• Member Since 24th Feb, 2013
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Twilight-the-Pony


If I had a cent for every headdesk... I'd still be poor.

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My collection of roughly edited RariJack prompts, that can also be found here.

It may contain ponies.

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Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 26 )

:twilightoops:

Good ending to that chapter. Moving on to the third, and then I'll post a decent review.

This is the kind of reading that I should be doing more of. Quick little prompts like these are a lot of fun when done right, and yours are a joy to read. Something about RariJack strikes me as having a prince and pauper type flair that is appealing in a lot of ways, and you carry off the dynamic nicely. I am eager to seeing more from you and more of two of my favorite ponies. :raritywink: :ajsmug:

This is really cute and I quite enjoy the dialogue, good job.Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to more.
:pinkiehappy:

This is soft and sweet, yet crunchy and full of seeds:twilightoops:Oh, that metaphor didn't work. Silliness from me aside, I like this so far.
Cooopercrisp is right; the prince and pauper dynamic is working. Keep at it.

This please Articuno. She demands more.:derpytongue2:

Very cute. But, um, it's actually Hearths Warming, not Hearts.
In historic and modern usage, a hearth /ˈhɑrθ/ is a brick- or stone-lined fireplace, with or without an oven, used for heating and originally also used for cooking food. For centuries, the hearth was such an integral part of a home, usually its central and most important feature, that the concept has been generalized to refer to a homeplace or household, as in the terms "hearth and home" and "keep the home fires burning".

Unless you wrote it that way on purpose, if so forget I said anything :twilightsmile:

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No, actually, you're right.

I've double-checked the name and I've goofed.

Fixing it. Thanks.

~Twi

3530527 I would most wholeheartedly agree!

Ah Monopoly. The destroyer of Friendships.

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Runner up is Risk. And maybe Portal 2 c:

~Twi

I know dat feel. :rainbowlaugh:
Perfection. :rainbowkiss:

FUCK THIS GAME!!!

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Dont fucking touch me grandpa! Nana is a cheating whore!

3785231 and i should cut your head off with this little doggy

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you have no idea how thankful I am you caught that.

Dammit AJ and Rarity, why'd you have to ruin Pinkies plans! :twilightangry2:

Sweet and simple. :twilightsmile:

3530552 Follow #120.

Monopoly. I didn't see that coming. It ruins my relationships too!

It's a nice little short. I'm always up for more Rarijack, thanks for updating this.

But none of them didn't mind any of it.

This is cute and I like it. But that sentence means that they do mind. You might want to reword it a bit.

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Double negatives.

They get me every single freaking time
~Twi

“Yesire.”

Yessir or yessiree. I'll assume it wasn't to be "yes sire" because of the context...and the character.

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