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I inspired someone? Nice. Let's have a look.
Friendly word of advice, you should link to that story. Please respond to that comment.
8877530
Oki Doki, I'll get the link. Thanks for the reminder!
its more like a rip off ;/
8892286
Call it what you like, pal. I'm still making it.
this still up and running?
9005017
Yeah, just working on a few side projects. I should post the next chapter by the end of next week.
9013292
Thank you very much!
Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn
thats.... WAY too short for a chapter
9031569
Sorry to disappoint, it is a two-parter though. I'll make the next one longer.
please update.
Eagerly awaiting an update
My most sincere apology's for not updating this story as of late, I've been busy with school. I'll try my best to get a new chapter out this weekend, sorry for the wait. :(
boooooo short chapter AND no teasing :<
LAAAAAAAAAAME
9269432
*looks at previous chapters* They're all rather short. How is this different from the norm for this story?
9269445
it’s not, but that’s why i complain i guess? the 1,000+ word chapters were a start, but to have chapters with less than 800 is just ridiculous... you see all these other stories that come out weekly or monthly with 8,000 word chapters... then there’s this, been what, a month or more since last upload and 800 words. i get how life problems or writers block can get some people, but when the story, with over 5 chapters, is being beaten in length by ONE CHAPTER in other stories length? i dunno if that’s lack of ideas or time? or if it’s just someone saying “alright, this is enough, upload.”
9269452
Your criticisms…are completely justified. I'm sorry this wasn't a longer chapter, and I'm sorry you didn't find what you were expecting. To be honest, I was up until 12 AM last night writing this, so if it seems a bit sucky, that's why.
Tell you what, I'll edit it today, and even add in a little teasing, (Just for you ;) ), and try my best to make the chapter more entertaining. Thank you for your criticism.
9269777
i enjoyed the chapter all the same, a bit of the story so far seems a bit rushed to put in to one chapter is all i’m saying, to fit a story to a project, you need time, space and a lot of thought to put into it. it’s not that i don’t like the story so far, it’s cool, it’s funny, it’s got it’s own romantic sitcom-esc feel to it with a slight bit of story progression each chapter, i think what needs to happen is like a chapter (or chapters) that’s just backgrounds about what the girls used to do/still do depending, and/or a full why and how they got there. obviously the whole where they’re gonna stay is picked up by Sunset, which is nice, but it’s a bit... disorienting to throw a character in without giving them a proper background.
This is a ripoff but it's better than the original, in my opinion.
Going to have it continued soon?
9349605
Yeah, soon.
More like a remastered version.
Spike is a marked man!!!
Spike punched a guy on Twilight's honor.
Cupcake?!?!?!
Perfect timing.
Target found.
Everyone has their limitations.
Hot-cha-cha-cha!!!!
Where's P2?
Make time to continue.
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Trust me, I'm trying.
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New chapter out, enjoy!
Glad to see you back, but Cliffhanger really!?!?!
Welp, Spike’s dead. Good story, though, bro.
9700757
Thank you, but don't hold your breath. We're not done yet.
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Glad to be back. *laughs in evil*
Spike respond! Spike! Spiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike!!!
9700877
You made me laugh really hard with that one. Thank you.
Come on Spike you're better than this. Don't die on us now boyo you have so many beautiful girls to seduce just by being the nice guy.
Spike, "Well what do you know, so do I."
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:D
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: D
That poor (lucky) boy is gonna die of a cracked pelvis and dehydration at this rate.
Hehehe looks like they're making mooves great chapter
Lots of Honey Traps be happening.