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Trials


This is my contribution to all the witty and unique descriptions that everyone aside from me seemingly has on this damned site. You're welcome.


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Alone, a young timberwolf must try to survive in the wilderness. Survival above all else. That was what his mother taught him. But when he encounters 'monsters' that could apparently 'gobble him up in mere seconds', he begins to doubt everything he knows about the world.

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Oh dang, dawg, it's dat fic u were talkin bout. Yeeeeeeeeeeee buddy! :heart::heart::heart:

A timberwolf story? Don't get too many of those. Color me interested.

:fluttercry: oh my goodness so cute!!!!!:yay::fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry:

An interesting and very well-written concept that I've never seen done before. This story reminded me a lot of the old Jack London novels Call of the Wild and White Fang that I used to read all the time when I was little.
Great job, this is going to get featured, mark my words.
And such a sad, yet happy ending...
:( :)

Well written and laced with feeling a good read.

Almost a pity that it's a one-shot. I would have liked to read about Apple Bloom and her semi-domesticated timberwolf. :)

:fluttershysad: i really liked this story though :pinkiesad2:

A great fic, but it is sad what happened to the pup in the end... well, actually more bittersweet, but still sad.

4753470 I do wish the pup didn't die in the end, even though it does make the story have more feels.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Wow.

Just wow.

I love this story so much.

4753253 That's it exactly!

More!!!!

Add a new chapter!!!

4753836 if you look on the cover page, you'll see that it's complete, but I too wish there were more chapters:fluttershysad: Also, THIS MUST BE FEATURED!

Fuck me... That was beautiful. From the beginning to the end you had me riveted. The ending was bittersweet but god DAMN them feels. I honestly don't know how you don't have more upvotes and views, but you deserve them. I actually had tears at the end, the part with the leaves... Just soul crushing... I love and hate you for writing this. I give this story a 10/10.

Oh Gosh, oh gosh, I'm super sad now. I... I choose to disregard the bit where he died and imagine he got better and lived happily ever after. because sad is a no.

Dammit... You stole my feels from right under my nose:fluttercry::heart::heart:


Kudos to you, friend

>Ecocat<

Rest well Twiggy. :applecry:

There is no loyalty greater than a dog. :fluttercry:

Wow. This...this was a pretty powerful piece of fiction. I feel so bad for the little Timberwolf. A fine story, a fine story indeed. :pinkiesad2:


~ Super-Brony12

no voy a llorar soy un hombre
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a quien engaño es lo mas triste que he leido

Very, very good story. I'm not ashamed to admit you made me cry, and I know I am not the only one who finished reading this whit tears falling down his cheeks.

Reminds me of the style in which "White Fang" was written, although I read that in Spanish some 8 years ago, so it could be just me having a skewed memory.

So I saw the title and thought of this:

Then I made the mistake of reading this while the song was playing. I was sobbing for at least 5 minutes after.

I felt so many feels the feels couldn't handle me.

I give it 42/0

IGN gives it a 10/10 story of the year.

WHY!? Why did you make the poor Timberpup go? He was so young!

Why do I keep finding these glorious little one-shot stories which end so sadly?
What, do the authors of FimFiction have it out for my heartstrings or something? And right as I find a fiction about Timberwolves that I LIKE too.

... Goddammit, fave and like, you heart-hurting bastard you.

Also, we need more 'good' Timberwolf stories. Not enough of them about.

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I certainly agree. This story had a Jack Londonesque Call of the Wild/White Fang vibe to it.

Also, dat ending...
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Maybe Applejack could take a cutting off him and graft it to an existing sapling and grow him anew?
:ajsmug:

The boxes weren’t built—they were grown.

That's so sweet :twilightsmile: Then again he doesn't know anything about Ponies except to stay away from them

But why did he have to die :applecry:

Damn. :fluttercry: That was simply amazing.
Fave and like. :heart:

i WAS NOT PREPARED! :applecry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair:

This needs moar dude,.. Just... Buitiful...

:applecry: :pinkiesad2: :fluttercry: :raritydespair: :unsuresweetie: :ajsleepy: All my sadness!

Come on man it can't end like this!

Da feelz. I gotz them.:raritycry: sequel

...My body wasn't ready.

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IT'S ALRIGHT. THERE'S GONNA BE A SEQUEL. TWILACORN'S GONNA COME AND BRING HIM BACK TO LIFE AND EVERYONE'S GONNA LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER, RIGHT?! RIGHT?!
RIGHT!?!?

I thought i could handle it ... I couldnt ... Just one quick question tho ... Open ish ending, will there be a sequel?? I could see this become a great story about a bond between ponies and timberwolves

.......:fluttershysad: Not gonna cry.......:fluttershysad: It's just a story........:fluttercry: For god's sake I'm NOT gonna cry!............................:fluttercry::fluttercry: Screw it :fluttershbad::raritycry::raritydespair:
Such a cute story! I love it! Like and Favorite!

Annnd back on the feel train we go. :applecry:

Damn.

...

Damn...

That there's some harsh Feels man. Well played. Very well played.

The very first paragraph could've been broken up into the next couple, the description of the area instead being woven into the rest of the story rather than one big dump at the begining which hurt the "hook" of the story, otherwise though? I have no complaints, criticisms, or suggestions, solid story all around if not my favorite style of writing, it was well executed :heart:

Muß i' denn, muß i' denn
Zum Städtele hinaus,
Städtele hinaus
Und du mein Schatz bleibst hier...

Featured, 7/26/14, in case you didn't know. :twilightsmile:

This is the first really good Timberwolf-perspective fic I've seen... It fits well as a one-shot, but would you mind making more? Or does anybody have others to recommend?

(Went and read your other short, "My Own Creation". It was just as excellent.):pinkiehappy:

why do you make me feel these things

I loved this. This was awesome!

I just wished you'd focused a bit more on the timberwolf's canine traits, such as identifying a lot more things with smells. In this story, you barely mentioned scents at all. In addition I thought it'd have been a really nice touch to include what actions the timberwolf uses to communicate, particularly in the scene with Apple Bloom and the apples. In that scene, he focuses a lot on the actions Apple Bloom is doing, but you don't really describe what the timberwolf is doing. Is his tail wagging, are his ears raised or lowered, is he turning his head to point in a certain direction? You know, the kind of things that dogs do.

I love dogs, so this made for a really satisfying bittersweet tale.

*sniffle...* I-is the sto-ory over-r now? :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershbad: This story broke my heart and anyone who says it isn't heart-wrenching doen't have a heart

Dang it! Why'd you have to do that?!
Everything was fine until the ending!

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Why must it be sooooo sad :raritydespair::raritycry:

4758160 I want a second chapter covering AJ and AB's experience. A POV change, if you will.

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