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The premise of the story looks good, but what i am wondering why he doesnt have resentments againist said 'people ponies'.
They killed almost 90% of the human race, cold blooded genocide without a known plan or somethi and he is going foward to go and befriend them.
I dunno, for a comedy it started pretty bad.
Now i will read the rest of the story.
I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapters! Keep it up! =)
3706240 Nah! He isn't the person to hold a grudge about something that has nothing to do with the current generation of ponies. Plus, the only negative feelings he has are like for the ruler who exterminated his race... cough Celestia, cough.... And that is Fear! Fear of that princess who commited the genocide! He does not blame the ponies for slaughtering his people because he knows that a lot of injustices happen thanks to foolish decisions of foolish leaders.
Btw thanks for pointing that out. I was already planning on Adam having a big freak out scene once he is told about Celestia, puts two and two together and realises that she is THE SAME princess that killed off most of his people. But now, I'll also add that whole thing I told you about first.
I need more!
Ach! I HATE thin waists! I like a woman who's got a belly. But at least I like the huge racks, wide hips, and large booty present in the story. Oh well, at least I only read this for the story, and only fap to pictures and videos. Nice story so far by the way. I can't wait for future chapters.
Your OC is the luckiest bastard in the wolrd. And thats coming from me: A guy who hates OCs with a passion.
Hmmm 1000 years ago? the year of Nightmare Moon? Are you sure it was Celestia and not Luna on her madness? or perhaps Chrysalis disguise as her so they will cripple their friendship and she will have more land to conquer more easily using the sister to do her dirty job? because that was a very unstable age, and I really can't picture Celestia like a crazy bitch that just go into killing spring.
Oh I imagine her reaction, seeing his face of complete fear, of helpless, of him just want to live and seeing her only make him scare so much. Celestia will now know what her sister fells and it will have the mother of all guilts in one single shoot.
Je I can't wait how she will try to move earth and sky to try to make Adam stop fearing her.
P.S: Hey wouldn't be funny if now Adam its scare of Celestia but admires and respect Luna?
3707570 Hahahahahahahah! Yeah he is! But know that he'll only get the love... and lust
... of one of these mares. The rest will be free for him to check out, LOL!
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3708100 Yeah! That's my biggest dilemma! I don't know exactly how to make this go down. I've got an idea or two about how things might've went but I'm still not sure... I was hoping somebody could help me out with this. Would you be willing to?
This would be an epic fanservice anime.
3710189 Hah! Yeah, except all the anime humor and nonsense is substituted with American Cartoon humor and nonsense! LOL!
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Ok
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If I throw copies of Atlantic Rim at your house would I be helping?
this is off to a rocky start
but ill reserve my judgement til the next 2 chaps, otherwise its pretty good so far
3713350 I have no idea, what that book is...
So I don't get your reference.
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It's the shameless rip off of Pacific Rim. Seriously. The main robot looks EXACTLY LIKE Gipsy Danger.
T.T It's so...beautiful. I need more.
your character is now albino thus sayeth the me
3717429 He hath spoken! Albino he shall be!
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3717429 Well by fictional rules, the author has last say. And I sayeth, his skin is more like this man's:
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Unless you prefer him Albino. You can imagine him like that if you wish then. I didn't specify his exact skin hue after all.
No, dude. Just no.
Let me show you a picture.
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This picture is a comparison of two women, who both have fifteen percent body fat.
The woman on the right has low muscle mass. The woman on the left has high muscle mass.
Now, you're telling me that you want Applejack to have very high muscle mass, and less than one percent body fat?
Do you have any idea what that would look like?
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Can anyone give me a fuck no?
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Well, the reason I said it, is because violet is an eye color that a humans can have.
It's just only found in albinos, and very rare besides that.
The albino theory is complimented by him having blonde hair.
3720040 Well, okay, I made a mistake. I acknowledge it. If you're so concerned, AJ, the way I imagined her (and drew her; it's only a sketch for now), looks pretty much like this:
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I would give her twenty or twenty-five percent, if that's what you're going for.
