When 19 year old Lloyd Carter find 12 anthropomorphic ponies out in the park things get crazy. Let's just hope things don't end up more than he bargained for.
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wow i heard of rabbit in a hat but rabbit in the crotch. that never gets old.
5128506 My idea! And I loved every second of writing it.
Where did you get the story title picture?
Loyal fans of roommates, I have good news for you all! Many of you have been asking for it and now you shall have it. In the next chapter, Lloyd loses his virginity. That's right everyone, a clop scene!
Uh...oh...
I know right? Good luck.
5128519 Look for ss2sonic artwork.
sigh I'm going to guess who the four figures are. If I'm wrong with any of them just tell me.
Queen Chrysalis
Nightmare Moon
Silhouette (Female Sombra)
Trixie
5128889 The fourth is Chrysalis
5128921 So I was right in my guess as to who they all were?
really close my friend
5128982 Sorry the fourth is Nightmare Rarity
Love Eris introduction to the story.
5128995 Ok...Let see...ummm...Trixie?
This is remind me about this
I was kinda hoping that spike was going to use his dragon fire on them and send them to celestia
so...19 girls huh? ( Including the next 4) ..How do you keep up with them all?
wait i forgot the cmc and the two DT and SP REALLY 24 !?
FUCK I FORGOT BABS
I loved this chapter it had me cracking up.I can't wait to see what happens next between them all next and what happens next to them all.Lloyd is not getting any breaks any time soon.
5129866 Look at one of my earlier comments for this chapter if you want to know if Lloyd will get a break or not.
5128995 Wait, Nightmare Rarity, why? I prefer Trixie thank you.
5130293 Trixie stopped being evil after the alicorn amulet incident.
5130449 Oh yeah forgot about that. Oops.
5130471 Also, Sarachi requested Nightmare Rarity. That's why she's in it.
Four ponies who wanted to attack Equestria are being sucked onto Earth.
Welp. This is not going to end well.
Why am I not surprised on what happened to Blueblood? He seldom catches a break in a lot of stories like this.
Questions: When was Lloyd told that Eris was a draconequus or that she was Discord's daughter? I would also like to know if anyone bothered to explain to Gilda about what happened with Rainbow Dash and Applejack? Hell, did she sleep through the whole incident? And why didn't anypony, especially Diamond Tiara, not ask Discord to take them home?
I'm guessing the four villains are Queen Umbra, Queen Chrysalis, Nightmare Rarity, and Nightmare Moon.
Discord is best chaotic magician.
5132531 ...oh thank but someone already say this.
btw here one problem i want ask again.
Glimmer Shield marry cadence? This is possible?
i mean they are mare?
I don't know why I read this far into this story. The comments in the first couple chapters couldn't be more accurate. The rating for it makes no sense to me at all. I'm out.
Queen Umbra (female Sombra)
Queen Chrysalis
Trixie
. . . (can't come up with a female name for Tirek)
It can't be Nightmare Moon or Rarity, as they should be inside their respective hosts. By the time they get released, they'll have a crush on Loyd anyway.
lady tirek is fine
one thing it okay if the other mares have a feeling for Lloyd?
This reminds me of an ecchi or however you spell it manga that has to do with a lamia a centaur a harpy a mermaid slime girl arachne ogre zombie cyclopse shape shifter and a dullahan if my memory's correct
This is the manga I was talking about. Monster Musume No Iru Nichijou. Have fun and its NSFW but mostly because of nudity.
Next,next chapter tittle "the heat" will Lloyd survive
Want moar. My sides just went out the window. I love this keep it up.
5270756 I have two chapters finished but I need to wait on my editor.
And done... fu*k this!
Geeze, how many characters are you going to cram into this guys house? This is getting to be a bit too much but I'm still curious to read on.
Now the author could actually do something original and have it not be all a completely one-sided—
—Aaaaand it turns out to be another case of a completely one-sided Blueblood bashing.
Well, at least I can take this off my Read Later list.
what happen with the spirit girl that was feeding out of him?
5835102 in the attic? Idk he keeps adding so many new mares that he forgets to develop the ones he already have. 20 with Eris, 24 if those 4 figures are female and end up on earth.