When 19 year old Lloyd Carter find 12 anthropomorphic ponies out in the park things get crazy. Let's just hope things don't end up more than he bargained for.
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Umm... hard to choose. How about... vampire Fluttershy, Nightmare moon, Queen Umbra, Rarity, R.D., A.J., Luna, Glimmering shield, Gilda, and Erie. I am just saying these characters because: 1. Who would try to stop him. 2. Totally random. 3. Ehh..Buck it. Please continue! Later!
5294508 OH COME ON! I meant to say Eris. sowwy.
5294508 I said that the Mane six, the CMC, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon weren't gonna be there. They'll be with Jessica at an amusement park. I made that perfectly clear.
TIME FOR CLOP!!!!! WOOHOOO!
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I say queen Umbar, Nightmare moon, Eris, Gilda, Celestia, Glimmering shield, cadence, AppleJewel, queen chrysalis and sunset shimmer
and to why I pick glimmering shield and cadence we haven't seen a lot them.
and let face it who doesn't what see a threesome with them.
5294748 Who's Umbar and I forgot chrysalis can't be in this one either since she's pregnant. She'll be asleep in the basement unaware of what happened above.
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I spell her name wrong I mean umbra my bad and of Chrysalis is out that Nightmare Rarity
all of the "dark" ones... flutterbat, ernis, umbera, nightmaremoon and rarity crissi...
Nightmare Moon, Eris, Gleaming Shield, Gilda, Flutterbat, Applejewel, Sunset Shimmer, Umbra, Lightning Dust, Trixie.
Well, it looks like Umbra is going to get the fucking of her life. I expect her to be a puddle of goo, physically and mentally. As for the ten lucky (or unlucky depending how you look at it) Queen Umbra is obvious. Eris because this is her fault to begin with. I would like the other eight to be Nightmare Moon, Nightmare Rarity, Gilda, Flutterbat, Whirlwind, and any combination of Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Gleaming Shield (though I think Cadence and Gleaming has to be a packaged deal.) I would like Jenny to spend some time with her three former roommates to get to know them better at some point (hopefully at the amusement park). She still needs to know what Trixie's and Sunset's life was like in Equestria and she hasn't really confronted them about their appearance before being revealed.
Nightmare Rarity, Queen Umbra, Nightmare Moon, Gilda, Lightning Dust, AppleJewel, Flutterbat, Eris, Sunset Shimmer, & Trixie Lulamoon. (Chrysalis already had her turn and she could probably use the time to get along with Princesses Luna and Celestia, and Gleaming Shield & Princess Cadence are married.)
Threesome with Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity.
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Eh heh heh. Sorry So instead of R.D., A.J., and Rarity, how about lightning dust, trixie, and nightmare rarity.
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Hmm. I'm thinking Applejewel, Flutterbat, Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Umbra, Nightmare Rarity, Moon, Trixie, Sunset, Gleaming and/or Lightning. That's 12 total mares I counted, leaving out the Mane Six, CMC (Babs as a Crusader), Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon and Jessica.
I don't think Eris or Gilda will be involved because they aren't necessarily "mares"...or they may be.
...Am I right?
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Cadence and Gleaming may be married, but I don't think they would pass up on having a good time with Lloyd.
i would love more please
Can I submit a human?
dang man awesome dude nice work
Celestia, Nightmare moon, Luna, Cadence, Flutterbat ,Nightmare rarity, Sunset, Apple Jewel, Glimmering, Trixie
Celestia, Cadence, Nightmare Moon, Nightmare Rarity, Flutterbat, Umbra, Luna, Lightning Dust, Whirlwind, & Sunset Shimmer. I think this is a perfect combo.
Umbra, he's poisoned. Eris, he finds out who provided the potions. Flutterbat, Apple Jewel, and Lightning Dust, when they try to pull him away from Eris. Nightmare Moon and Luna, when they try to sedate him. Celestia, when she tries to rescue her 'sisters'. Sunset Shimmer, she tries to rescue Tia. Nightmare Rarity, she sat back laughing at all the other mares.
Cadence and Gleaming show up to take him down with the 'Love shield of Repelling'.
i love this chapter .i loved getting to learn more about them all i cant wait to see what happen between them all next and what happens next to them all.
Celestia, Nightmare moon, Luna, Cadence, Glimmering, Flutterbat ,Nightmare rarity, Sunset Shimmer, Apple Jewel, ,Trixie for now and it should be a two patter and Umbra ,Whirlwind, Eris and Gilda later on on part two.
i would like to see Lloyd try that glare on my O.C. Draco. but he has three minds in his head his own, his insane, evil, psychotic side Drake and, the spirit of Nightmare Moon(different equestria and all)
have you watch new movie called equetria girls rainbow rock? there new villain call the dazziling i think after lemon chapter the dazziling be n lyold home
Eris
Umbra
Chrysalis (you can fuck when you're pregnant, just saying)
Eris
Eris
Eris
Eris
Eris
Eris
Eris
Also sorry for being late. Also also this chapter is filled with clichés too...... But I'll forgive you if there is Eris sex lol
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Dude, I can't do Eris several times.
5320996 Why not? Surely if he can do ten in a row he could probably go back to Eris and do her again, right? I mean if he has that kind of stamina he could probably go one more round XD
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If you paid attention to the box I left, I do one mare at a time. Eris and Umbra are automatic in this, so I need ten mares from the other viewers.
5321030 ........... Ssssshhhhh I've spent the last two days catching up on chapters, because I can't figure out the new email updates, and everything just kinda blurred together. I am sorry for incorrectly reading the rule thingys and I will try to pay more attention next time.
Updated list:
Whirlwind, Trixie, Sunset Shimmer, Luna, Gilda.
Is nightmare rarity actually on the show? I haven't seen most of season 4 yet but I've seen her on the interwebs so I didn't know if it's an actually character. Same with raricow.
i love this story, he takes the whole herding thing pretty well.
I could only stare at shock at the four that were standing before me. Four of the most dangerous people in Equestria were standing in my bathroom......how does he know that....and they just do it ok
sometimes i don't have a clue what's going on but i'm loving it all the time
the story transitions and to sudan.
1. gilda
2. nightmare moon
3. nightmare rarity
4. unbra
5. eris
6. flutterbat
7. sunset shimmer
8. cadence/ gleaming shield
9. luna
10. celestia
stay classy
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I haven't yet.
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The Dazzlings are three sirens that were banished to the Equestria Girls universe. Though, Sunset Shimmer is in this, I don't think this is supposed to be in that universe. It might be interesting to have them in as well but I'm not too sure about that. Though, that movie also showed just how far Sunset has come through the power of friends.
Dude, you need an editor. I could barely understand what you were trying to say most of the time. The story is good but damn, that grammar is just confusing.
How about telling her to shut the fuck up and let him explain? Jesus Christ man give the guy a damn spine.
"That's right Lloyd." I heard my cousin come down in her favorite attire whenever she was with me. Her height is 5 foot 3. She has bright red, elbow length hair. She wears her favorite blue shirt and jeans. Her breasts are a large C-cup and very perky. She has a nice well rounded ass. Her eyes are a deep green. And for some reason, she always wears a belt that has a bushy cat tail on it, all matched with her favorite tennis shoes. If it weren't for her features, I'd actually call her beautiful, but to me she was cute.
I cant help but get the thought out of my head that he actually measured her tits.
Thank You for making this.
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Uh oh, you guys know what this means, right? His mom is a ... cereal killer!
Your making this ship happen motherfucker xD