The cider. Something many ponies love and would do anything to put their hooves on it. When three well-known cider lovers team up to get to the whole barn of it, nothing can stop them.
Well, almost nothing.
Reading by Rennoc215
🇺🇦Russian translation🇺🇦 by FoxcubRandy
Rated Teen/Sex for innuendos. Mostly.
Nice little story.
Brilliant. From the beggining to the end.
You have a way with words. This is comedic gold my friend.
I swear I kept on expecting them to get drunk and have a bigger reason for the Sex warning to be on.
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Don't give me ideas
I see a few minor grammatical errors here and there. I shall present them in reverse order to make it scan better:
Extra 'how' here.
While 'an' is appropriate right before a vowel sound, the u in 'unicorn' is palatalized like the semivowel 'y', so the correct form is 'a unicorn' not 'an unicorn.'
Left an extra 'my' here.
There should be an 'a' before 'bag', 'flank' should be plural, and 'pony's' doesn't need to be possessive.
Beyond that, this 'twas an entertaining story. Cider's on me!
Ew AppleDash.
Upboated.
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Thanks, it's fixed now
Not bad, Samey. I laughed the whole way through. Dirty mind went into overdrive.
That was great. I loved all the banter and whatnot. A fun story.
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Thank you.
Well, it's been forever, but I finally got a nice, quiet period of time to myself. I decided that I really needed to get back to you all, so here you go!
I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed your story. Take this bonus thumb and star with the vid!
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Hmm, I forgot about that too... Thanks
*Grins* Nicely done. Bravo.
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Beautiful mayhem.
This is probably one of the funnest takes I've seen with this cast of characters. Delightful takes on their personalities. Well earned up and fav
Now this was one funny little story!
Huzzah! Back to the Future reference!
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6187946 Knew I'd heard that phrase before somewhere.
Interesting how Vinyl is portrayed as being quite skinny in this story, and Berry being "thicc", but I find it fascinating. Also, I feel bad for Vinyl in this story, especially getting herself hurt like that.
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I think my idea was that Vinyl does a lot of dancing, while Berry mostly does drinking.