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Bro, you seriously need an editor and a proof-reader to help you out with your story's kinks!
Not bad story, I'll be looking forward to this.
Good story, but slow down the Romance! Make it believable, or in other words, allow the passage of time. Allow time for the characters to advance their relationship and for readers to see the stages of their relationship. Other than that, great job.
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Yeah don't worry this is just to plant the seed of loves, a bit strong but the message got across
WOOOHOOO, I like it, AWESOME!!!
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(Lighting Ace) LA: Hey Mark, some mares are asking for you on the front door, do I tell them to come in?
this entertains me keep up the good work
3764019 Glad you like.
On Hiatus? But why!?
3784365 I have too many things to do going on in life, but don't worry your pretty little head, I'll get right back on the story after I finish my other story, "Lost". Story wise, Lost is closer to the ending then Lovely Rarity and my other stories.
Equestria has porn guys... Now if you will excuse me Imma go fill out my subscription to playcolt.
thanks Big Mac ( maybe that is his porn name)
3852416 "thanks Big Mac (maybe that's his porn name)"
Yikes, I hope not. Everypony calls him that. Even Applebloom. Aaawkwaaard. . .
Uh... Doesn't he know that Spike has the hots for Rarity? If he doesn't, then he's in a world of hurt.
Je her nipples were starting to get hard? Did flutter shy was starting to be turn on? Je since like Rarity has a bit of a competition there
Oh boy...
Dis gon b gud
The authors note was the best I've ever read before! Keep up the good work!
Great chapter.
4046882 Thanks.
It was great! I'm really loving this story and loving what happened to Blueblood
4047621 Glad you're enjoying.
My hate for the stuck up prince is shown.
4057097 Yeah, a lot of fans seems to dislike Blue Blood. I'm not a big fan of the spoiled colt either. Love the short videos, that's a great touch. You get five moustaches for that.
Have a nice day, buddy.
I love this story honestly one of my favorites. But your killing me with this Markus acting clueless lol
4059374 Glad you like the story. We might change his 'Clueless-syndrome' on the next part, for a good reason.
Weird I always though Cadence would had be more like in the lines of Aphrodite, you know…the goddess of love and the one grace cupid with arrows as well as enchant them so they work to make people fell in love
Rarity modeling, Marcus complaining about the maids' revealing outfits, a conference with other species. This chapter is the best yet.
4147061 Glad you like it.
Oh so in dragon culture, its normal that the princess to kiss the forehead of ponies she likes…or she was just flirting with him?…ja maybe both, after all exotic and and being a gentlemen really attract hight class mares
4147768 Correct my good friend. I like to imagine dragons to be wise and a noble race most of the time. I somewhat kinda doubt Alicorns were the first rulers of Equestria sense reptiles were first to evolve. The Equine races simply evolved their abilities to manipulate magic to simply survive from the Dragon's strength and size when it came to hunting or fighting. After a while, they make a truths and live side by side. Simple as that.
4147768 And yes, the Princess of a mighty race likes Marcus.
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Interest, the mares I get it, with slow rate of males and he is a exotic species…that probably will change a bit when humans become more common in the planet, but a dragon princess? oh I can't wait for the flirty war begins
So far I really like this story. I can't wait for more.
4152004 Good to know, fellow reader.
Nicely made chapter, though it was a long wait, but worth it.
~OreoKookie
Uhhh... Vinyl got no brakes on her rape train?
The scenes where Marcus says his good byes are heartwarming. I got to admit that the scene with Vinyl was both hot and funny. BTW, who is James?
4252076 I very much agree with you on Vinyl's actions. I'm gonna have a lot of fun with her. I couldn't stop myself from smiling as I wrote the scene where he meets Vinyl.
Oh, and James is the author... basically me. Well, more of an extension of me. He has my personality but he's in between an Introvert and Extrovert, while I'm way in the deep end in being an Introvert. I don't speak much but as you can see, my mind does most of the speaking. It is both a Curse and a Blessing
4252034 NOPE!
I await the next chapter, sensing many touchy feely moments coming from Vinyl. o__O
the author's note is that a joke or a preview for next chapter?
4253112 A little bit of both.
Damn Vinyl, calm down! Other than that, this was an interesting chapter, sad and funny for me, good job!
~OreoKookie
4253679 Glad you enjoyed it.
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Glad you made it!
~OreoKookie
4253840 Not just me. Linghtingace is a huge help. Go on over to his homepage, thank him and pat him on the back. This story wouldn't be great without his ideas and support.
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Are you a fan of this kind of story? If o I got a good one for you...
~OreoKookie
4254719 Yeah, I like reading quite a bit.
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Try the story; Unshifting Lust, one of the best stories I've ever read.
~OreoKookie
Should we be expecting something to happen in the next chapter? Also, this was a nice addition. I loved the cute parts with Sweetie Belle.