Je her nipples were starting to get hard? Did flutter shy was starting to be turn on? Je since like Rarity has a bit of a competition there

Oh boy...
Dis gon b gud

The authors note was the best I've ever read before! Keep up the good work!

For some reason, I thought of this clip, with Rarity's desire to have Fluttershy accompany her into the jacuzzi.

I'm trying to remember why I disliked this in the first place...

I think it was cause of the quick pace it was going, but besides that and some grammar issues...nothing is really wrong with it.

fuck it, I'm gonna take my dislike away and give it a try again.

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Thanks!

“Very.” I answered and opened my eyes to look at the mare, but immediately regretted so. I quickly closed my eyes as the image of the mare’s bulging chest nearly touched my face. Then again, I regretted closing my eyes as well because the image of nude Rarity popped up in my head. I clenched my eyes shut as I started feeling my joystick wanting to grow up. ‘ Stand down, Junior! I don’t need you at the moment! ’ I thought to try and calm myself down. ‘ Okay, just relax, Mark. Clear your mind and relax… just… relax… ’.

Hahahaha can't help himself 😁