"I was sure today was our last day of freedom, here in Canterlot. The majority of our forces were either too tired or injured to keep fighting, to keep this strange, new alien threat at bay from our walls. I was sure today was our last to fight for survival.
But thank my mother, we received aid from the visitors from the ocean of stars and space. I got to see another day with my subjects, guards, friends and sister. Now, if we can maintain the trust we have established with one another, we might win this war for the planet.
Till another time,
Princess Celestia."
Chapters (6)
Great story, cant wait for more!
Great story so far keep it up see you next chapter
Are you rewriting this story or just re-uploading it. I would like to see it go farther then it when before it is a good story..
6443318 Nah, I didn't re-write the whole story, I just changed a few minor things, is all. Nothing to worry about, bud.
6444120 Ok cool..
Lol did he use the ol shift-enter trick to make paragraphs?
Also, Good Job!
6455819 Probably.
Thanks.
Good job keep it up can't wait to see the next chapter
Great chapter very good continue on the great work.
I think this is the first I have read were the anthro ponies are taller then humans.
over all good chapter can't wait for the next one.
Umm im confused. did the humans start the war?
6464128 Nope.
I like how even though human have more advanced technology they can still get hurt, they are not at the god level of technology yet.
6482511 Like everything tech out there, equipment are not perfect and easy to break if handled incorrectly. Even the incredible Spartan Armor in HALO; one puncher in the suite and you're pretty much screwed if left out in space. Sam, Spartan 2, sacrificed himself because his armor was compromised by a shot from a Plasma Pistol while in a Covenant ship out in space with Master Chiefs' Blue Team.
The More You know!
Rip in PIeces the Changlings
I'm not usually one for human/anthro but this story is very enjoyable!
6508883 Glad to hear you're enjoying it than!
This certainly beautiful.
Another great chapter. I NEED MOAR FICTIONS LIKE THIS!!!
P.S. I look foward to more.
I can't help but notice some miss-used words in the story so far, such as suite and armory. suite is like a hotel room or things like that, and armory refers to a room/building used to store weapons. the words in those instances you should use is suit and armor
6515441 Thanks for the clarification! I can't trust myself with these kinds of things.
6515536 No problem man, and if you have any firearms related questions feel free to ask, what I don't know I can find out quick.
6515870 Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.
i wonder if Rarity is going to get a chewing out?
6522720 Oh, crap, I almost forgot about that. Thanks for the reminder.
HAH a little public embarrassment and several hours of verbal lashing it seems for Rarity
Are all the ponies antho's?
6574219 There's an Athro' Tag isn't there?
6574848 Mind explosion
Aside from a few minor miss-spellings like "lazar" instead of "laser" and "pestel" instead of "pistol", this story is enjoyable to far.^^
"Waste Land" instead of "Waist Land".
Also, I can shake of the feeling that I have read this before... but all chapters are marked as un-read... curious.
6579417 Might be because I took it down once before and raised it from the dead.
Looking forward this the next chapter.
i think the word "those" is missing from there
also... this chapter was FANTASTIC!
I can't wait for more
Man it's feels like a long time since there was an update I sure hope this story isn't being abandoned.
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Sorry for the long hiatus, I've been working on original stories and preparing for tourist season in my little town so those have been eating up a lot of my time.
kelly sounds an awful lot like a certain rabbit decal wearing spartan I know.
Did you perhaps take inspiration from halo to make this story?
great story more please!
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Yup.
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YAY!
hay do more and stop making us wait