3720059 Still, you can imagine him the way you like. I wasn't that specific on purpose! It's a fictional story.
3720068 Well, okay, or I could simply rework it and remove the fat from the equasion of AJ's description. LOL
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Incidentally...
Warning: It's a wee bit soul-stary.
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Bam! Violet eyes.
Just in case you wanted to know what they look like.
3720078 Yeah, but in my story I did a comparison between Twilight's and Adam's:
I was basically going for the Light violet color, near purple, like Twilight's since there are no rules in a fictional story that say that human eyes have to look just like in real life.
Oh, and I just tweaked AJ's description. Go and check it out and tell me what you think.
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It's definitely much better now.
While we're on the subject of possible changes, I'd like to make two more suggestions.
The first, is to cut out the cup sizes, or even better, reduce them.
As it is, the breast sizes you're implying are like this. And, well... That's just ridiculous. Can you imagine what life would be like, if you had to lug those suckers around, all day every day? Kinda makes you feel sorry for well-endowed women...
I know that the point was to emphasize that the pony mares are sexier than human women, but you don't need to go that far. Just regular ol' DD cups are rare for human women.
The second is just a personal potpourri addition.
In the next chapter, have Pinkie or maybe Fluttershy (someone who's likely to notice the difference) discover that humans have one more finger than ponies do. Make sure it's in the next chapter, because it's not really very noticeable.
I don't know why I like four fingered antros so much, I just do. Maybe it's because every creature on the show that has hands only has four digits?
Anyway, I wouldn't blame you for not doing that, but your story would win mad respect from me, and I would love you forever.
3720145 Well, maybe I could reduce Twilight's breasts, maybe Fluttershy's too. It's also good that I haven't drawn them on my sketch list yet. Also, I like this 4 finger, 5 finger idea. Maybe I'd give it a go. ^^
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Do you have the sketches online?
I'd like to see them.
3720163 Well, not yet but I could upload them on my dropbox account in less than 10 minutes. I've got Pinkie and AJ down (Minus AJ's tail).
3720163 I'll PM you a link and soon as I can.
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I would suggest that the trouble with NMM would be the only reason that any humans managed to escape at all.
I mean, an entire species of mages VS warriors with swords? Kinda not really fair at all.
Pls get the next chapter done
I like it, AWESOME!!!
Instant gem
Keep writing. I'd really like to see where this goes. Also, even if it has to be a 3-way relationship, I'm really hoping he end up with Twilight.
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next.
Jesus how long was it from the last chapter?
Nonetheless thank you for updating.
I've got a major problem with the sizes you are terming for the girls' figures, but otherwise it's a quite well written story. A K-cup is a size which looks very large on women with rather large stomachs, an "hourglass figure" as you've put it can't easily work with anything larger than a DD, maybe an F-cup. also thin people to average people can only actually move with up to around an F. I had a few other glaring issues, but I cannot recall them at the moment.
4043759 Well that problem is an easy fix! Just forget about the mentioned cupsizes and imagine the mares' breasts the way you like 'em! LOL!
I'm glad that this story came up with a new update. I read the first chapter when it came up but couldn't comment until now. This is shaping up to be a great story. I cant wait to figure out how the romantic triangle you described in the description of the story will develop. Keep up the good work.
I liked this cgapter but you made feel hungry with that food images man, thar not cool
Your description on women these days, is spot on you wise mother focher you. This was an awesome chapter.
Are you still going to develop that of Adam falling for Twilight and ending on a love triangle? Or that is going to change too? Also later on, would you show how he slowly win over the mares? maybe starting with Shy or Rarity? on the next 2 chapters?
Keep up the good work I can't wait to see how this all turns out. By the way will this be a one on one romance or a herd fic?
Cool can't wait for more
4044326 Then go and get yourself som-a that food! LOL!
4044959 The description says Love Triangle man.
The human is in love with one pony babe, another pony babe is in love with the human, neither one of them admits their feelings for a long time.