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"I write to give myself strength. I write to be the characters that I am not. I write to explore all the things I'm afraid of. I write to do all the things the viewers want too..." -Joss Whedon
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Woot. A lot easier to navigate with hyperlinks.
Also very nice story.
Me likey... for purely professional reasons...
4522680 You can tell how long I've spent perfecting it (6 months, take 1-2 months for playing video games and trying to find a shitty job)
Thanks you very much though. Ch. 3 is in the works but my brain decided to make it into a 3 parter,so it's going to take a bit.
4523419 I dont mind waiting. Your stuff is worth waiting for.
password???
Here's wishing this had only one branch. Choose your own adventure sucks to read (and makes the chapters way too short).
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I understand. They're challenging to write in this format, I can't imagine every branch being 1k or longer.
4535651 Chapter 3 is complete now!
HOT
'Nuff said
I noticed that this was a branch-off from the original story when Fluttershy rejects the kind Nymphequi.
I was wondering if you would write a story for if Fluttershy accepts the kind Nymphequi?
'Cause this is the mean Nymphequi's sequel.
We need the kind Nymphequi's sequel.
Just hoping to complete the set.
5445194 The re-edition if kindness does indeed have that :)
That's Remnant/remedy's path
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Mind directing me along th
eat path?of righteousness5446529
@ "the rules to rule" You want to *Embrace Remnant*
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Just re-read what you're saying... and to fit the storyline Remnant's/remedy's children and Zerene's children are both vying for Applejack.
I'll send out a PM for whose children are who's if you want...but otherwise I'd like it to remain a secret.
...is that it?
5452183 mmm...for now.
The tentacle gassing aj was exactly what I was looking for in a story. Incredibly hot. Is there gonna be a short follow up to that?
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:#3 Weally?
I've defiantly thought of it,I'm not sure how I wanted to execute it. I brainstormed the 'endings' to all of the branches being a progressing of 1-2 more weeks under the Nymphs, but It felt more like i was trying to cobble up the loose plot holes and not that i was tying up loose ends of Honestly to lead into Loyalties(Rainbow dash's story)
6149444 Whatever you feel is best! Personally you've caught a huge interest of mine. (the sleep and breeding part). And I really like how that part goes down. If anything does happen with that, do let me know :).
This is my fav ending. I can't stop reading it :D
6149544 I've put the whole series into a hiatus due to a bunch of readers requesting a fully fleshed out and linear story. Due to only have two days off from work it makes re-writing the Kindness series rather difficult.
The original plan was for each story to lead into the other with subtle clues,and the finale would explain the series chronologically. Each story had a main theme to go along with it, a sort of play of each element; Fluttershy was tested on her willingness to give-in or show compassion, Applejack's choices are tied to her honesty with family, Rainbow's story is centered on Loyalty to Cloudsdale or Ponyville, Rarity is centered on whom she should be generous with, her family, spike, or the illustrious members of a V.I.P party, and Pinkie Pie and Twilight share a story that ties on the major theme and true cause of the whole series. Pinkie Pie's element,and (my personal head canon of TwilightxPinkie shipping)
6161623 Glad you like it.
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Any chance you could explain exactly what is happening? To me, it looks as though Candor, the Nymphequui in the barn, has sewn her and Applejack's marehoods together, effectively fusing them, and she's laying eggs in Applejack?
6166947 That's exactly it.
She's also mutating Apple jack's eggs to all ovulate as pony/nymph hybrids. This type of explaining though is why some readers have requested a linear story so that if a Nypmhlequine wiki existed everyone would be on the same story. in stead of 300-or-so readers with varying stories.
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So they're effectively stuck together? By their marehoods? That is very VERY nice!
6168615 What can I say is Candor is a very greedy Nymph, and she doesn't want to share A.J. with the rest of the very capable and willing barn guests. There'll be an update though, so expect some feels and a very loud barn in the future.
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How long will they be stuck together? Also, YAY!
6259037 For as long as it takes for complete gestation and total metamorphosis.
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Omg, it's like the Knot fetish, only with vaginas!
I love you so much
Nooo, the gas scene is gone. Also there seems to be a password locked chapter after tree of eropia.
