When 19 year old Lloyd Carter find 12 anthropomorphic ponies out in the park things get crazy. Let's just hope things don't end up more than he bargained for.
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Disproportionate retribution, everyone.
Twilight changed?
This chapter was very confusing. A proofreader/editor is needed.
So Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Gleaming Shield and a random Ambassordor's daughter get teleported into Earth... Why do I get the feeling that Llyod is going to get punched in the face again.
First off
I just had to do it.Second this is was a funny chapter it had me LOTF I loved it all.And it looks like his harem just keeps getting bigger and this fic just keeps getting better and better.I can't wait to see what happens next between them all and what happens next to them all.
I really would have kicked them out rather than have them "forgive" me. They were lodging at his house; he gave them $1500 in clothes FOR FREE and they punch, threaten and humiliate him?
When I saw 'molecules' and 'rearranged' without reading, I knew it was Danny Phantom (would have put up the video too, but...)
I still cannot gget over 'Gleaming' Sheild
“Well he wanted to prove that he wasn’t a pervert so he has to spend the entire day as a girl.” Twilight boasted.
*facepalm* pony logic
Also my first thought when they separated was a line from another story. "So...... If we fucked would it be considered masturbation?
Let them live on the streets for a week, then see if they still are stupid enough to threaten their host...
Okay you know what, I hate them. In my position I would have already kicked them out. They want to talk about pervert with what they pulled. Than blame him for something he had no part of than make him switch genders, with no form of consent. Fuck you. He's been a saint, you've been nothing but trouble. You wanna go get vivisected by the military go right ahead, if not stop the crap you furry bitch hypocrites.
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Mutters* I wouldn't have because Im nice.....
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5195878 i completly agree
5195878 you and me both.
Rule 63 ray gun'd
Him: This has gone too far!
Me:... Where the fuck is my gun!
I wonder how much the government would pay for 12 magic anthropomorphic pony aliens from a different dimension which we somehow have a cartoon series about. At this point I would have already sold them out.
On a side note, don't think I overlooked how shamelessly fast your trying to add more characters to the story without any actual plot. I just decided to let it go since by now it's my fault for reading this far and being optimistic that it would get better. I blame both myself for being a completionist and the insane amount of boredom I have right now.
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So %*}+I ing called it and oh boy he is in deep shit right now
Ass Ahoy!
WoW...just wow. One of these stories where its apparently ok to blame the guy for every fault (not even his), punch him in the face, abuse him to"teach a lesson" and brand him pervert. Disregard the fact that he gave them his house to live in. The logic in this one is strong.
Ohh, and the guy accepts everything like the pussy he is written as.
This was funny when i was... maybe 14 or something. Oh well, lets see if it gets better
half dead that it i getting my shotgun!
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I’m honestly surprised he didn’t use his glare on all of them
This is absolutely terrible, but in a hilarious way. It's like Plan 9 from Outer Space.
You do realize what you just made the girls do was the same as a cop walking by a bank, seeing somebody run out of the bank yelling about somebody’s robbing the bank, and rather than going into the bank and seeing if they could find and arrest the person actually robbing the bank, they arrest the person telling them that somebody’s robbing the bank.