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Aleksandr Sherbet


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Well that was interesting. You should consider getting a pre-reader. Slow way the fuck down.

why didnt he cool to police or somting if found an alien baing i wold be freakd he take it like its an very day somting like thet happning

Hmm. I like the premise. Imma see how this goes. :twilightsmile:

2874251 If something like this happens you don't call police or the military. The military shows up, takes everything then threatens to kill you if you even whisper anything to anybody if they don't make you disappear outright. Standard protical.

2874251 then the cops would of taken them and the gov would dissect them du :rainbowderp:

2872670 i agree, though I wish I could add another like for your picture

gotta love creepy pastas lol.

Good story keep it up.

I haven't bought much food so I needed to go to the store to buy some more soon.

Should be "hadn't".
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That sounds like it came from personal experience. Please tell us more :twilightsheepish:

I read Abandoned by Disney this morning. Strange :twilightsheepish:

Well, let's just say that your minds can get a little messed up," I told them. It was the truth, because if they ever got to use the Internet, their minds might get corrupted.

Truer words have never been said.

Points for originality. No slendy.

2888712 yup three of my favorite creepypastas

my favorite creepy pastas is maria's revenge it's sad and bring back some bad memory's.......! Great read i have to go think :pinkiehappy:i1.ytimg.com/vi/5s7431ifS9w/hqdefault.jpg

2890400 those are my top three my forth and fifth are cupcakes and the my little pony theory

The story it just gets better !!!

Nice pacing, but slow down on the romance, its fine now, but a similar pacing later could become problematic.

2909876 sorry but the romance will be handled one at a time. One by one they'll fall for him right now sweetie likes him not in love him.

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This'll do. Carry on.

Is it just me or do we always somehow get off topic and start talking about creepy pastas. Don't forget jade. She's watching you from the bush, shrubs, tall grass, behind that tree or in your computer screen. She's watching and waiting for the time to strike.

2916244 dammit dude it's like 5:00 in the morning and the suns not out.

Can you please give us a picture of what they look like. So far the info given is confusing. You have an anthro tag, and said that thry had fur, but you didn't describe anything else thst shows them to be anthros such as there face, or if tbry have hooves for feet, and he immediately recognized them as girls, which kinda implies that they look more human then anthro. So please a picture, or more descriptions.

Still no real descrition of the supposed anthro ponies.

Sorry dude. I just can't sleep and that always happens besides from jade. Reading this story and all I can hear is random sounds and I don't like hearing sounds and not knowing what they are or where they are coming from. http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/A_Name_in_the_Darkness thats the story.

2916312 if you can find a picture of the CMC in their adult years send me the link to the picture. All I can find is one of their adult years but naked.

2916414 and they needed clothes, if they were normal they wouldn't :derpytongue2:

*Just read chapter three*
Hah, typical scootaloo, trying to sound hard.
*sees there is another chapter*
FUUUUUUUUUU-

Bro, y u no go into detail when they were watching movie it needs More DETAIL!!!

Yaaay another chapter:twilightsmile:

awesome chapter.

2970824 I know:) but it's still beter then nothing right?

547? You got off easy.

...I'm guessing most of those are from sweetie. :unsuresweetie:

UHm....what month is it in your story?

2981523 Awww.....If it was a month earlier, his sisters would be visiting on my b-day....Anyways....as it is, What's the current date?

2981551 his sister are coming on September 15 and its the 11th of September

2981561 ...hmn....well...hmn...Anything disastrous going to happen, sort of?

2981647 ok...nice eevee pic, by the by.

Where's the rest?

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