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Drop_It_Like_Its_Clop
Don't make the same mistake I made, kids; When the police shout "drop it!", that doesn't refer to your pants.
Drop_It_Like_Its_Clop
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I wonder where this is going. From the set up I have to think that Applejack will be handed back to her brother as he is responsible for her. What is to simply keep him from taking the bridal off?
Is he going to get the male version of re-education?
Is he going to decide that it will be safer to wait until they are out of Saddle Arabia before trying to 'fix' Applejack.
Will Mac be corrupted?
edit: Just occurred to me that by Saddle Arabia standards Applejack is very petite. While her Brother is likely closer to normal, if more bulky.
This makes it even easier for them to regard her as someone not capable of independence due to youth.
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Fellowing
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What breed is that horse
11001052
are you talking about the picture in my Profile?
Percheron , used to be used by knights, work horse, weigh up to 2500 pounds. Big!
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I think that maybe you should right two different endings to this story.
One that shows Big Mac being corrupted by the Saddle Arabian's influences and take Apple Jack back as a slave, along with some other girls that attracted his attention...
The other ending shows that he will try to fix apple jacks problem when they get home.
Either way its up to you.
Also,"just a suggestion" if you go for the first option can i recommend that you make sequel to this story.
One that shows either Big Mac seducing the other mares and teaching other stallions to act like the Saddle Arabian's or shows that Apple Jack had gotten hocked on to this pleasure and decides to share it with here friend's?
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The commissioner has given me a full outline of the story he wants me to write, so the ending is already determined. I hope everyone enjoys the story as it unfolds, regardless of what it brings.
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Still i love to see a Sequel
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Well then you can commission it
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I would if i had an idea as to the price and fave the funds...
Also i will need time to sumerize the story first...
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Just ask lol
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Nice rode one of them when I was 6 good times lol
At first I was confused on how is this a mind control fic, then the last section. I'm curious on how it goes.
I wanted to make a comment on Mac being corrupted and spreading this to Equestria, but all I could think of is him wearing the bridle now. I wonder would it make him submissive and breedable?
I am liking this so far. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
This deserves way more upvotes than it has.
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So what is the price would you give if i ask you to make a sequel to this story.
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There won't be a sequel to this story unless Brony-wan-kenobi commissions it. He commissioned this one, and so I've carved out a little universe for him, and what happens in it is up to him. If he wants it to end where it ends, that's where it ends, and if he wants more in the future, I'll try to accommodate that.
If you want a similar but seperate story with very obvious allusions to this one, you can commission me yourself. My PM's are always open and I'm upfront about my prices and content I'm happy to write.
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Thanks, glad you like it. Stay tuned for more to come.
I found this just after the second chapter, and have been refreshing almost daily hoping it might be more than once a month. I've loving every moment of this and I just long to learn and see more and more...
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Thanks, I'm glad I'm able to drum up so much anticipation in readers.
I would love for that to happen to different character.
Very very interesting. How has this story not garnered more attention??
Looking forward to what you have in store for next chapter
Well, seems pretty obvious that Applejack wasn't the only one who underwent some mental adjustment.
I was a bit disappointed in the removal of Applejack's muscle tone to tell the truth. Big Mac is more than stallion enough to deal with her as she was, and there is nothing unattractive about a very fit healthy girl/pony.
If he wanted to add a plushy soft mare to his harem he could add Rarity. I've always thought she'd have a kinky side.
Honestly? Loved the entire story. The last two chapters at once was a nice surprise.
It's also sparked quite a love of magical conditioning and brainwashing... And I'll be honest I did enjoy the earlier chapters, with the scenes of AJ being "processed" and Big Mac seeing the eventual result. But did still very much enjoy the ending too.
Whilst am sad it ended, I'm aware it had to and I think trying to continue it would feel forced. Does make me interested in similar themed stories too now XD
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Glad you liked it. Hopefully there'll be more stories which will tickle your fancy, and depending on who wants what, I might even write some.
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Trust me, if I could even conceive of a storyline half this good, would commission (though will add I have no idea how story commissions work XD)
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It differs per author, but for me, you DM me your idea, we hash out the details together, I write it, tell you the wordcount and cost at the end, you pay, then I give you access to the story so you can give feedback and suggest edits. We keep in communication throughout, and there's no obligation to pay until after the story is finished.
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Interesting... Will keep that in mind. I don't normally consider story ideas, but might have to remember this should something come to mind
I'm intrigued to see how the folks back home are gonna take this. keep up the great work
Non-con aside with the applejack bits, its always neat to see how writers on this site do interspecies that does NOT devolve into non-con, in the case with mac and his two new friends.
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The girls are all brainwashed. Big Mac didn't realize this and he couldn't resist the girls begging him for sex.
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It's not exactly consensual, given the context of the situation. Sure, at the time they're made into obedient, submissive wives/concubines, they're absolutely willing, but the process to get them there, and the lack of opportunity to refuse....
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Mac is a complicated one, honestly. He realises what's happened, but the whole point of his journey is (spoilers ahead) his own brainwashing, which is far more subtle. It's not forced upon him, but at the same time, he's exposed to the norms of a society through the lense of someone who can only ever benefit from it. He comes to terms with an idea that is very appealing to someone in his position, if not necessarily moral. In the end, it's up for the reader to decide whether or not he's been brainwashed like his spouses, or if he's come to adopt a new way of life due to the shortcomings his own culture and society have visited upon him. Ultimately, the question is whether or not there's a moral difference between agreeing to something or being forced into that mindset, or whether there's any difference between one moral standard and another in the first place. But that's too heavy for a clopfic, so let's finish with; erotica sexy, people like. Me like writing it. Glad you like too.
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It hard to imagine him refusing considering girls always are being told not to be tempting and here temptation city.
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Well, yes, that's part of the point. He's given free reign and a reason to say yes. He's the protagonist, and not an unsympathetic one, but the entire story is explaining his choices and decisions, not necessarily justifying them to real-world people, merely the people in the world of the story. Whether or not he's a morally good creature by the end of it is up for the reader to decide.
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I think he unfortunately never realized the brainwashing until he was so caught up in it that he would have done anything for sex.
Great work on the story, i enjoined it quite a loot, thank you for providing with such a interesting "story".
I am looking forwart to see where the story goes next. 👍