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Twinkie Hoof


Writer of clop, rule 63 and padded pony.

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Okay, I know I've written some shitty stuff in the past, but this... Even I know this is gonna suck... But I'm gonna read it anyways.

This is very intresting and I look forward to more. You are probably the first person I know to write a story about Octavia in diapers. :eeyup:

I'm ashamed at the two people who likely thumbed this down without even reading it. That's the one thing I can't stand, thumbing down a fic without even reading it. :trixieshiftleft:

This was interesting. :moustache:

I don't know why this has so many dislikes, it's going to be brilliant. The only thing I would say is that I doubt Vinyl Scratch would go into Octavia's locked chest. I know I can't call it OoC but it's just a major dick move.

The writing was actually good (not great, mind you, but it didn't make me want to bring the story back behind the shed with a shotgun in the crook of my arm). I'm not a fan of "Octavia just so happens to like diapers", but it's a necessary evil for this story, I would imagine.

Looking forward to more.

i actually thought this story was pretty good , the characters seemed real and compelling , and yeah.....

I dunno, I think Vinyl would probably go into her chest. But only if they were dating or very close. Also this was a great story. Just reread it. Some ponies just can't handle things well. :scootangel:

I quite enjoy this story, I will keep watching. :twilightsmile:

This was nice. I haven't normally gotten into Vinyl Scratch and Octavia fics, but I could get into both characters from how you wrote their voices. There was good chemistry between them, even if Vinyl can be a little dominant. But the plot moves well and it's a pretty fun first chapter.

Nice. Are you Tyrant Hoof on DiaperedAnime? As he/she posted this story on their. Please continue, I love this story! :pinkiehappy:

More please!

i bet Octavia will win a 100% i mean so did go as long a mothe without it.

2200643 I am, yes. Thought of a better name for this since posting it there, but changing it there requires a moderator to approve it again.

2199112 It really depends on how you view the character. Someone else has commented that they can see it. Some people (ponies) are just nosey and while it might be a dick move that doesn't mean a character is a dick.

2199439 What other logic is there? People like what they like, its no different than any decision on how to show a character. Does there have to be some underlying reasoning and an explanation about some childhood thing leaving her with that sort of interest? The story is about her liking diapers....so yeah, its less a 'necessary evil' and more 'the plot'.

2198682 That's kind of rude, you haven't even read it and judge it solely on it containing what is presumably something you dislike. If you dislike diapers, don't read. I gave enough warning to make it clear. If you think it'll be shitty why are you reading it?

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When it comes to something so far from the norm (as loose as the term may be), having an explanation tends to be a good idea. It provides context, development and, potentially, foreshadowing.

2201183 I guess you have a point, but its only one chapter in. That might pop up later, although having it at the start might be useful.

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Ergo, foreshadowing. Vinyl could have found a journal in the chest but paid it no heed in light of the other contents, for example.

2201115 The reason why I'm still gonna read it isn't because I dislike stories with the diaper stuff in 'em, it's cause I usually read what I think is gonna be shit and then turns out to be gold. And I read what I think is gonna be shit because I've got more shit for brains than a blumkin. Just know, I'm gonna read this, I'll probably end up liking it, but until I do, I'm going to say it'll probably be weird and suck to me yet keep neutral opinion of it until I've finished it.

I found this interesting, I usually don't like stories involving Tavi and Vinyl... but I liked this, I am looking forward to see where this goes. :twilightsmile:

Yo dude very nice chapter can't wait for the next 1 :)

I've been away from this site for more than a month, and the first thing I read when I come back is this. And all I have to say is.....
YESSSSS!!!!!!!!
There's a lot of win here. It's a really fun scenario, and I'm loving Vinyl and Tavi's relationship in this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

more please

You tease, you. I hope the next chapter comes faster than this one.

Aw that's so sweet. Also Octavia proably should've seen that coming, what part of her thought Vinyl wouldn't want to have a little fun with her. :pinkiehappy:/:rainbowlaugh:

Please post another chapter soon.

too short lol....

Octavia YOU CAN DO THIS WIIIINNN:flutterrage: I KNOW YOU CAN!!!!!!

Quite good but I do agree with Darkentrophy! You're a tease! :yay:

Oh, you dreadful tease! Shame on you.

I expected Vinyl to start feeding her when Octavia said how glad she was that she could feed herself.

Cannot wait for the next chapter!

2341338>>2335303>>2334244>>2334413 A tease, me? Never! Well, it was either write more and make you wait longer or stop this chapter here and post sooner.

2334884 Why do you want her to win? That means LESS diapers, which is bad.

2341902 becasue i want vivnly to be into depersh

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Still a tease.

And Octy should win, because then Vinyl would be her "slave" for a week and who knows what sorts of kinky diaper-related stuff they could get to in that time...

2342547 Oh my god, YES.

2342547>>2343943 I really wasn't on Vinyl getting diapered, since she's busy fulfilling Octavia's desires. But I think I'll consider it later since you seem to want it so much.

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Most agreeable. It's still your story, though. If you want Vinyl to be in a caretaker role only, then that's your call. You can always save her being padded for a sequel or somesuch.

MORE!!... please :)

Damnit Tyrant, now I have to wait for the next chapter!

That with Lyra was... unexpected.

But I have a Idea where this is going.

PLAYDATE WITH LYRA!

So it looks Lyra has the same secret as Octavia. Intresting and rather ironic. :eeyup:/:rainbowlaugh:

“Let’s just say, if this place smelled of Octy you’d be able to tell. She’s not just in the toilet, she’s filling it. Octy is doing like the most mondo, ginormous, super sh-”

Oh Vinyl you crack me up sometimes you know that. :rainbowlaugh:

Loved this chapter!

Although if I may point a minor mistake.

Vinyl shrugged. “Your lose.” She said it with a wicked grin of amusement.

Should be "Your loss"

This story's great, can't wait for more! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Penjacker deleted May 28th, 2013

Octy is doing like the most mondo, ginormous, super sh-

:rainbowlaugh:

butt srs tho I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter and Lyra! Hopefully. Whatever you do I know it'll be good. I noticed a few mistakes here and there like

She would lounge around in just her diaper or sometimes a onesie or romper. sulking on a pacifier.

and if you want a prereader I would gladly oblige.

Dear Sweet Celestia don't be a dead story. It was so CUTE!!! Please continue this story.

2835692 Not a dead fic, I'm working on chapter 4 but, well, my m/m r63 clopfic had me distracted for a while. PP'sP will be updated soon, don't worry.

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It's alright. I can wait. :scootangel:

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Just not very long :fluttershysad:

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