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I WAAAAAAAANT.
NAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! 
Lol haha I thought this was really amusing, I was snickering throughout the first chapter. Plus your idea of changeling society is great, the matriarch actually gave me a few chills, actually imagining what she looks like in my head. You wanna know what I imagined?
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Hermaeus Mora from Skyrim, or something along those lines.
I'm certainly looking forward to chapter two, and how Fluttershy reacts to the Queen's offer. But I won't lie, I was kind of confused by the whole bunny punishment concept, but nothing that distracted me from enjoying this heh heh.
2791227 I can't love you enough for sharing that picture...
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Indee--Waiiiit a second...
Changelings.
2805924...?
A good start, though I'm a bit iffy about the story in general. I usually don't like stories that make light of such issues. We'll see though.
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I may actually drop the Comedy tag based on how the later chapters may proceed. And I can assure all that I don't take the actual issue with such callousness.
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kk, I'm sorry if I came off as rude but what changelings do is.....well it would be monstrous if it weren't necessary to their survival.
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It was an idea that came to me at a really late hour of the night. And even while exploring it, I never meant to offend anyone.
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Nah, it's cool. Anyway, we'll see later.
2808683 o.0 holy crap
just by reading the discription i can tell this is gunna be good!
I'm positively ecstatic, I love tis story. Do you have any idea when chapter 2 will be up?
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Probably over a week. I seem to take 2-3 days to write an average 3k chapter, and right now this is the third story in my writing cycle. One of the others will be going on intermission, so this should pick up pace starting with Chapter 3.
It's a lot to process I know.
Okay, I've decided to just work on this next chapter anyway, since I actually know what's meant to happen. Expect it soon!
hmmm interesting the queen as a mother XD
i hope to see the next chapter soon :D
Huh....that went well to a degree. Not so sure Chrysalis is the pranking sort, especially in this situation but whatever.
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Meh why not to have fun while taking on highway to hell?
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Because the stairway to heaven is worth it.
Alright, next chapter's going to be a while coming. In the meantime, enjoy!
Alright... adding to favorites, this story just got interesting and became the shizzle in a matter of one minute of reading this chapter.
Props to you Author I await this next chapter!
Twilight should sign up for some ovipositing. It would be good for diplomatic relations.
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I may just do that.
Hey guys, how does Nightmare Moon's Institution for Sleep Deprived Fillyfoolers sound to you?
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I keep wanting to make a joke about the name but can't
dunno why
I love the idea
Was that a hint at the comic book series there with the CMC? Just seemed like a particular reaction to their name.
I kind of wonder how the others would have reacted to that last item. I mean I would expect disgust (mostly Rarity with a W.P.T. followed by her couch appearing) from all but Pinkie (out of her usual perky pinkie-ness) and Fluttershy who we already know is game from the blurb on the title page.
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Nice catch. I quite enjoyed that part of the comic, especially how it called out a lot of the more infamous villain clichés.
As for reactions, that's probably going to make up the majority of the next chapter. I've still got a pretty big plot hole between now and first implant.
Okay, that's it. I am making no more reservations.
There will be references to other famous stories/movies that reference ovipositing in some way. I won't spoil which ones, but they shouldn't be too hard to catch. For that matter, I will probably also reference a lot of really bad clichés that clopfics in general seem to follow. Pinkie Pie will have a field day at this rate.
Hey guys, I'm thinking of making Twilicorn and Rainbow Dash shenanigans a subplot. What do you think?
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You mean TwiDash? Sure, always a pleasure.
Though I don't remember seeing it in connection with this fic's kinks.
Is this fic going to have more of the mane six than Fluttershy as incubators? If so, having Twi, Dash, or both gravid (or getting there) at the time of shenanigans might be a delicious twist. What are you thinking of?
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Well, I wouldn't say strictly TwiDash, because as you'll all read in the story, Twilight is one of the few ponies RD hasn't hitched. It's just a really weird dynamic between the two.
Anyway, Twilight's getting one for her own testing on how incubation affects the mare, RD is more the type to just sit back and watch it happen in this case. Chances are she will. xD
The end goal is to expand the scope beyond the core pairing, so I have a lot of room to manoeuvre in terms of what I write. More fun for everyone that way.
Well, I put the chapter up. No regrets.
Well, I don't think I've seen a version of RD that perverted before, and.....yeah.
Not bad, not bad at all. Hope to see the next chapter sooner.
2974454 I would hope no regrets, seeing as you wrote it and stuff. XD (Though, stupid question. Will there be chapter specific warnings for clop, or will it be a 'it could happen at any time because tags so no warning'? )
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It'll probably be something like this...
5. Twilight Sparkle Gets Rear-Ended (Clop)
8. The Incubation of Fluttershy (Clop)
11. No Regrets, Just Defects (Sorta Clop)
Basically, if the chapter title isn't warning enough that it's about clop, then you'll have a big bold word saying CLOP to back it up.
From this chapter, I'm guessing the romance is between Fluttershy and Princess Pierinae. If this is true, it will be interesting to see Chrysalis' reaction.
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In the words of Jerry Seinfeld...
