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StarSwirlOG


Got a couple stories out there and I'm working on adding more chapters.

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Don't mess with a mother child or you will get the fury of flames

Yay a momlestia and Spike type of story I like these very much also nice story got me into it :3 keep it up 😎

So a venom crossover? Interesting. :trixieshiftright:

Definetly interesting following story now can’t wait to see what happens

Eh, might give this a read later. Sounds really interesting and I nearly clicked to start reading but I saw the anthro tag and sadly I've never been a fan. Sucks to be me cause otherwise this sounds neat.

I’m a way this reminds me of shadow the hedgehog
On the account of being designed for a weapon came to a planet from a space ship and the captain sacrificing himself to protect the infant like Maria did for shadow

The first sentence is a big run-on sentence :twilightoops:

Can't wait for what comes next :3

"Captain Nightshade, Commander Spitfire," Celestia said in greeting as Thestral and Pegasi saluted her.

Spitfire is not that much older than Rainbow Dash and Twilight. She would still be a filly at this point in the timeline.

Really? Didn't know that I thought Spitfire was older. Ah well She'll just be older for this.

Spike is a mix of Venom, Spawn and the Grave Mind. It's why magic can hurt him.

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(Spike is a mix of Venom, Spawn and the Grave Mind. It's why magic can hurt him)
Is Spike going to be evil?

Wonder what will happen now

If I'm being honest, I got hooked after just reading the first chapter. This is a kick ass story and I can't wait for more chapters.

Did u get the argument between applejack and rainbow dash from Rouge Dimond or something?

Just curious. Also can't wait for more

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It’s your own story which means it’s your own timeline because by his logic twilight should also have not only been born but also like 5 years old (or the pony equivalent of a human 5 year old)

"Decoration a Miss Rarity Belle is in charge of that," Spike answered and pointed off into the distance at a tall purple and white building with the Equestrian flag fluttering in the breeze atop it. "In Town Hall," he continued adjusting his sunglasses on his face.

Me: I hope he at least isn't spell bound to rarity via a childish crush.

Author/future of the storyline: We will see what I choose it to be. That or I'll do it for entertainment.

What I think he means by That or l'll do it for entertainment: Qie girls going after spike, while spite is going after one girl who isn't intrested in him.

Me: Shit the original dumbstruck and spellbound goes on even when it isn't a little baby dragon.
Author/future of the storyline: drama entertains me, Also possible harem alert.

When is this great looking story going to be updated? I want to see what happens next?

Think you might return to this?

Please update this I absolutely want to read more! Excellent job

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