Glad to see this story is back. Marcus really is fortunate to hook up with Rarity and to kiss RD -Fluttershy and Sweetie only got friendly pecks but it's okay- and Celestia. Let's see how he manages to deal with his people. Thanks for the chapter.
And…Marcus strike again we need to give Celestia credit, she manage to hold back, but that tongue part…maybe she want it to last just a bit longer. Any final thoughts anybody?
4990340 I feel that this chapter could use some more conflict, whether it's Rarity getting jealous of the other mares for getting all affectionate with Marcus, or them being selfish in not wanting to let Marcus return to the human realm.
Also, 'take us to our leader' really? I know that Marcus has had no training towards any functions as an Ambassador, but that was just lacking in common sense, especially if he's trying to forge intergalactic/ interdimensional relationships on behalf of the ponies. Which brings up another point, if you decide to leave this part alone, Celestia should have at least called him on it. He might be the native, but she has thousands of years of political experience and should have at least informed him of how ill advised such a request is.
Also, I'd like to see more relationship building. Show us Marcus playing with Sweetie Belle, like an older brother might, especially when he thinks no one is looking. Show us Marcus interacting with ponies in the marketplace, or cooking for the three of them, or being confronted by Rarity for leaving dirty clothes on the floor, or waiting too long to wash aforementioned clothes. But my main point is that there needs to be some kind of conflict and relationship building.
5029801 It started out as a random doodle, but turned into something else entirely. And it's not really 'New' either, I started drawing it around the beginning of last month, but decided to finish it last night.
5030518 I've seen some of your other anthro ponies on your DeviantArt account. Are you going to do artwork for the rest of the Mane 6, 'cause I'd really like to see them in your style.
5030973 I kind of wish to see how the scene on the spa where Fluttershy hugs him, I know I wouldn't be able to see it because its mature on nature but hey I could search for it on deviant art too.
I just saw the new cover art and I go to say that it's the best cover yet. Sweetie Belle looks adorable on top of Marcus and it's really sweet to see Rarity and Fluttershy cuddling Marcus at the sides. Excellent job. BTW, assuming that the cover means something, does Fluttershy has romantic feelings for Marcus that she will express later in the story?
We don’t need more filthy human hands to make this paradise a waste land.
*Rolls eyes*
Yeah, this is just getting ridiculous. "Oh, humans are so horrible and mean. Uh, except of course, for me. I'm a special snowflake after all, and if the rest of humanity was like me, then surely the world would be a better place."
This guy shouldn't be the ambassador of anything if this is the idiotic attitude he's going to have.
5808460 Yknow, given our tendency to fuck things up on a massive scale BEFORE making them better, and conversely make good things that turn corrupted, human influence hasn't made the paradise that the sisters have. At all. I say let the sisters have whatever control over immigration they want, no matter how racist. Persons are genius. People are stupid.
Well then! This is going to be interesting...
There better not be anything funny happening on Marcus' side though!
Princess is waiting for your presents.” presents should be presence.
4990335 Oh crap, I didn't caught. Thanks.
Glad to see this story is back. Marcus really is fortunate to hook up with Rarity and to kiss RD -Fluttershy and Sweetie only got friendly pecks but it's okay- and Celestia. Let's see how he manages to deal with his people. Thanks for the chapter.
And…Marcus strike again we need to give Celestia credit, she manage to hold back, but that tongue part…maybe she want it to last just a bit longer.
Any final thoughts anybody?
4990340 no prob normally I can easily ignore those kind of errors but for some reason that screws with me.
Yay! Finally an update! Don't keep us waiting for another chapter so long next time! We demand more!
This was cute and kinda funny.
4990340 I feel that this chapter could use some more conflict, whether it's Rarity getting jealous of the other mares for getting all affectionate with Marcus, or them being selfish in not wanting to let Marcus return to the human realm.
Also, 'take us to our leader' really? I know that Marcus has had no training towards any functions as an Ambassador, but that was just lacking in common sense, especially if he's trying to forge intergalactic/ interdimensional relationships on behalf of the ponies. Which brings up another point, if you decide to leave this part alone, Celestia should have at least called him on it. He might be the native, but she has thousands of years of political experience and should have at least informed him of how ill advised such a request is.
Also, I'd like to see more relationship building. Show us Marcus playing with Sweetie Belle, like an older brother might, especially when he thinks no one is looking. Show us Marcus interacting with ponies in the marketplace, or cooking for the three of them, or being confronted by Rarity for leaving dirty clothes on the floor, or waiting too long to wash aforementioned clothes. But my main point is that there needs to be some kind of conflict and relationship building.
Peace,
AuthorGenesis
4995480 Will do!
Love that new cover art! So much HNNNGH!!
5029801 It started out as a random doodle, but turned into something else entirely. And it's not really 'New' either, I started drawing it around the beginning of last month, but decided to finish it last night.
5030518 I've seen some of your other anthro ponies on your DeviantArt account. Are you going to do artwork for the rest of the Mane 6, 'cause I'd really like to see them in your style.
5030693 I guess I can try.
5030973
I kind of wish to see how the scene on the spa where Fluttershy hugs him, I know I wouldn't be able to see it because its mature on nature but hey I could search for it on deviant art too.
I love part nine! Also, now I'm kinda wanting to write a story based off after the passage between the two opens.
5057558 Good to hear you enjoyed it. And by all means, write your heart.
I just saw the new cover art and I go to say that it's the best cover yet. Sweetie Belle looks adorable on top of Marcus and it's really sweet to see Rarity and Fluttershy cuddling Marcus at the sides. Excellent job. BTW, assuming that the cover means something, does Fluttershy has romantic feelings for Marcus that she will express later in the story?
5062150 You'll just have to wait and see what happens in the future chapters between the three characters.
*Rolls eyes*
Yeah, this is just getting ridiculous. "Oh, humans are so horrible and mean. Uh, except of course, for me. I'm a special snowflake after all, and if the rest of humanity was like me, then surely the world would be a better place."
This guy shouldn't be the ambassador of anything if this is the idiotic attitude he's going to have.
5808460
Yknow, given our tendency to fuck things up on a massive scale BEFORE making them better, and conversely make good things that turn corrupted, human influence hasn't made the paradise that the sisters have. At all. I say let the sisters have whatever control over immigration they want, no matter how racist.
Persons are genius.
People are stupid.