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Let's see if me gusta, I guess.
Edit: Glad to see you writing again, Bronystories!
Is it weird I didn't give a shit about the rape but cringed at the watersports?
Seeing as this is the story you told me about five months ago, I suppose I'm going to have to riff this.
Oh. Fucking. JOY.
Joe. My. God!
Christmas has come early, bitches, emphasis on come!
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I should warn you, it's a lot more... visceral than we had discussed. I still hope you enjoy it.
3426724 I didn't flinch once if that helps. Guess I became jaded.
3426819 Sometimes I rather loathe my job.
Ambiguous fate of Strabum and the changelings is nice. Strabum's lines were a bit clunky at times. Also, you really have a thing for maggoty semen, don'tcha? Lines are hilarious as always. 'Crack whores' cracked me up.
Made me snort out loud.
In conclusion, 8/10 would fap again.
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Silly twow.
That's not how you spell "love."
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It's amazing what fetishes reveal themselves when you start writing erotic fiction.
Between this story, the lepers from 120 Days of Blueblood and the Aristocrats joke from Frisky Fillies, it would seem that I have a fetish for ejaculate that's crawling with worms or maggots. Is it any wonder that I find the Book of Mormon Musical to be one of the most erotic Broadway plays ever?
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"Welp, my boyfriend requested this, can't be that bad-"
Five minutes later...
"AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OH GOD OH GOD WHY"
A week later....
"Okay. Screaming's done."
Constructive criticism will wait until my brain processes what I just read. Alliteration use with aplomb and ambiguity of ending scored quite well, Zecora's rhymes made it hard for me to take anything seriously right up until she got raped through her open wounds dear god why and oh yeah I was so not in the proper audience for reading this.
...Funny. Really funny in a sick, demented way. Pineapple out of ten would never touch again but appreciate your craft.
...
Little good can come from gory rape. Even if some women have rape phantasies (and would never admit it) there is rape and there is stabbing one into the belly for impregnation. This is crossing a border even the ugliest rape scenarios I read about wouldn't cross. I mean I myself wrote about stabbing the female body for even further penetration (and don't think I kid you here) but then it was the case of a succubus and a demon in consentual demonic sex practices between two immortals!
Bronystories, I love your works but what night of alcohol and unhealthy food inspired you two to this idea? It is unique, I give you that. Decent amount of world building for such a short story, no doubt... But wouldn't it suffice to just rape her and call it a day? Did we really need "knife-dicks" here?
From the description, is somehow seems like you managed to turn a potentially unique idea, potentially incredibly bland, generic and flat.
That, and if going "lore" wise, likely inaccurate... and make very little to no sense among being illogical. But then again, nothing you ever really are concerned with so xP Doesn't hurt to churn out something else than a semi-repetitive monotone slog you know. The ratio does seem to be around between 85-95 % to 15-5%.
Ah well. Would guess it goes with at least one innovative scene or sentence. Will never understand people fascination with repetition.
I know I won't like it, but I'll read it. Only because it is you.
YU NO SKULLFUCK!!?!...I have problems dont I?
............
I convince myself that you're an awesome person with weird fetishes. Bronystories... you just keep being you.
3427048 A week later... But, it hasn't been a day yet.
Impossible, unless....
Alright, after reading this:
I really liked Strabum's character. Like, a lot. And I'm glad you spared poor Apple Bloom. When I saw her character tag, I assumed the worst. Glad that didn't happen.
And on a note of traumatic insemination, while it would be interesting for Changelings to enact on this, I can't actually see them doing this. Ticks are one thing; they're literally mindless drones. They don't actually feel pain. But Changelings are a little more... human? And mind you that their anatomy, aside from looking insectoid, is pretty much identical to a pony's, so that method of reproduction wouldn't even work.
More work from Stories? Time to read.
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Maggots are fine. Making new holes is fine. But watersports? Truly this is a work which has surpassed all depravity.
I came! Also I was really looking forward to the retina... Oh well, maybe next time.
The only thing that ruined this is maggots. I would advise you putting a warning about it in the discription.
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Not a bad idea.
... Seen worse.
I almost thought this fic would have a happy ending, but then I remembered who wrote it, and sure enough...
You sir are a sick fuck, and I respectfully hope that your stories cause your demise.
as a few of my friends where bored i made a challenge of who can read this the longest i lost but the opening paragraphs had some actual jokes in it well done on that
p.s i must find a time to use the phrase whore-hewing halberd
excellent work
I see someone is a fan of Vixentamer.
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That line has become a classic bit of porn dialogue, in a similar vein to "Your resistance only makes my penis harder."
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This is true. (I'd actually forgotten about that one.
I must say, my feelings for this story were mixed.
on one hand I had a half mast erection from the beginning, because I expected a gangbang filled with moaning and boners.
On the other hand I found something I wasn't expecting, and began to enjoy and appreciate the plot.
Conclusion
1. I'm sad that my boner went to waste
2. The overall story is pretty damn solid, and the tragedy at the end makes my demented mind fill happy
10/10
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A boner is a terrible thing to waste.
Hopefully I can make it up to you with a new story worthy of two clop sessions.
3562498I'd very much love to experience a clopfic that can thrill my libido that much
Oh and can you explain why just about every clopfiction writer shy's away from "double vaginal" or even "nipple penetration"? When authors claim to include extreme fetishes, I feel lied to some times.
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What about triple nipple penetration?
3572578awesome as always
In not clopping, I liked the story and my water pipes are frozen, clean up would be a mess. I love you Bronystories
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I Came... :P
Now tht was extremily entertaining good job
Five bucks says that the others teamed up to kill Protonum. At least three out of the five were sick of him for one reason or another. Go ahead, call me an optimist, but it makes sense.
Anyway, another great story for the library that will surely be built in your honor.
whelp, the alliterations were a bit much, but at all a nice read.
Magotty semen is not entirely down my alley, but birthing squirming maggots indeed is :3
....NOPE!!
You sir, are a pervert.
And I salute you.
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Thanks! I hope you enjoy checking out the rest of my stories.
The best thing I can say about this story is that it's written well and grammatically correct.
Unfortunately I'm not fond of gore, which to be fair, was tagged so I really have no excuse.
The biggest fault I have with the story and the one thing that completely kills it for me is the title itself. No living creature causes significant bodily harm to the creature meant to carry the offspring. ( unless said creature is meant to be food for the offspring such as a certain wasp which basically lobotomises and implants its eggs into a spider so that they will have food when they hatch.)
The idea is that whatever is forced to give birth to the creature be in good physical health so their chances of producing viable offspring is better. Leaving the birth partner with a gaping abdominal wound prone to infection would go counter to that fundamental aspect of evolution.
But hey, it's a story. No thumbs down here.
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Thanks for the feedback! The mating habits of changelings were based on how bed bugs breed in the real world.
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Yeah, I'm uhhh... Unfortunately familiar with the mating habits of bed bugs through wikipedia and youtube wells. (that I've fallen down of course)
The difference is that the female bed bug suffers little to no ill effects from the process. That's the big difference here.
Also, despite not enjoying it really, i'm gonna thumbs up this story simply because due to the details and work you clearly put into it.
Would you mind if I riffed this?
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Go for it. Riff away!