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Of Child of Mine,
And the Daughter Of Laughter,
Daughter of Sun and Daughter of Night,
I ask of thee,
What have you done?

Words and actions can sometimes hurt more than we know, sowing betrayal and hatred where friendship and innocence lies. A single thoughtless action can be a tipping point, one fallen domino setting off hundreds. Look back, and answer me.

What have you done?



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Story theme is Chronophobia

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 283 )

Oooo...

A different take on the wedding?

Sounds fun!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Nice play with Pinkie...

You've certainly got my a curious tale happening.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Applejack and Rainbow Dash ought to be very interesting

Wow...I like this story...

I'm hooked. You earned a favorite.

EDIT: You didn't just earn a favorite you got "Email update" too

I sense the foreboding of suicide here

I guess sometimes having a psychotic voice in your head can be helpful sometimes. :pinkiecrazy:

If Twilight were to assassinate Chrysalis, would she stay in Cadence's form or turn back to her real one? 'cause I'm really hoping all this leads to an assassination.

kill them :pinkiecrazy: . . . . . . . . . kill them all and show them the stone coLD TRUTH!:flutterrage:

3597791 I think we all knew that Pinkie was this crazy, and probably schizophrenic

It's late so I'll keep this brief, you wouldn't happen to know when the next chapter will be ready, caus this is good, like really great. So pleas continue soon.

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Duuude, how do you even have the time to read and comment on everything? Is it some god-like ability of yours or somethin'? Cuz it's pretty impressive.

This is a nice little spin, and ouch too. That you've shifted just a little thing, and its looking at something with a very different set of eyes.

i wonder how this fic will play out... it will get interesting.

This story is drawing, to say the least. Good job! Please make another chapter. I never actually realized what could have happened at that wedding. :pinkiehappy: :pinkiecrazy:

3600153
The next chapter will be up in about two days :3

Oh man, this got cheesy real fast.

Well that's... a rather original view of Pinkie/Pinkamena (mind you, I don't read many fics with either of them, so I could be wrong) and I quite like it. Interested for the rest of this, but I really don't like tragedy... aw hell, you got me hooked. Faved. Gimme another good chapter like this and you get a like too. Interested for RD, loyalty and all. Or even Flutters for that matter.

Tsk Tsk Tsk, Pinkie. Element of laughter my flank.
But seriously i like how you made her feel guilty here, something that was honestly missing in the episode. It's actually sort of satisfying watching them pay for their actions.

I really like how you take Pinkie seriously and not just as an equine incarnation of randomness, and also how you portray "Pinkamena" as not a monster.

Very good.

Oh my, this is looking really good.

And to the read later list with you!

Oh gawd... This is great. Hope to see more! :pinkiecrazy: :twilightoops:

I am intrigued. I await more of this.

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Twilight commits suicide seem highly likely with the alternate universe tag the stories got.

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I SWEAR I SEE YOU ON EVERY STORY I READ!
(are you digital god?)

Well.

Shit.

This just went dark. Er. Darker.

~Skeeter The Lurker

3613046
How the buck do you read that fast O.O
Even I can't do that...

My god is this a good story! Yay for AU Twi and Discord!

3613052

I see and I like? I devour. Fast.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Discord free so soon? Depressed Twilight? Thoughts of plans and most likely Chaos to ensue? I love it! Keep up this good work.

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Fair enough- I'm still impressed though XD

keep up the good work. that is all.

I saw Discord in the tags and wondered how he'd come into play. Interesting.

Man, that was sooo goooooood. Hate to be a diltch but, in how long, an aproximate estimate of a guess of course, will the next one be ready?

Oh... Dear. Things have just gone from bad to worse, not just for Canterlot but for all of Equestria. I don't read a lot of tragedy, but this one has my full attention for some reason. Keep up the great work :twilightsmile:

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The next chapter is 90% done, so whenever I have time to sit down and finish it... It'll be at least a couple days.

This will not end well for anyone.

May Discord rain hot tea from the sky and bring Equestria to ruin.

The ponies shall weep and moan begging release from his torment.

The royal sisters fall from their tower, the Elements of Harmony forever shattered.

Somehow I get the feeling that Discord is gonna say something like this to Twilight in order to fully get her on his side:

Haha, bravo on a twist I wasn't quite expecting. And how it will be amazing to see the fallout from here. You know, in the fallout shelter designed for the tactical magical nukes.. But bravo!

New chapter? And it's awesome? :rainbowkiss:
Have this:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Sweet celestia
I sense a bit of shipping coming up.

Have me hooked. Can't wait to see where this goes

3613052 Trifle not in the ways of Skeeter, for they are confusing and not for our mortal minds.

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