When 19 year old Lloyd Carter find 12 anthropomorphic ponies out in the park things get crazy. Let's just hope things don't end up more than he bargained for.
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This was a realy Good story in i stand and bow to you the wrighter
good chapter cant wait to see how many children he got out of that (twins or more??). that and how many will be colts or fillys.
im guessing more colts.. ur thoughts?
Oh shit. Its alive again
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So?
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Is he going to have anymore kids?
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At least tell me he has more sex.
Loved it. I loved the mix of drama and comedy in this story. Thats what pulls me into reading stories like this, clop or not.
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We don't have to ask for permission to use the same pictures of any stories. There aren't any rules about not having the same picture in a different story.
Why people criticize about something like this is beyond me and ridiculous.
awesome man good for Lloyd
well shit
stay classy
Awesome work on Umbras back story.
I picked up this story this afternoon and I could not put it down. I only found some minor grammatical and spelling errors, but I found one major error about the "character" of the protagonist. Read below please.
I only have one question about the second to last sentence.
Seriously look closely there is a major error here. Let me show you.
This sentence says he will only care about the children he has with Chrysalis. I think you meant to say this.
This means he will take responsibility for all the other children. I mean he had one with his "wife."
Edit: TRADE PLACES!
I'm already ready for the next chapter.
..................Lloyd.
I feel sad for you. impregnating 12 mares, having to be a father 12 times as good, have problems with all these mares, and they are not even in heat yet -_-, problems with having your sister and or girl friend in the other way, and still have Many other mares around.
I feel very gulity and sorry for you Lloyd. For your adventure is still far from over XD.
Yeah......seem i have issue about this again.
next chapter please
I loved this chapter it was sweet and funny. This story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what happens next between them all and to them all. And he got two alicorn's Nightmare moon still counts as one. Oh I hope Molestia shows up.
Uhhh wait,
Then
Small mistake. Can fix easily.
Great chapter dough.
that good story but how long till he rape mane 6, cmc, two princess, two bully and his cousin?
5478361 YOU GOT THAT RIGHT!
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5469912 No raping of any fillies please
this was awesome
Dude you really need a beta reader/ editor. Great story but fucking painful to read. Constantly mix up first/second/third point of view mid sentence. I can't tell who saying/thinking what I most chapters.
5513440 Finally. someone agreed this. but it can wait until he doing something.
It's funny how Jess scolds Lloyd about yelling and hitting those two for what they did out of anger when she did the exact same thing to him not to long ago and he didn't say anything to her about in this chapter....
10/10, that's some good fucking logice right there.
Physically impossible for a human male to.have a 17inch cock.even with magical mumbo jumbo the human heart would be unable to pump enpugh blood through the body with a dick that big.he would die from cardiac arrest after just one thrust
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Magic.