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i like it
I like what you got so far and can't wait to see more. Dash was so cute when she was telling Twilight her secret and Twilight's reaction was spot on for not only how you have her here as a loving mare friend to Dash but I think this is how she would react to this being the studious and experimental mare she is.
Well, you haven't scared me off yet. Does Dash want sex while she's playing as a foal too, or is this more of a kinky-d'aww story? I'm OK either way.
3681557 There is no sex in this story, just Rainbow living out her fantasy with Twilight. This is a cutesy kinda story, not a cloppy one.
3681557 It is, however, dealing with a certain fetish, so I may have to mark it as mature.
I like where this is going and await more
I'd say this looks pretty promising. Especially since it will be a kinky romance rather than a clop story.
Age regression isn't one of my personal fetishes, but I would probably still read this full story anyways as long as they don't go into what I call 'messy diaper territory.'
3681668 I decided to just have Rainbow act like a foal instead of being hypnotized to think she is.
3681668 If anything, she might lose control and wet herself, but that's as far as it would go.
I love it so much, it is great so far.
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This was the only other thing I was worried about, and now I'm quite happy to see where this goes.
3681808 Great!
3681798 Thanks!
I'll be looking forward to reading this. it looks good.
So far seems good. Will it take too long?
3682534 It depends on what happens in real life, and if my editors are free or not. It should be done in a week.
I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next.And can you make another one when things aren't so sweet? don't get me wrong I loved this one I'm differently going to read and most likely fav it.But I'd like to see things get even Kinkyer and they have sex whale Dash is a foal and maybe it can be a futaquestria because Twilight turned herself into a futanari ?
3683281 Glad you liked it. Also, in future posts, can you please use punctuation? It would make it so much easier to understand you.
3683420 how's that
3683506 Ah, much better. In response to your question, no, I will not write Twilight fucking Dash as a foal, primarily on the grounds that that is foalcon, which is something I will never write. I will, however, write a futa clopfic with the two of them as their normal age.
3683512 ok thanks for at least listening to what I had to say it meant a lot to me.
3683568 Yep!
I'm looking forward to more. This is a cute start, I have to say!
This is brilliant! Cannot wait for more :D
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Everyone, I'm going to be posting this as the first chapter later today, probably around 6pm-9pm my time (It's 12:39pm where I am now). I'm going to revise what I have as the teaser, and then just replace what I have for the first chapter. I'd appreciate it if you could continue to support this, because I know that not many will.
Tell you what: The better the response is to this first chapter, the more content I'll post. I already have 3.1k words drafted (I'm at the part where Twilight is casting the spells on herself and Dashie), and depending on how the response is, I can add anywhere from 1.5k words to an additional 3k.
3694562 ok
3694562 I can't wait
3694562 Hel yes!
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Go for it! I can't wait to see more!
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I should see that shortly after it comes up, then!
3695625 Yeah, I'll be posting it in a couple hours.
Normally I wouldn't read these type of stories, but I love this one! SO CUTE!
3700545 Thanks! I'm glad you're giving this a chance!
dat cover image...
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So happy to be a part of this, bro.
well....this is new.... but it has intrigued me, so i shall follow!
That will be interesting. I have the feeling it will maybe not stay just by "one night"...
kinky twidash..... i like this. surprisingly...
I thought the cover art would be Rainbow padded up but I like this one a lot more. Really looking forward to the motherly Twilight and diapered Dash.
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Oh, you mean the cover-art based on this vector
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Rainbow's mane and tail are still the same
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Huh, didn't even notice that. Meh, still cute.
Its very creepy how "plays" like thes exist.
3700756 Lol, I didn't notice that either. Well, foals have to look pretty, right? They can't have their hair all over the place.
I generally avoid F/F ships, and TwiDash to boot, but the "breastfeeding" trigger warning got my attention. I'm going to follow this story for that reason alone.
3700830 Hehe awesome.
3700838 This is the story you've been talking about right? i missed it again
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What can I say, I have a soft spot for pony teats. I'm also jealous that you have Jake as an editor.
Well, this is an idea that hasn't been done to death, so I'll give it a shot. I'll upvote this as an encouragement.
The suspense! It's murdering my brain.
3701113 I already have a 2k word chapter ready to go! I'm just waiting for my two editors to look at it, and then I'll upload it!
“To be honest, I know that there are two sides of this particular fetish: a diaper lover and an adult foal.
So this story works as a simplified approach. Generally speaking we think of this community as those two. But sometimes someone can be both or even a third. For example, imagine a "diaper lover" who also has sexual feelings for the "adult baby" stuff, but can also see both as a lifestyle. You could argue that having sexual feelings for baby things is close to pedophilia feelings, but I don't see it that way. DL + AB x Fetish/ Lifestyle, would be what I'm saying. Of course I would never say these feelings are pedophilia in nature, far from it. I'm just saying that sometimes there is more than just AB (Adult Baby) and DL (Diaper Lover). Of course this does not even go into detail the other lifestyles and fetishes that people mix with Adult Baby related thoughts and feelings. But like I said: This story works on a simplified level.
It also works that Twilight accepts Dash like this, since Twilight knew of DLs and ABs beforehand. So I say it is believable.