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PlumBuckeredOut
"I write to give myself strength. I write to be the characters that I am not. I write to explore all the things I'm afraid of. I write to do all the things the viewers want too..." -Joss Whedon
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All, proof reading comments removed. /)
Nice Story. Would like to read more^^
Awesome!
Interesting idea...they follow the queen only. Want to see this get lighter and everythigns happy, or he was lying and they're evil, or fluttershy goes mad with power
darker than black version?....
how bout a password for that link?
3592088 3591950 The password is on because she's still editing it... and I was proofreading it for her... The chapters will be open to the public as soon as there done.
3592992 It's a multiple choice ending... As the link shows there's a dark ending and a darker ending.
Rape? Torture? DEATH?
Sounds like my cup of tea.
To answer some questions:
Why is there a password?
Left over tidbits from the editing phase, the password has been removed, along with the rest of the chapters. I apologize.
**edit**
I guess you can't undo your password protection,even if you remove the password. All chapters have been published as a quick fix.
Keep in mind:
The "clop not plot" link is chapter 2, it's just missing the plot dialogue.
Wtf does 'darker than black' mean, and where's the gore?
This story is my attempt at a 'pick your ending ' so to speak. Although a dark tagged story is still going to be dark it is the difference of "bad stuff happens" to "creeping into grimdark territory". Depending on how well this story is received will determine if I keep to the tiered story approach or if I structure it like a normal story...I'm hoping to add more paths in my other stories.
1) Stop deleting comments, it's bad for face value
2) PLOT TWIST
wow that caught me off guard
It's still prompting for passwords on any of the alternate chapters, I'm afraid.
3594993
My editor is deleting his comments. He is deleting his proofreading edits which have spoilers.
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My apologies once more. It seems after you put a publisher key it will always expect a key,even though I have removed the key...I guess I'll have to post up all the chapters and make the story content page little messy.
3595993 Don't be I have reverted to plan C; showing all the chapters.
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Soon.
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}\ Nice work.
3594993 Sorry it was just proofreading comments from previous tinkering... I hope that's not too distressing.
3597176 Can I ask for a link to that wonderful picture?
Can you write a sequel please? One where all of the Elements of Harmony become brood mothers?
3600749 Thank you, I told PlumBuckeredout I wasn't perfect... Thanks for the help.
Wow that caught me by suprise. But a good story so far
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Soon.
3600950
You did
?
3600749
Good spot! -edits-
3601908 Yes I did! ... I think..? Anyway, I'm not perfect.
3601951
You sent out your edits,I fixed the errors....I'm not sure what else I could've done from that. -shrugs- Oh well. It's all a learning process.
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Thank you.
3602145 Okay yeah... Don't feel bad I don't know what I'm talking about either.
Infact you've been here longer than me! You should know these things already...
...Jks but yeah I guess I did do a good job, thank you. 
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I've never used the password function until now!
Lesson learned, the sequel will be cleaner.
3603313 I'm glad to hear it!
... Or read it 
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Russian!
JK
Thank you very much! Maybe I should add you to my editing team...
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Hmm if I find any more errors, which is unlikely, that could be considered.
3614137 Also...you don't need to delete your comments.
(If anything it looks bad on my end.)
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Opps sorry. I wont delete any more.
And one more thing that is really bothering me
"Fluttershy's tears seize to the familiar voice"
It just doesn't sound right, I'm sorry if I'm pushing it but I think it should say something like
"Fluttershy's tears seized at the sound of that pleasantly familiar voice." It just flows smoother and sounds better to me
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You got it!
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Oh, maybe I should move to your ideas page for this stuff.