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(Fan Written) Sequel to He'll Never Leave Me

When Pinkie woke up, Gummy was gone. He'd been acting so strange lately- Heck, everybody had been acting strange... And now he's just disappeared without a trace.
Pinkie immediately goes on a mad search to find her lost pet, and in the process, might discover a truth she didn't want to face.

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Edited by SkeeterTheLurker, and partially written through a conversation with Twilight Mercer and Creepypasta Pinkamena, two awesome people who gave me that last push needed to write this.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 80 )

Reading the first one was creepy and sad.

This? Only added to it.

Well done indeed.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I've said it already (I think) and I'll say it again - lovely work. :raritywink:

Noooooooooo! Gummy is DEAD :raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:
must read on...

Noooo Gummy is still dead! Death bring him back. BRING HIM BAAAAAAAACCCCCCCKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!:raritydespair:

It's a pleasure to know that one of my works inspired you to write a continuation of it. While I have no intentions of continuing the tale myself, it's nice to see others do it, and this one is a solid take of what could happen afterwards.

Nice job. You deserve the likes and fave :raritywink:

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Thank you!
That means a lot to me :twilightsmile:

To be perfectly honest, I don't think Pinkie Pie would've been in denial for that long. Sooner or later, I'd think she'd have a "Super Mario Galaxy" moment. If you've played that game and read Rosalina's storybook, you'd know what I'm talking about.

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This occurs about the day to two days after "He'll Never Leave Me"
I don't think there would have been much progress in so little time.

Ponies do that all time.

A 'the' is missing here.

That was really good, but once again it was so sad. It was nice to see some closure though.

May the Maker show you his light Gummy. And may I see you after my final march. :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

OH. MY. GOD. THE FEELS. THEY PENITRATE MY HEART:fluttercry::raritycry::applecry::pinkiesad2:

Wow, this is good. I love the detail of how her inner self knows the truth and thanks Dash. It's sad and cute. It's very well-written, too. I love it! Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

So heartwarming and beautifull, even with the sad ending! Pleese write more like this and the first one!:pinkiesad2:

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I didn't write the original story, this is a fan-sequel.
But I am quite glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

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Ohh, I see, but this story is still excactly as good as the first one!:pinkiehappy:

3582826 You used the line I made in the comments from the original.

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It was amazing, so yes :3
Would you like to be credited? Because if so, I can arrange that~

:pinkiesad2: (sniff) you did it again :pinkiesad2:
Pinkie the bouncy mare :pinkiehappy: is to innocent to accept death
but her other half can accept death
I don't like it when Pinkie's sad, it's just heart breaking :applecry:

I loved dash's explaination. Sorta showed her more wise, tender side.

Good work, sir. 5 out of 5 mustaches. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I'm sorry if I didn't cry, but it was so heartwarming. If I could cry, I would right now. :pinkiesad2:

I would cry if I could...

Why for you kick me in the feels? WHHYYYYYYYYYY????????:applecry::fluttershbad::fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair:

The feels on this. Holy shiz. Pinkamena at her finest in the last few paragraphs. And Dash, you are awesome.

The feels! :pinkiesad2: :raritydespair::fluttercry:

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Well, I hope that wasn't sarcasm, because you're all credited now XD

Damn, that was the fastest fan written sequel I have seen in a while.

Meh...it only touched my heart 67 times.

Pinkamena could see what Pinkie couldn't that's pretty cool. :pinkiecrazy:

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Oh. Yeah. When I read through that storybook in the game, I would constantly come back to the library when ever there was a new chapter available. I beat that whole game. In Super Mario Galaxy 2, I was stuck on The Perfect Run, and my Wii started acting funny. I almost beat it, but my Wii needed repairs, and that wiped all my progress.

Oh gods! My feels! You've hit them so hard they retreated into my stomach. My balls following shortly therin!

This is just as good as the first(even if it wasn't made by the same person). At least Gummy's body is finally buried. Maybe she'll get another gator and name him Gummy 2.

Wow! This was very touching. Pinky's subconscience (Pinkamena) knew the truth. Just that Pinkie herself couldn't face it. You said this was a sequel to a story someone else wrote? Can I get the link?

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The link SHOULD be in the description, provided it is working. If you click on "He'll Never Leave Me" it should send you straight to it.
If not, I'll have to fix it tomorrow when I'm more awake.

OW!:fluttershyouch: For the love of Celestia, my feels hurt like hell!:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

Ok. First chapter, I almost cried.:raritycry:
Second chapter.. Just plain creepy Pinkamena... :pinkiesad2:

I love it when I see Pinkamena used in a non-psycho fashion. This story is a fifty-gallon drum of Awesome sauce. Upvote, fave and a watch from me.
Well done.:heart:

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I read that story a couple of days ago! :pinkiegasp: Liquid pride was shed then AND now. :pinkiesad2:

I almost teared up during Dashie's explanation.

You my friend have done the other story justice....and in a very creepy way to. well done.

Hm, rather good. You've got some editing to do, and it doesn't have that sad feeling of the first story, but a good job nonetheless.

What?
I'm completely befuddled by this ending. I mean, it makes sense and all, but this is a really bad way to leave the story. It doesn't... DO anything.

However, it was well written, even if it didn't give me the same feel the first story did.

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It's meant more as bittersweet closure than another sad story.
Unfortunately, FiMfic doesn't have a "bittersweet" tag, so sad/slice of life will have to do.

Comparing the first one with this...

I actually felt this had more 'Omph' into it than the first, due to the fact that Pinkamena was the one talking to RD. Seriously, Pinkamena is awesome in more ways than one.

She is probably all the feelings Pinkie has stored up inside of her. Ranging from Rage to Fear.

this is surprisingly touching, in a strange way. it was definiely creepy with pinkie pie dragging around her dead pet, unable to realize he was dead. makes me feel for pinkie. and in a way it is in character. she finds slef worth and joy in what she can give to others. the idea of losing someone would probably hurt her in terrible ways.

I find it excruciatingly annoying at how they treat her like a child.

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