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headless_rainbow
I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.
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This story is a long time coming. I can't wait to read it.
Well... I should have expected this, it is a story done by headless_rainbow. I will say this I will thank him for at least keeping Celestia, Luna, and Twilight alive. even if they are broken changeling egg sacks.
Though honestly will you ever make a lighter version of you're story's without death or gore?
I like the fall of the good guy's just not the pain and death involved... Okay just the death
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Actually, if I might give you a teeny bit of critical analysis, I feel that you often brush past stuff that would be
really brutal, sexy and entertainingutterly disgusting in full detail. The deaths of the Mane Six in this, for example, really got brushed past without the weight that they deserved.You're a pretty good writer but you're not consistent, and there are paragraphs here that sound more like a story outline than an actual story. I want to see you in full gruesome detail 100% of the time all the time next time, okedoke?
3690900 Well this story was commissioned, so includes and doesn't include subjects as requested. Otherwise, it would have been a bit worse.
You could commission something more to your liking?
3690913 I'm fully aware of that and it was fully intentional, as this was a commission and thus I concentrated on what was desired. I had already almost doubled the requested size so...
You are welcome to commission something with full detail?
The son of a bitch has done it again!!!!!
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Unfortunately I have no moniesChrred?
3691164 I probably would if I had the money.
Alas, I await the completion of your other story whenever you get to feeling like it.
A good story that is however uselessly cruel, many pieces seems written with the only purpose of disgusting the readers or taking a few more paragraphs
Not much substance in ripping them open and removing internal organs, nor putting all twilight friend on a spike, killing two would have been enough to prevent any use of the artefacts and she would had three more breeders to use, seems a useless waste, plus it nearly seems that time completely stop during their "breaking", nothing happen outside the castle or anything..doesn't make much sense but i guess it's not the focus of the story so it's still fine
Also due to the senseless killing and mutilation, plus the murder of the main 6 the numbers of down votes of this story is gonna be naturally hight, despite being a good dark story overall...ho well, it is what it is
3691608 You people are seriously putting deep thought into the plot of a fic like this? The person that paid me loved it, so it was done as it should have been.
question! with all the ponies being put into pods for all of their existence, won't they run out of ponies needed for love eventually when there are no ways to create foals short of releasing the other ponies? that and the egg sacks will die eventually, so what then?
I can say, without a doubt, this is the most terrifying thing I have ever read.
WELL I'm scared.
Here's how a story like this would go if one of my OCs was involved: everything would be stolen, even the things that are nailed down, the nails, and sections of the wall, the floor would be replaced by land mines, anyone that the OC didn't like would be a fine red mist, aaaaaand all the ponies would be bald with graffiti covering every inch of their furless and maneless bodies. The changelings would have penises carved into their chitin. Other than that, it piqued my bloodlust for a bit, then my bloodlust found it weak.
It could have been darker, but I had a good laugh at some scenes, 6/10, feeling generous today
3692602 You're actually expecting an author of something like this to have the mental capacity for basic logic?
3702766 true
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I thought of that, and though you would have to be ridiculously stupid to even care about the logic in stories you are jacking off to, I will explain it to you. I also honestly thought it was obvious and that I wouldn't have to spell it out to people.
1) Why do you think ponies have to be fully aware to be forcibly bred to make more ponies? You do realize that many real life food animals are bred via artificial insemination right? In fact, some meat cows are physically incapable of breeding on their own accord.
2) What makes you think these are the only egg sacks they'll make? These are for the first wave. More drones and egg makers will follow.
3) The reason the royal sisters were chosen in the first place is that they are virtually immortal so can be very long term egg sacks. Twilight was added when Chrysalis realized how much magical power she had.
3704997 Ok, more changelings means more ponies are needed. The changelings are reproducing in large numbers, meaning ponies would have to breed at rapid rates. However, placental mammals can only reproduce so quickly. At the rate of changeling reproduction vs death rates of ponies, both species would be driven to extinction in less than a century.
This story also ignores a basic tennet of in-world villain logic: It's rather hard to keep yourself secret when your methods are so outrageously overt. If the changelings were this hyper-violent and sadistic, then THEY WOULD ALREADY BE KNOWN. Thus, the ponies would have countermeasures in place already.
It also suddenly throws characters into full-blown psychosis. Twilight trusting Chrysalis at all is absurd. None of them resisting or fighting back is absurd.
Indeed, any creature with a trace of intelligence would see this as a clear 'scorched earth policy' scenario: destroy everything to stop an ultimate enemy.
