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“Sarah, I have a confession to make: I...I...I have feelings for you. I like you more than just a model and a friend an...”

She cuts me off. “Friend?!? Who said we were friends?”

I was stunned upon hearing this. “...what?”

She opened her car door, got into the driver's seat, and starts up the engine. Before driving off, she rolls down her window and says, “You and I weren't friends to begin with. You were just a fan! You think after buying me all those gifts and being so nice to me on chat that I had feelings for you?!?”

Suddenly, all that good memories changed to bad as the tube played the moment that Sarah dumped me and left me in tears.

Guy's kind of a nut, isn't he?

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Sounds like the appropriate reaction to being rejected by some you love.

Now, the whole "excessive buying of gifts" is interesting, but sounds fairly normal otherwise.

Friday Night Smackdown[/] is on and I'm mis...Oh...

From this point on, you seem to have misplaced an italics tag somewhere.

Another great chapter by the way :twilightsmile:

- T

You magnificent bastard! You promised us Aloe/Spa Pony clop, then make us wait! I LOVE YOU.

~ARTL

“True, true. Say Frank, remember we have that Earth Brothers Gathering on Sunday at Barns and No Bell right?”

Earth Brothers Gathering on Sunday at Barns and No Bell right?”

Barns and No Bell

I'm done.:facehoof:

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Barns and No Bell is a reference to My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Micro Series Comic #1: Twilight Sparkle. Near the end of the issue, Twilight Sparkle and Spike go to a bookstore called Barns and No Bell, a store based on Barnes and Noble.

(nods approvingly) this interests me good job

I smell another not-gentlestallion... Or man, as it were. *Cracks hooves, prepares to go into Kick-Ass mode*

Frank Archer.

I didn't get it for a minute.
And "Blackburn". Did you get that name from The Wheel of Darkness?

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Never heard of The Wheel of Darkness. Blackburn was just a random name I thought of for the Daryl character.

what aloe might've said:
1.Frank would you kick Daryl's ass
2.Frank would you be my special somepony
3.Both 1 and 2
4.Frank would like to be with me on Hearts and Hooves Day
what i say: Daryl....fuck you

“ALOE!!!” Daryl yelled from the outside. “GET IN HERE, NOW!”

Well then, now i have a sudden urge to beat the living shit out of him. :twilightangry2:

2804072 I thought she was gonna ask if Frank would be Daryl's special somebody.

2835711 i don't think frank would be ok with that

This guy reminds me entirely too much of me. :facehoof:

Sarah did a one eighty in personality when she refused to acknowledge he was a friend. She seemed like a really nice girl. Really was, except for that 'out of nowhere' remark.

Also, GEEZ man. I'd be upset too, but that's a bit too far.

And the first thing he does when a winged alicorn shows up in his room is to try and shoot it...:twilightoops:

Quoting yugioh abridge: "You have problems, man."

2674502 I LOVE BARNES AND NOBLE! A pony equivalent is certainly awesome to behold. (I haven't been able to read that issue yet. Thanks for the tidbit.)

Good story thus far. Though, why only guys? No human women were sent to Equestria?

It seems Equestria has an apparent outbreak of 'jerkish boyfriends'. Whelp, you know what this calls for.

*grabs a pen and paper* Dear father of *said mare*. I'd like to inform you of your daughter's boyfriend's behavior. *grins evilly*

Yeah, I hate Valentines Day too. Reminds me that I'm still single. (Except over the years I've tried constantly to get a girl to like me....Not once has it happened so far..:ajbemused:)

*slow clap* Wise words Celestia. {Love the way Celestia interacted with him in this chapter. Spot on character actions.}

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It will be explain in a chapter or two on why there are only human males in Equestria and not females.

Poor frank get treated badly on earth, (except for his parent and little brother), but Sarah she is unforgiven.

Hardcore Pawn: Equestria!? Absolutely brilliant, color me hooked.:pinkiehappy:

WTF I'm gunna slap that bitch !!

MOAR!!!:flutterrage:
its to good!:raritydespair:

Really want Daryl to get his comeuppance soon, either way nice update.

Daryl rolls his eyes. “Whatever. Next time, there won't be an apology if I ever catch you with her again.”

I didn't say anything but went to grab my robe. I looked at Aloe and noticed her eyes were a bit watery like she was going to cry. I wanted to help her but I feel as though Daryl will murder me if I try.

“MOVE IT!!!” Daryl commanded at me

Me after reading that...
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Fuck you Daryl! FUCK! YOU!

....Why can't Celestia visit Daryl and sort him out? She visits the protagonist and I'm sure she visits the other humans SHE chose to bring into the world. Daryl must have a reason for this.....Or he's one of her hiccups. She does that now and again.:ajbemused:

God-motherfucking-damnit. Someone hold me back.

God Daryl is suck a dick to Aloe. :twilightangry2:

I wanna give Daryl a slap :ajbemused:

Looks like he's gonna stop holding back and go into...Detective mode! *Puts on a detective's hat, a coat and grabs a magnifying glass* Can't want to see the next chapter and get to the bottom of this! :ajsmug:

Still waiting to see Daryl's ass get beaten... That fucking bastard doesn't deserve kindness. TO HELL WITH HIM! :pinkiecrazy:

This needs some serious editing, but besides that good chapter.

I hate this kind of dialogue : "there's a serious problem in your family" ; "It's not true so stop that or I'm not your friend anymore" when we know that the protagonist is right...:ajbemused:

2918901:pinkiesick:maybe cuz men are more likely to commit suicide over getting dumped or losing a spouse. idk, just a guess:applejackunsure:

or maybe celestia just doesn't care to save the women:trollestia:

3269852 Read "Why was I chosen?" and you'll find out why Celestia only takes men and not women to Equestria.

Who wants to go with me and kick Daryls ass ??

This guy is scarily similar to me...even the personality! Also I'm lovin this story!

I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!! RRRRRAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daryl is a piece of SHIT! :flutterrage:

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK :raritydespair:

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