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I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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She decides it's best for the Kingdom if she names herself queen and keeps all the power for herself. Bondage ensues.

If only this happened in real life.

my god, I love it.

Headless, you could probably do just about anything, and make it amazing. I heard you do commissions. I have a story idea, that I think you could do great justice in. where do I contact for that?

Keeping track only because I'm curious how this'll play out. This'll probably be the only comment I'll make.

4956672 Yes this, Condemned, Egg Sacks, and Sunset for Twilight are all commissions. You can send me a private message here if you wanted to talk about one.

Favorite'd to see where this fic goes. Hook on the first chapter is rather interesting, but I can see how awful it can go. Too early to judge, definitely waiting for an update.

future pony WILL BRING YOU DOWN TYRANT! *rifle click*(good fic :])

4959428 Like all my stories, it will go off the deep end eventually. Whether that is good awful or bad awful is for you to decide. :twilightoops:

Pretty hilarious so far, like it:pinkiecrazy:.

Can I expect SA to survive this? i mean sure, it is somewhat gruesome but he would best know he is going to be a part of this... Teaching the princesses since he is her very close friend, beside Spike.

4985465 I'm glad it's hilarious rather than only terrifying.

4989874 We'll get to Shining Armor again within two more chapters.

Twilight... there are subtler ways of getting the guards on your side... lying, diplomacy, convince them that you are rightfully queen... literally thousands of different things you could have done, and you just go and start killing them.
You've pretty much guaranteed an angry revolt against your rule now. Or an annoying, persistent resistance at least.

5016631 Diplomacy isn't as easy to clop to.

OH, I would hate to see Shining Die and be slave... He should know, to keep Cadence safe... And a degree of Celestia and Luna safe is to be part of Twilight's side. :fluttershyouch:

As for this Twilight... :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry::flutterrage::raritycry:

Luna practically came from the pain when her horn finally broke free

Oh my.

It shit like this why we can't have some "nice" stories with Twilight just taking over and being an obvious corrupted and perverted leader. Yes, just fuck seduction if all we can go for is mindless torture and murder.

Hey, wait a minute. What happened to Twilight's attitude that she took charge of Equestria for the good of Equestria?

5058353 power corrupts, but absolute power corrupts absolutely

I'm going to pawn it off on brain damage from too much energy flooding her brain. Yep, I'm using the brain damage excuse again; it's pretty convenient!

If the princesses read this story, what would they do to you?

Now to wait for the inevitable Royal Orgy, which consists of Shining and Twilight and the three hornless Alicorns...:pinkiecrazy: Shining will be keeping the fort when Twilight spreads her... Rule to the rest of Equestria, keeping the throne warm.

Now that enjoyable, feeding the little sadist inside me...now he won't come out and stab me...seriously such a problem :rainbowlaugh: but seriously I am enjoying how this is turning out, if you need OC's to torture like say Resistant members or something, let me know, I'm sure you need someone to fight Twilight and fail ^_^

5089977 i'm just hoping that her friends have the sense to join her rather than fight her. it's obvious that this fic ends with twilight as the victor, but i don't want any of my favorite ponies to either die or suffer humiliation.

fav. ponies:
SweetieBelle (not sure that's how it's spelled)

Comment posted by Luna 117 deleted Oct 3rd, 2014

Sorry your out of luck on that. :fluttershysad:

I am thoroughly enjoying the rapey and sadistic part and dread the vore and gory parts in equal measure :rainbowlaugh: Hopefully it won't involve too much death. Death is really messy. Plus you can't play with a dead body as well... unless you make it some kind of undead rape-toy.

Ooooh, there's an idea! Have Twilight turn Fluttershy into a vampony! Poor dear must feed on blood (therefore hurt others, so going to hate herself for it), she'll exist forever, her body can take much more punishment, and Twilight can torture her using things like holy water and sunlight and blessed horseshoes!^^

Also, do consider taking up Bren on his offer, that's always fun ;)

5090844 All these ideas are nice but do keep in mind that it is a commission so it goes where the commissioner wishes it to go. :derpytongue2: That and it's basically already written, I'm just releasing it a week at a time.


This'll be fun.

Comment posted by Pikashiba156 deleted Oct 6th, 2014

5107098 But we haven't even gotten to the really deranged part yet! :derpytongue2:

:ajbemused: Not surprised. Twilight is really corrupted.

"I think Trixie just peed herself a little." said Trixie.
HA :rainbowlaugh:

Please have a chapter show casing all their punishments, I want to see them suffer....ok not really but I'm a fan of Grimdark and I'm afraid she might come out of the computer and break me *pulls out a little flag with her cutie mark on it* all hail Queen Twilight

yeah me your first mention of my favorite character and she gets raped by my least favorite. I can't help but think this is some sort of ironic twist.

5124961 That's basically what part 2 is, a chapter for each of them getting punished.

Quite the life, now I can't wait to see how Rarity gets what she deserves for disobeying our goddess Twilight....

you are a fucked up excuse for a human please go jump off a cliff preferably one with really sharp rocks at the bottom of it:raritycry::flutterrage::twilightangry2:

please please...:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: just go fuck your self


As much as I love my goddess Twilight, her methods of punishment for her friends-turned-enemies are, how shall I say it, too harsh. Why couldn't she keep the other Elements as her own harem of slaves? Keep the collars, magic inhibitors for the unicorns, and wingstraps for the pegasi on them; and they won't dare disobey. How will they attempt to defeat her if their minds are broken?

I call upon an old saying. "Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer."

You know:

I think your a really good writer, and the action in your story is perfect. I have to comment though about the Futa / hermaphrodite... If it is your thing, its your thing, but making EVERYONE have BOTH sexes, comes across to me as a complete cop out...it makes things too easy and contrived. You could really expand this story if you got rid of that.

Anyways thank you for the effort and the story. If you ever want to discuss ideas..I like to do that.

why the hell call this a "MIND CONTROL" story when she's just torturing people into doing what she wants?

danmit , a good mix of things going on here but i just don't want any gore or piecing of any kind in anything really , so im at an impasse......

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