favorite song by them is probably Root of All Evil. And yeah, the main idea is that I picked out song titles that could be related to the chapters, like chapter four being "Party Hard".
Uhh. I can't see an alternative universe tag. Eons before they attack? Jesus, how old is Celestia to have witnessed the war AND Chrysalis' attack?
5099954 I only need to use an AU tag if the story is ignoring established canon. They have no set date of birth, therefore, I don't need to use one.
Also, an eon doesn't have to equal a billion years (assuming that's what you thought I meant). It can also mean a long and indefinite amount of time. I simply used it because I didn't feel like coming up with a set time.
Okay, wasn't expecting this xD
Can't say I don't like it though, because that would be a lie~ But, I will always wonder what the drumsticks were about.
And, I do have to say, it was weird/refreshing to see Tech and Tenna in a story where Tech isn't hurting himself, or there's some sexual tension between the two
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I don't know man, if my clone was in the room there would be some freaking sexual tension. Especially if my clone had just been questioned about her genitals.
chapter is a bit short but i still want to read more, i think i like it.
nice chapter, i really start to like the story, i think i would hate it if the story is over the moment she is friends with all the main six, but a sequel would solve that problem
5105625 I'll go ahead and ease your worries by saying that it's going to go on for longer than her meeting the main six
Really cool chqpter :D
Also, I ship Tech and Tenna now :3
Love the chapter! Applejack and Tenna have a cute dynamic going on <3
YES
She seems nice.
Nice chapter! :D
Whoa didn't see that one coming. I mean the Discord thing not the queen thing.
Whelp. I certainly didn't see that one coming. Nicely done~
I eagerly await the next book~
Discord? Really? I was half expecting Chrysalis to step out and cheerfully wave a hoof...
My first reaction is to say this will not end well for anyone. But if he's truly reformed then maybe... just maybe he will actually teach her how to be a Queen. I also fully expect her to gain a rather playfully precocious trait from Discord. The Princesses will no doubt keep tabs on her progress, even if it's merely indication that she's still alive.
Still, two changeling queens? Sounds like a recipe for civil war to me and ponies stuck squarely in the middle of what could be rather messy.
You've got a broken image in this chapter.
I'd certainly like to see more of Tenna in that much-mentioned second book. She's a little cutie and Discord as a teacher promises to be interesting.