Twilight Sparkle caught and sent Pinkie Pie to the Ponyville Mental Hospital in hopes of bringing her party friend back, despite what other ponies say to her. On court day, she planned on getting her now stable friend out, but the said friend says otherwise.
An Unofficial 'sequel' to Cupcakes. A quick One-shot I thought up and wrote out of boredom. Now flood the comment's section with whatever you like to say, I need feedback! I need the stuff! (I don't really abuse drugs... just to let you know.)
Non-MLP-related-fanfictional story is right here. It's a little longer, different cast of characters but pretty much the same story.
Chapters (1)
am sads
4716878 It does have a "Sad" tag to it.
Sgt Sprinkles was on this site. I wonder what he would say to this story. Personally I like it.
Is this an unofficial Cupcakes sequel? Intrigued, but if so, not even gonna touch it.
4717046 Glad to hear.
4717067 No killing here, just ghostly corpses staring down at their confessed killer. A little touchy at the end.
Nice story. One thing I recommend:
Don't put 'insert action,' (insert action), or *insert action*'s in your story. It takes away from the overall quality. Instead, try something like, "Stop!" I cried out, sniffling. "P-please... stop." Memories of my happy rainbow maned friend started bombarding me.
Other than that, nice story. 
Gave a thumbs up.
Just a suggestion
4717126 Got it! I'll change it this instant.
Thanks for the suggestion.
4717115 ....... Noope.
4717172 Eh, I tried. Have a nice, evening though.
interesting. interesting indeed
i got nothing else to say
4717201 it sounds good, but Noope. You have a good evening as well my kind sir(?)
4717225 Thank you, good sir. Glad to hear you were interested in the short story.
4717239 Yes, I'm a gentleman
. But not always when my friends come by, I had to adapt a second mindset to survive their messy way of thinking most of the time, but they're good friends, nonetheless.
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If your in the right mindset, any friend is a true true friend. And every personality had its appropriate mindset.
4717326 Agreed.
At first I was all comfused
but then I was like omg its rainbow dash
. That was a nice read but don't read it while sitting in a dark room. I got kinda freaked out but great'story and I really like the end with u talking to dashie amd the grim reaper line 
4717848 Glad to hear you enjoyed.
And to be honest, I didn't know if this would be creepy
or not. I haven't written anything like this, so yeah, this is a first for me. Thanks for the comment too.
not bad (siting in a pitched black room) i LOVE death and horror before bed
4783732 Nightmares are heart-ponding fun in my opinion.
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now im in the mood for some CUPCAKES
Eh... Cop out ending... Not enough build up...
5125556 Eh. I need more experience in writing any 'scary' or 'creepy' stories. Have a nice day/night, though.
I am going to go curl up in a ball and cry now so excuse me.