I WAAAAAAAANT. NAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Lol haha I thought this was really amusing, I was snickering throughout the first chapter. Plus your idea of changeling society is great, the matriarch actually gave me a few chills, actually imagining what she looks like in my head. You wanna know what I imagined?

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Hermaeus Mora from Skyrim, or something along those lines. I'm certainly looking forward to chapter two, and how Fluttershy reacts to the Queen's offer. But I won't lie, I was kind of confused by the whole bunny punishment concept, but nothing that distracted me from enjoying this heh heh.

2791227 I can't love you enough for sharing that picture...

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Indee--Waiiiit a second...

Changelings.

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A good start, though I'm a bit iffy about the story in general. I usually don't like stories that make light of such issues. We'll see though.

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I may actually drop the Comedy tag based on how the later chapters may proceed. And I can assure all that I don't take the actual issue with such callousness.

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kk, I'm sorry if I came off as rude but what changelings do is.....well it would be monstrous if it weren't necessary to their survival.

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It was an idea that came to me at a really late hour of the night. And even while exploring it, I never meant to offend anyone.

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Nah, it's cool. Anyway, we'll see later.

2808683 o.0 holy crap just by reading the discription i can tell this is gunna be good!

I'm positively ecstatic, I love tis story. Do you have any idea when chapter 2 will be up?

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Probably over a week. I seem to take 2-3 days to write an average 3k chapter, and right now this is the third story in my writing cycle. One of the others will be going on intermission, so this should pick up pace starting with Chapter 3.

It's a lot to process I know.

Okay, I've decided to just work on this next chapter anyway, since I actually know what's meant to happen. Expect it soon!

hmmm interesting the queen as a mother XD
i hope to see the next chapter soon :D

had to skim a bit cos some of that was going over my head and I'm a bit pressed for time, since i won't be likely to do anything fimfiction related til Thursday, and that's if I'm really really really lucky.

but, from what I've seen so far, this is okay.

Ok... I really like this version of the Changeling society. There is merit to having Chrysalis be a loving and dedicated ruler to her people and I enjoy such fics, but your take on her is so delightfully disturbing, I really enjoyed it so far. I also like how you keep the hive as insectile and alien as possible. And rather disturbing how Changelings are used as furniture.
(Is there a Changeling who acts as fainting couch? )

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It's actually Rarity's lifelong secret that a changeling always disguised himself as a strand of of mane, only to appear as a couch later when she wanted to faint