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SonicBlitz18


A rocking brony with a love for crossover and adventure. Currently part time in college

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Can I adopt it? Pretty please?

Comment posted by Anyne deleted Nov 3rd, 2014

In a world of only sentient female creatures

Let me stop you right there.

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Fuck you, that name is gold.

For the love of luna... if you haven't found an editer, do so immediately!

OMG MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Comment posted by Randominos deleted Nov 4th, 2014
Comment posted by Randominos deleted Nov 4th, 2014

Needs an editor, Needs an editor, Needs an editor, and NEEDS AN EDITOR! BAD! Other than that, Good laughs and lucky bastard:twilightangry2:

Not so bad, but not the best of your works, especially when compared with the protagonist of your other fics. Still, the premise is good.

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I'm not the original owner of the story. I need to give it a major rewrite.

I think this story is going to quick. Xd also I think of the possibilitty of what would happen if I was actually there right now..................oh god O_O

Yea..........you quickened this too fast XD

"yeah. If ONE male was in a world with JUST FEMALES. the guy would be going crazy just to NOT have sex with a mare. XD

They gasped again. "B-B-but their hasn't been a sentient male on over twelve-hundred years!" Twilight yelled.

The fuck? How do they reproduce?

She wrapped her arms around my torso, and hugged me tight, she rubbed her face on my neck and shoulder. "You feel good." Rainbow said.
"Uh thanks." I said, then felt her lick my neck.
"You taste good to."

:rainbowlaugh:
Taste the Rainbow Motherf*cker!

i like it but don't do that againe

5230422 that shall remain a mystery.

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I don't even know where to begin, from beginning to end I felt uncomfortable reading this. Like seriously. DID YOU HONESTLY PUT ANY EFFORT INTO THIS?! All I see is SEX, SEX, SEX, and most importantly... SEX. There is no build up to justify it. Also, the main characters name.... try using an actual real name next time! You remind me of the movie After Earth where one of the main characters is named Cypher Raige.

The main characters back story is cliche and is flat out bullshit. At least try to give him an interesting back story! Also, the 'oh look a male, they haven't existed for thousands of years, lets bang him!' is complete bullshit. Not including that he is a different species that they do not know. This has no logic what so ever, and the more I read about this character the more I want to shoot him in the dick then face.

There is no story to this, it's just another failed attempt - a very shitty one at that - of a clop story. I don't do clop and I could do better than this, and I don't even have a sex drive! I only read stories for the story itself. This.... this is just a sad display dude. If you try to revive this, you know what don't even try to revive this. Completely scrap the idea and let someone else do this, this is obviously not your expertise.

my only complaint is we don't know everyone's breast sizes

I think you forgot to put sex in the warnings....

You guys are idiots because if all of you he deleted the chapters I hope all of you meet a slow and painful death

Clop means sex you fucking idiot Jeeeez

hey this has some potential man keep it going!

5251437 I take my breasts VERY seriously :flutterrage:

look like he get many mare he want so can't wait to see what happen

don't wonder, just do your best i believe in you

Fuck it.

This may not be the best clop story in the world, but I'm having fun with it.

Fav.

I love it when Barb and a guy get in this kind of situations.

Meh.

I was not enthralled by this chapter nor did I read anything that would cause me to alter my current rating of this story. But I'll stick around for one more chapter. Maybe you'll suddenly get better at writing or something.

5265295 hey man take it easy on him. Not every writer is perfect, u know.:ajbemused:

that was great I can't wait until the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

haters cumming all over the comment section in this fic

love u broines <33333 :3

Doing good man keep it up And dont rush we can wait ya know try to make your next chapter 5,000 words you dont have to but you know a little challenge remember we can wait.

This kind of gag is overused, in so many different stories. Not hating, just saying I'll like to see something different than magically teleported to Equestria.

oh man this guy is so going to have a crazy ride in this world:rainbowlaugh:

:pinkiegasp:wow first sex with a nurse and then a chick magnet in a matter of seconds. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

well it was nice knowing him while it lasted

My first thought when I started reading this. He gonna get raped everyday lucky bastard.:pinkiehappy::heart::rainbowkiss:

you have a lot of spelling errors and grammer to fix other than that its good looking forward to more

well i'm looking forward to more





stay classy:moustache:

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