wow man awesome

You have the making of an amazing author, you just need to work on your grammar.
Still good, though.
~TOOWC

o sleep. 'Man I just hope that those three try to kill me.'

I think you forgot to put in a 'Don't try to kill me,' small nitpick I know. On plus side Eris's half arsed explaination of Coco being there and futa makes sense for her, Anypony else I would have to call horse apples. Even with Sunset, and Llyod working funds are gonna dry up fast it's time for job hunting!

Suggestions most of which are going to be fairly obvious.

Twi - Librarian/researcher
Rarity - Jewelry store clerk
Dash - Gym worker
Shy/Bat - vetinary clinic/pet store (Especially if flutterbat still retains Shy's way with animals)
AJ - day laborer
Pinkie - Some place like chucky cheese...

Celestia - Paralegal (She's gonna have to learn some laws possibly falsify some documents Shimmer can help with that)
Luna - security
Moon - UFC fighter (She got some anger issues) possibly having a Crystal enslaving monarch join her

Cadence - Radio host
Gleaming - Security
Chryslis - Private investigator (gotta put those changeling skills to work ja?) or if your feeling cheeky stripper!

CMC, Babs, Spoon, tiara - college/Clerks which includes such jewels as Fast food, and gas station attendent,

Sure to get most of these jobs there gonna have to create some fake documents but, between the lot of them I can see it happening. Though AJ can't lie worth a shit which why she's gonna have to be day laborer. Bonus points for Pinkie if she just blurts the truth out and nobody believes her. all of the above are suggestions of course....

Lloyd got with AJ and RD after Rarity and Coco was through the portal. And Coco already had a cock before that. So that doesn't make sense about Eris giving Coco a cock while Lloyd was with AJ and RD.

5670534 According to the short description, Lloyd is 19 years old. Though I wonder how a 19-year-old already graduated college with an Architecture degree.

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Ah...so it does...I haven't read the description in so long and only thing I remembered was "CMC and such were 18"
And all the HiE (reversed on this but that's semantics...) fic's I read have the humans the same age as the mane 6. Either said as such by doc in hospital, or by twilight after "studying" the human...so I jumped the gun there...

(/ ._.)/ TO THE DELETE BUTTON!!!!

its getting to the point that hell fuck em all except celestia and luna and they'll be like why should we be left out and proceed to fuck the ever living shit outta him

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stayclassy

is silver spoon in love with Lloyd? you say Lloyd not sex cmc and you did not told me silver spoon in love?

Another great chapter! Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for the next chapter

That was a awesome read it just keeps getting better and better.it was a sweet and funny chapter.I can't wait to see what happens next between and to them all next I hope Silver joins to and it's awesome that the Main six are apart of the herd now and even more that they pregnant I can't wait to see who's next to join and get pregnant.

Lolicon confirmed

so, how thing going for your story and solve A World of Mares promble coming alone?

MORE MORE

are you gonna make it soon?

wow this story just got interesting is the next chapter almost out yet because i already love this fic

P.S.
check your grammar before publishing keep doing that and the ol, saying practice makes perfect will come to you

are you currently writing the next chapter to this because if you are i would love to see where this story goes

where is the new chapter?

5967207 perfect practice makes perfect,silly.^_^

6037830 u know it's kind of his own fault that he put his daughter there and should expect that as one result

first day of summer and i hope you had anything going on of your story

we want more chapters

you know something crossed my mind if twilight would end up pregnant then how would celestia, luna and spike would react

5670613 Ah, you're here, too? Neat.

when u make next chapter this is a great story im excited to read the new chapter and how gilda will react to silver spoon in his bed

wens next chapter up

6457872 i said "take cover" not "get ready to shoot" for if i learn is that never get in the way of a angry woman for you'll live better

i can see eventually Lloyd and his cousin will go to equestria with the girls even more so with them carrying his kids and i want to see the next chapter

6509473 *wakes up in the hospital*

Still worth it

6200996 Don't forget Cadance and GS when they that there lil Twilee is pregnant.I think Silvers in her first heat.I hope Molestia will show up soon I can't wait till she does .

6659364 hmmm go on lay it on me

Yeah ya know... I was gonna give this story a chance, but reading the comments, it's just way to ridiculous and stupid sounding for me. The MC sounds like your typical anime male who get's beat by the women for whatever reason and still laughs it off like it's nothing rather than having a spine and telling them to knock that shit off. WAY to many mares for any logical, sane male to ever actually handle. Four... maybe five tops but it sounds like the numbers way the hell up there now.

It sounds like the author took every single favorite pony of his and slapped them into the story and then self inserted to write out a fantasy. Look I don't want to be rude or harsh, you clearly have people that enjoy it and good for them and you, but I'm just giving this a pass because it's way to over the top and just.... yeah.

Question: Update?

Update progress?

I swear to god my feed is exploding with this story being added to every-single group I'm in. Human On Royalty, Macro, Motherhood is Magical, the boobs group. Does this story literally have everything!?

Ok, don't you think adding it to THIS many groups is a bit retarded? I literally went from 0-24 updates going from one chapter of a story to the next.

Guy, your proofreader has failed you big time.

I got 20 notifications for a generic anthro harem clopfic...
...why?

6729321 i trying to give a positive moment for it could of been worse for him

6592983 I am an adult

Any updates near the horizon?

Moarplease?this is my favorite story with this name.

Please make more this is a really good story.

I'm just gonna put this out there but did anyone notice the.....

420 likes on this story ,MLP PRO FTW

plz carry on

Please don't let this story be dead.

I have 1 question, is it dead. Please don't be.

could we please get an update on this story; or at the very least, a confirmation of its status, please?

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Roger