This chapter was the funny and adorable. I enjoyed RD and Vinyl's jealousy towards Philamina and Fluttershy and their literal drooling over Marcus. Fluttershy and the cuddling were the cutest part of the chapter. Additionally, that kiss made me laugh especially since it made Vinyl, who is implied to be an experienced nymphomaniac, freeze in shock due being outperformed by Marcus. Still, I would have like it if RD, Rarity, or Fluttershy had shown discomfort/jealousy over the kiss, but it was still a great chapter. I cant wait for the next one.
Annnnnd…its out! Marcus won this round…Jaja! beat she didn't expect that final move right? Oh boy when Vinyl come back to her senses she will be so embarrass…or arouse
Jeje I can almost see it on my head what she will think when her brain finally reboot 'holy Celestia! That stallion REALLY know how to kiss!'
4610651 *wears a commentator outfit and has a mic in front of him* You know, Lightingace, I just don't see how she thought she could pull out a win here tonight. I mean, her performance was just dreadful. Not to mention, that suit almost knocked her out of this on it's own. *draws on a picture of Vinyl get kissed* Still, that strategic kiss was well placed and that was all she wrote!
4610964 Sorry for not writing out a little side story, but I'm not exactly a comedian. Most of these jokes and shenanigans I write are planned out, or on rare occasions, just pops into my head. Most ideas are from Lightingace, so big thanks for him. I have a hard time trying to make things a little funny with the story so you readers can be entertained. And I love doing that, but it's hard to make new jokes every week or two. The side joke from Part 3 took an hour to make while I was assisting at my old High School. I and my old Biology Teacher were talking about mature jokes, and so I made this.
What do you call an angry Rooster? A raging Cock.
I never showed him the joke, but it put a smile on my face for the whole day.
4611043 Defiantly, but you must admit she deliver us a good fight throw all the rounds, I mean the night of flirting and rain of sexual implications? Wow Marcus looks like he was corner on the round, beat, surrounded and ready to fall at any minute, but then he just surprise al of us with a BEAUTIFUL upper cut with that new outfit that took her of balance and when she was about to respond finish her with a well place sucker punch right of nowhere I telling you Panda, that was a perfect David vs Goliat battle of flirt right there. Do you think Vinyl will be up for a rematch?
4611072 Dude, you shouldn't be forgiven, you are the author of the story and you make it entertaining. If someone needs to be forgiven it's me, for I am a little needy when it comes to these stories. So, will you forgive me?
4611586 Well, if we all know that party mare like I think we do, there's no doubt about that. She'll be back in the game and better than before but I have to say, she better not bring just her A game but her A+ game. *shuffles papers* I also have to say, Fluttershy got a few surprise hits in this battle of the ages as well. I mean, if her looks weren't already too cute her reaction of cuddling to him closer? Simply, and heart stoppingly, adorable!
4613770 Of course, that lady enter to kill, and just to put the cheery on the cake that blush smile when awake, the green goblin say it and by god this lady is delivering, you always strike the heart first" papers hitting the floor
"Well that is pretty much for today folks but before we go, Mr Cyan? any final comments?" Approach the mic to the author
This chapter was the funny and adorable. I enjoyed RD and Vinyl's jealousy towards Philamina and Fluttershy and their literal drooling over Marcus. Fluttershy and the cuddling were the cutest part of the chapter. Additionally, that kiss made me laugh especially since it made Vinyl, who is implied to be an experienced nymphomaniac, freeze in shock due being outperformed by Marcus. Still, I would have like it if RD, Rarity, or Fluttershy had shown discomfort/jealousy over the kiss, but it was still a great chapter. I cant wait for the next one.
4610221 I thought the same thing about the kiss, but I might fix that in the next part... whenever I finish it anyways. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I really liked the big group cuddle in the middle there. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4610269 Who doesn't like group cuddling?