6264090 The gas scene isn't gone, but one of the branches I'm still typing out.
6264109 Thanks for letting me know! Great update on the chapters.
6264125 I think you make have used a difference branch on your first read. You might have visited Granny,decided to leave with Zecora, which would have omitted the gas, or you might be thinking of another branch where A.J tries to find Winona, gets dazed by the pollen and ends up in Cottonseed.
Thank you, more is on the way.
6264177 Yes, it was a tentacle that had gassed her before inside the tree. That's the one I was referring to.
6264330 I don't remember making the Eropian tree gassing A.J, Was that impassioned fruit or with Mendacious?
6264660 Impassioned fruit. She's stuffed with eggs near the end. Afterwards, one tentacle wrapped around her muzzle and hissed some gas. It ends as she blacks out.
I personally enjoyed that part very much.
6264694 Fixed. Sorta. The new ending is still there, but now the tree puts her to sleep.
Changelings?
This is the good one, right? That seems to be the vibe I'm getting.
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What about them?
6267102 In context this branch of Honestly is one of the "better" ones.
:D
I have absolutely no idea what just happened
:D
6349370 Candor is dead. One of Sophist's children was converted and now serves Applejack.
>This story is going through an editing phase.
-I guess this explains why none of the choices seem to make ANY sense in term of continuity ? The links don't plug to the right parts ?
6478699 So from here. There's nothing more I can really scry from your limited comment. I dont know if you're reading this like a common story, or you know what a CYA(choose your adventure) styled story works. If you understand how CYA's work I don't know if you just don't "Get" what going on in the story... or if you've jumped into reading Honestly w/o reading Kindness( the starter story) again not much to really gather from your comment other then confusion.
for an example...(because i have seen people PMing me and posting how lost they are.)
You'd read the first chapter,then click to the next via green text. now your on ch. 2
Ch. 2- has 4 options,but only 3 branches... 2 branches lead you to ch. 3 immediately where as the the ch.2 cont will slowly lead the reader to ch.3
So to recap:
If Applejack chose option 1 or 3 on Ch. 2, the reader would end up at ch. 3
option 2 leads to "Ch. 2 A", option 4 leads to "Ch. 2 B" - both of these options have a "yes" or "no" branch. And not to spoil which one,but one of the options leads to a segway to Ch. 3...
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>I dont know if you're reading this like a common story, or you know what a CYA(choose your adventure) styled story works.
-Don't insult me, please. -_-
(Not that you would know, or care, but I have been reading Choose Your Adventure, and other similar formula, books for easy 20years now.)
Did you even READ what I said, for real ? I said : ''The links don't plug to the right parts ?''
...this means, I click link, link goes to page... Previous link (for example) = ''I'm hungry, let's enter the kitchen!'', next link/choice(in the page) = ''and thus I finished climbing the mountain''. They. Don't. Connect... from what I can tell, at least. Or, if the pages I went to were supposed to connect, they weren't doing a good job in term of continuity.
No need to eviscerate a sheep and read in its entrains, for Pete's sake. I don't speak Chinese or in hieroglyphs.
6482553 I'm not trying to patronize you. I simply couldn't tell what your problem was. I just went through the links and I couldn't find an issue. That could also be because I wrote the story, so I understand what's going on.
< Am i supposed to assume this is rhetorical , because obviously i wouldn't have slapped my fingers on the keyboard if i didn't read your post.
< I wouldn't know and nor should you assume that I can gauge that amount of insight from "the links don't work "
It's about as helpful as getting someone from the cable company to tell you "did you unplug your Ethernet cable and plug it back in?"
But on a less defensive stance,
I don't see anything jarring like that. Chapter 2 is a fever dream that Sophist has made... so Applejack wouldn't relay anything there as factual... the ch. 3 branches all sync up. The cont chapter 3 pages all state that time has elapsed...
Guess all I can say is thanks for the visit. Sorry the main attraction sucked. I have been told by others that a erotic CYA wouldn't be a proper fit for the Nymphlequine story. Again sorry for any slights but it's a reoccurring topic that I can't seem to remedy. Feeling lost as a writer to help the reader understand outside of the story is something that shouldn't happen. So i understand something is missing, just can't find it.
this is the ending that I prefer.