Three words, spoken as calmly as a comment of early rain on a spring day, made the goddess who received them to forget how to breathe for one long minute.
(Stand-alone Side Story to Ascension)
Cover art is an adapted picture from the amazing artist Raikoh-illust.
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Cover art is an adapted picture from the amazing artist Raikoh-illust
I liked it. The perspective shift caught me off guard. If you intended it then there needs to be something to make it seperated. Not sure really on that but that is just what I feel about it. Still it was a good story
Bu... bu...
WHY
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It was intended.
It's supposed to catch you off guard.
As I tend to, I tried yet another new style of writing for this one. I have to say I'm rather proud of it
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Well then I give you props. Though some might get lost at first by it...still was done well.
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Thank you
You are a magnificent bastard, you. That was a sucker-punch to the feels.
Now I have the sad.
Like it a lot, but I think you need to re-phrase this: The world my sister had forged in the past thousand years surpassed anything me in my wildest imaginations could have foreseen
That or I don't get it.
Such power in three words.
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I dropped a word XD
It's funny, my prereader didn't catch that either.
An emotional torrent, beautiful and tear-jerking. Absolutely incredible, Cloud. You've outdone yourself yet again.
And then Luna goes on a crazy rampage and kills all the changelings, sending their queen into a black hole.
I like this idea better, but its supposed to be sad
This was... a strange one. Not sad per se, but definitely one that makes you think a little.
I gotta ask, though, did Celestia really die in the end? It seems like she died and then didn't
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She didn't.
For more context, I suggest you go read the story this is a side story to- Ascension.
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oooh! You're the author of that story!
Been debating whether to read it or not for a long time... Might come around to it eventually.
Interesting parallel of the Nightmare Moon incident and this new crisis, though it doesn't really say anything Ascension didn't.
This came on just as I started to read this and lasted through almost the whole story... Wonderful background music, but oh, the feels!