This only works because the ponies in this story are pathetic while the changelings are turned into a race of monsters akin to crossbreeding Hannibal Lecter with Al Qaeda.
Basically, one entire race is beaten with a swarm of idiot balls, while the other is turned into the stereotypically one-dimensional hyper-psychopathic unstoppable super villains who cannot be opposed in any fashion; quite typical of gore fetish fics I've seen and shredded in the worst of the furry fandom.
About the argument in the comments I agree with the author it is a good story and it's a story made for pleasure. You shouldn't analyze things so much. It's the first dark story I've ever read and liked. I've never been turned on by rape before until I read this. So basically what I'm saying thank you it was awesome :)
3704997 true, more or less questioning on a whim of curiosity. didn't really mean to stir up anything, just curious. I apologize if the question was overly concerned, but overall a well written fic. a little morbid for my tastes, but the writing was great regardless of my preference.
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I thought about explaining those holes as they are easy to do if you just think, but your inability to jack off to my story isn't really my problem. This story wasn't written for you. I was given a list of what to include, and the commissioner loved the result. They're the only opinion that matters. If you want to private message me and arrange a story, then your opinion will be the only one that matters.
The best part of this is that one of your arguments, that Chrysalis shouldn't be swarming cities and immediately restraining everyone, can be made against A Canterlot Wedding and even more so against the Chrysalis arc of the comic books. If you're accusing me of making the same mistakes as the show runners and comic writers, I'm okay with that
3726819 Well you are free to make requests, I love requests!
I am terrified.............But the imagery! Amazing You have a strange mind sir/ madam...I can't sleep now!!
Well with trigger words like his who wouldnt want to read it?
I got a throbbing headache in the middle of reading this. I couldn't stop reading though so now I'm seeing double. There is just something wrong with me if I can't stop reading a clopfic to relive pain.
I cant immagine how terrified twilight was. Having to kill both her parents. What is wrong with you chrysalis? Have you no heart?
Dont get me started on how terrified celestia and luna were. There are no words to describe it
That did NOT help my schitzophrenia at all i think you just created something realy realy bad in me.................
oh the rage as i read this was strong i wish i had the power to be the elements of harmony and show HER WHAT TRUE FEAR LOOKS LIKE AS I Devour HER AND HER CHANLINGS slowly but painfuly hahahahhaahhahahhahaah
nightmares are made of this 
By the divines... Why did I ever think it was a good idea to read this.
3796351 Because you are now a better person for having read it.
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That makes no sense!
Somebody commissioned this? lol smh jesus, i don't wanna know
Yeah, this is the worst "Chrysalis Wins!" world I've encountered in my sojourns through the pony multiverse. By far. Also the worst public execution fic. Cupcakes is practically mind bleach after this. Doesn't writing descriptions of genital violence like that bother you while you're thinking up and writing this shit author, holy shit my crotch would hurt....like srsly how do you do it?
3811097 Well I understand why your crotch hurts. Mine hurts too after hours of furious masturbation to stories like this.
..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................the fuck?
Wait, in the description you said THIS is PG for you. If this is your PG, then I can't wait to see your R!
3846890 Yes
WUTDid I just read?
My dick hurts from masturbating so long...
WELLDone, sir!
I'm going to go bleach my brain with acid, but before I do that.
That story was annoyingly well written, and I hate myself a fuck-tone, because I enjoyed the shit out of it.
well i finished, and i don't mean the story. Thumbed and favorited
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Which 'head'?
4059237 My actual head. With a brain in it and hair and eyes and teeth.
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Okay.
i must say i like this i am currently reading scootaloo's master so this was like a fluttershy if you compare it to scootaloo's master. still one of my first favs! needed this as mind bleach from 120 days of blueblood *shiver* my overall rating of the story is a 7/10 cuz trust me I've read worse.
Haven't read the story (don't have to) and loving all the comments. Wheee!
4070407 I know right? It was a commission though, so it only includes a limited list of things. If you like long stories that go off the deep end, try Luna's Lunacy.
i think the length was perfect i just like to use it as mind bleach.
Ok at the start I was enjoying it, completely forgot about the gore part. Then I come to the part where 5 out of 6 are killed and I go "Oh yeah, forgot that was here" and kept reading. Then I come to the part where Twilight tears her mom apart, and the princesses kill Cadance, and I have to stop, as much a I love Futa, and sometimes extreme sex, for whatever reason gore just kills my boners, and I unfortunately have a squeamish gut
. Even though I wasn't able to finish it, it's overall pretty good so nice job!