"I can't be with someone exactly like me....I HATE MYSELF!"
In all seriousness, I'm still going for ChryShy. But that doesn't mean she can't get to know the daughter too...
This characterization for Rainbow Dash seems a little out of nowhere, seeing how the synopsis implies that Fluttershy's the only one willing to volunteer, with the rest being very apprehensive about the situation. I also actually got the impression that the story was rated mature just because of the practical implications of reproduction treated as a fairly serious theme, rather than genuinely cloppy in any way, but apparently that was wrong. I could swear the synopsis had a milder warning before, anyway.
Oh well, I guess I'll just adjust my expectations accordingly.
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It uh, got a little weird in the month between 2 and 3. I still need to make some more changes, and I always suck at descriptions.
To be fair, Fluttershy is volunteering because she genuinely wants to help. Rainbow Dash's reasons aren't legitimate in the least. I also won't be going into clop with her side of the story. There are a few standards left for me to maintain.
I'm still gauging reactions, and I could easily just take the TwiDash and throw it into a separate story, to keep the focus a little more serious.
With the talk about rear ends and plots, is this going to be anal oviposition? Makes me wonder why Chrysalis explicitly requires mares, then. Maybe both cavities, to maximize used space?
Yet, I don't think they'll stay in the intestines for months unless glued in place. And that would probably cause severe (maybe fatal) constipation. I think the other hole is the better choice, but I might just be biased because of personal preference.
I like to think incubator slaves are treated quite well, as they are valuable, and kept happy, as it benefits the larvae. Drugs or hypnosis would be subtle (if present), with heavy treatment reserved for terminally uncooperative cases, as application of such is expensive in resources (drugs) or time and magic (hypnosis). They're still slaves, though, so it would be unsurprising the diarchy doesn't approve. Might this point come up later?
Hmm, maybe changeling eggs secrete psychoactive substances or other fun stuff.
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As I discussed with a friend of mine, I don't like poo holes. They have no appeal to me, and I won't use them. >.>
I'll be honest in that I haven't spent a great deal of time researching pony innuendo. So if I misuse a common term like plot, then I apologize.
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Well, they're euphemisms for "ass", so the passages read like:
If you're looking for ponified euphemisms, I like "under her tail". It's vague, but doesn't directly map to "ass".
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Or I guess I could go with a far more explicit term and be done with it. xD
I'll figure it out during renovations either way. I guess I've just been misinterpreting it all this time.
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I don't mind some TwiDash on the side, it's the apparent NymphoDash aspect that has me a little nervous, regardless of whether or not it's actually explored in detail. But eh, it is a mature-rated fic, so such characterizations are hardly a shock. If that's how you want to portray her, it's your story.
Also, jumping in on the "plot" discussion, I'd just say it's better to avoid that slang entirely within the context of a story. It's fandom slang that would have no reason to make sense to the characters themselves. Although I'd say you didn't misuse the term at all. The word means their entire butt, like that whole region, not specifically one hole or another, so it just takes the context of referring specifically to mares to understand that it meant needing a genuine womb for the eggs.
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Well, I took your feedback seriously, and depending on how things turn out, I'll probably move TwiDash to a spin-off. I have a habit of going off track with stories I haven't been developing for months before, and it was a much appreciated wake-up call. Because you're quite right in that the serious tone isn't something to be taken lightly. (That's kinda obvious, but not to me.)
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hmm thats kinda looks like twilight will be incubating too (which I hope)
maybe trough some kind of alliance between rainbow and chryssy (does the word shenanigans apply here?i dont know what that word means^^)
Well....Not going to lie, but Rainbow Dash is being portrayed as a crazed sex addict.
I don't know how to take that. I mean, this is a story about Chrysalis actually laying eggs into mares, but it's Dash that gets me...Maybe it's because that aspect seems a tad out of character. Okay, more then a tad, but still.
From the earlier set up, I thought this story was going to be more serious and actually address the moral implications of these actions and how they are/or not justified. That's great. (Though, still strange. I'm still going with my own headcanon, and saying Chrysalis forms a sack {like the Alien Queen} and just lays her eggs from time to time to boost the colony....I also have other head-canon ideas, but I don't want to bore you.)
The inclusion of a slutty Dash throws off this story...to a degree. The story is still good and is going where you were originally taking it. Slutty Dash is more of a road bump, unless this is what you were going for. (This is a clopfic after all. Characterizations are sometimes...strained in such to fit the plot.)
Still, this Princess changeling and Fluttershy were so cute when they conversed. I can't wait to see more of their bonding later on.
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Well, I have officially removed that scene from this story, I'll be continuing Fluttershy's scene to make up for the material lost.
I'm going to dump the cut scene to a different story which will really cover the comedy side of this universe. That way both sides are happy, and I can avoid making more bad decisions.
I've fixed the chapter up guys, there's now a more direct reference to the origin of Pierinae's name, as well as some interaction between herself and Fluttershy.
d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Thought: If Twilight is going to be an incubator FOR SCIENCE, wouldn't she want to record the procedure with a movie camera, or failing that, at least have a witness with a notebook? I think she'd be too distracted (heh) to take notes herself.