When 19 year old Lloyd Carter find 12 anthropomorphic ponies out in the park things get crazy. Let's just hope things don't end up more than he bargained for.
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Huh... I was hoping Celestia and Luna was going to get it, too, but it was enjoyable overall.
Now if you will excuse me...(Gets up and tries to find towels to ease the triple-hemorrhaging from the ears, eyes and nose, since the tissues aren't working anymore.)
I love it all it was just as awesome as the last one maybe even better. I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens to them all next. And I hope he bangs Celestia and Luna soon please let it be soon.
this went from nice story to nice clop
stay classy
*reading...sex*
Brain:Dude! The level of horny is at critical level!
Soul:Fuck! Shut it down! Shut it all down!
Brain:I can't! Critical boner imminent! Dude, we can't hold it back! We can't resist! Let me at her, let me at her!
Soul:Jesus! Get a hold of yourself, brain! We can't-FUCK!!!
dang lloyd your a monster on the bed. wow thumbs up man
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Brain: ohhhh yessss!
Soul: Good god, calm yourself ma- carry on.
I like it when Nightmare Moon and Umbra and Eris got what was coming to them. Putting N.M. and Umbra under his control was good, show them who is the master.
*reading clop scenes*
brain: oh man this isnt good quick engage protocol sanctuary
soul: rodger
The issue I have with the clop is that it reads too much like a copy and paste modification, with the names of the mares being changed. Your basic formula is a blowjob and then vaginal sex. You do add some variation, such as anal, wingplay and hornplay, but the basic formula remains the same. It doesn't have the variation needed to really engage your readers, so I found myself skimming through a lot of the clop, because I knew the basic formula, and reading the same iterations over and over again isn't interesting or engaging.
Also, this really reads like a self-insert fantasy of fucking all of the waifus. There's little to no relationship building between the MC and the females under his roof. There's no real conflict, such as bitter feelings or jealousy that it isn't that mare's turn to be with the MC. Or looking at the complications and problems a herd of such a massive size like that could have.
I am starting to have this feeling right now that all the mares he's fucked right now will be pregnant
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LOLOLOLOL