Annnnnd…its out! Marcus won this round…Jaja! beat she didn't expect that final move right? Oh boy when Vinyl come back to her senses she will be so embarrass…or arouse
Jeje I can almost see it on my head what she will think when her brain finally reboot 'holy Celestia! That stallion REALLY know how to kiss!'
'Sorry, got nothin' is a lie!
This was wonderful, but on the short side. Great job on the reaction for vinyl, made my da- erm, night!
~OreoKookie
4610651
*wears a commentator outfit and has a mic in front of him* You know, Lightingace, I just don't see how she thought she could pull out a win here tonight. I mean, her performance was just dreadful. Not to mention, that suit almost knocked her out of this on it's own. *draws on a picture of Vinyl get kissed* Still, that strategic kiss was well placed and that was all she wrote!
4610964 Sorry for not writing out a little side story, but I'm not exactly a comedian. Most of these jokes and shenanigans I write are planned out, or on rare occasions, just pops into my head. Most ideas are from Lightingace, so big thanks for him. I have a hard time trying to make things a little funny with the story so you readers can be entertained. And I love doing that, but it's hard to make new jokes every week or two.
The side joke from Part 3 took an hour to make while I was assisting at my old High School. I and my old Biology Teacher were talking about mature jokes, and so I made this.
I never showed him the joke, but it put a smile on my face for the whole day.
I hope you can forgive me.
4611043
Wait, are you talking about Vinyl or the Author?
I hope that this diplomacy part doesn't get too much seriousness in it.
I feel that if the human world gets too much serious attention in this fic, it will make enjoying the romantic parts more difficult.
Anyways, I must now go take a year's worth of insulin in order to stay lucid from all this diabeetus
4611139 I'll try not to make too serious. I might fail, but I'll try.
4611088 Mayhaps. Also, that's chapter was awesome!
4611163 What? I don't get it. English is my second language and not too good with strange, cryptic wordings some times.
4611173 Sorry, yes I was talking about the story's main character. Mayhaps is a kinda fun/dumb way to say maybe and perhaps.
4611250 Ooooooh! Okay, I get it. Like Frienemy and what not. Sorry, I'm still pretty old school.
4611292 Eh, it's fine. You're writing skills and English is better than many that have English as their first language.
4611295 GASP! Thank you!
4611043
Defiantly, but you must admit she deliver us a good fight throw all the rounds, I mean the night of flirting and rain of sexual implications? Wow Marcus looks like he was corner on the round, beat, surrounded and ready to fall at any minute, but then he just surprise al of us with a BEAUTIFUL upper cut with that new outfit that took her of balance and when she was about to respond finish her with a well place sucker punch right of nowhere I telling you Panda, that was a perfect David vs Goliat battle of flirt right there. Do you think Vinyl will be up for a rematch?
4544843
Thanks I try to help how ever I can, glad to know you like the ideas
4611072
Dude, you shouldn't be forgiven, you are the author of the story and you make it entertaining. If someone needs to be forgiven it's me, for I am a little needy when it comes to these stories. So, will you forgive me?
~OreoKookie
4611805 Meh!
Nah, I'm just kidding. You're 200% forgiven in every way possible. Now HUG mah!
4611832
Nomming.
~OreoKookie
4611586 Well, if we all know that party mare like I think we do, there's no doubt about that. She'll be back in the game and better than before but I have to say, she better not bring just her A game but her A+ game. *shuffles papers* I also have to say, Fluttershy got a few surprise hits in this battle of the ages as well. I mean, if her looks weren't already too cute her reaction of cuddling to him closer? Simply, and heart stoppingly, adorable!
4613770
Of course, that lady enter to kill, and just to put the cheery on the cake that blush smile when awake, the green goblin say it and by god this lady is delivering, you always strike the heart first" papers hitting the floor
"Well that is pretty much for today folks but before we go, Mr Cyan? any final comments?" Approach the mic to the author
4616045 Glad to hear.
4775138 Oh dear, good Lord, that really made my Day!
i hope the next chapter comes out soon this is a funny and great story
That part was funny I think you broke her. I can't wait to read more.