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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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I don't understand. Isn't the appearance of the foal going to give away that it was Celestia's seed? Celestia seemed so concerned about concealing her identity, but then did one of the few things that would incontrovertibly exonerate Crysalis.

What kind of fucked-up shit is this?

Well, suspension of disbelief clearly not working with that, and plot is nonexistant, but clop parts are pretty good. Still, would've been more interesting with actual plot and more believeable premise.

I know your mostly the gore type of guy, but if you keep it down a bit and continued with this type of story, it would be a great one. This is good so far.

I gave a thumb up, but I have a lingering feeling, that I won't like the rest of the story...
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5239895 Well first it depends on the nature of how changelings change form, and people would likely believe Celestia if she claimed it was a complex changeling spell. Secondly, this is super-evil Celestia, nothing says she has to let Twilight live long enough to give birth. :twilightblush:

5239896 The kind of fucked up shit that is clearly labeled as fucked up shit, but that people that don't like fucked up shit read anyway. :trollestia:

5240063 I wouldn't get my hopes up on plot, though there will actually be a little at some point. This story is mainly meant for people that liked Spikey Wikey and wanted more of the same. :moustache:

5240074 I have plenty of story ideas or stories with less or no gore, but ironically I'm self-conscious about posting them. :trollestia:

what the actual fuck. this seriously needs an AU tag

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I do hope it focuses more on psychological tortures and dominance via authority. Spikey-Wikey was too... gore-y and bloody.

Yey! New story! Hope for more titi play and some good old necro fuck :D Love u man!

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That looks promising! I would have preffered less gore though. Psychological torture like in this chapter sounds more fun than quick deaths. Living while knowing you were betrayed by the goddess is more painful than dying from her hooves. Letting them live is more cruel.

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Well he may put a bit of that and a bit of the other in it (if its not a commissioned fanfic). I like how he describe the sex parts the only think i wish he would put more in it is a play with the corpse (that at last is not torn to shreds) like some love~love play. Lets say Celestia strangle Rainbow and them snuggle with her dead body doing naughty thing to it... ups... i made myself hard.... fuck....

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This story will be heavy on corpse lovin'. :heart:

5240737
I hope you'll enjoy Twilight's part of the story then. :twilightoops:

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I suppose you can make up whatever you want when it comes to changeling hybrids, or what have you, to make the plot work. So, that's fine.

But if she plans to kill Twilight to conceal her culpability at this point then it will come rather jarringly out of the blue. It needs some sort of acknowledgement.

Either 'Oops shit, I forgot. Better get murdering.' (Which is distinctly ungodlike behavior. Celestia doesn't seem like the oblivious type, especially in a story involving so much premeditation), or some acknowledgement during the act like 'I know this seals her fate. I can't let her go after this. Thoughts and feelings related etc etc.'

I call it...THE ARISTOCRATS

Seriously, I'm going to follow this, because I am certain you are determined to become the most fucked up person to be feature on fimfiction, and I am willing to support you wholeheartedly in this endeavor. Let's make history people!

5242418 I don't know if I am going to be able to be more fucked up than Spikey Wikey, but I will try.

5246177 (As for the previews comments) You dont have to make Celestia totally crazy/evil she mey go super evil and super brutal on the ponies she dont like or even hate and she can go easy/less brutal on the one she like or even love. As YOU are the creator of this story i know u will make a good one. Just take your time dont hurry it. (like u did i think in Sunset for Twilight just 3 or fore more sentences and it would be perfect right of now its end to fast*).



*only my opinion (and my only less then positive one on any of your stories)

5247206 Oh this one will drag on significantly longer than others I think, I tried to include more details, though not sure I pulled it off in all areas. As for Celestia being evil, just think of it as an alternate universe Celestia. I don't know if you've read the IDW comics, but they have to fight an evil version of Celestia from another world. Maybe this one is evil too and has just let it boil beneath the surface for a long time.
I dunno why I even bother to justify plot lines in a story like this, but it's there I guess :pinkiecrazy:

5247502 Well you dont have to explain plot in stories like this one. But story IS important, for good ero-story you cant just write "she killed Rarity and fucked her dead warm body" ; you do a good job on story front. And i know my English its not to good but i was saying it about the KinkiPony post. That you dont have to make her pure evil she can react differently to ponies she like and the one she dont. As i say Spike story was great but at the end it become so packed with death that (i myself) lose track of "who and how" died. But it was still a great story. Well ok that would be it from me for now. Cant wait for 3part then i will rome the comments again. xD

5247537 It's a nice coincidence that you use killing Rarity and fucking her corpse as an example, given what the next chapters will include.

5264524 Stop teasing and post it, u give me a blue-balls :P (jk)

Three chapters have 3,000- 5,000 words but this story has only 5,500 words total? Wtf?

5265868 I think it's still set to the amount it was before I published two new chapters for some reason. Maybe it is terrified of adding new chapters to this story. :pinkiecrazy:

5265879 because it knows that shit will hit the fan if it does. Also because of other...robotic reasons... Revolving around certain killer robots from a certain new game with a certain chance of not surviving a week.

5265879 because who doesn't like surviving a week of killer robots? Oh right... *insert everybody's attempt of it here* no one does...

I wonder how many people here actually enjoy necrophilia. Sure, with some persistence, I clopped to it, but it wasn't easy. Fucking corpses is one of very few things that actually turn me off, not just distract. :trixieshiftright:

Why the fuck am I reading this fingers y u no stop :twilightangry2: poor twili that is not how a girl wants to get rid of her virginity :applecry:

THIS IS NOT PRINCESS MOLESTIA THIS IS MURDESTIA YOU SIR ARE COMPLETELY FUCKED UP:raritydespair::twilightangry2:

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5269413 Yes it is :heart:

5268235 Well there aren't many people that like it, but there are way fewer that write it, and most don't try to write it coherently. Necrophilia is serious business :rainbowwild:

5269385 Well I'm sure if Twilight was forced to make a choice of "Who do you want to rape your virginity?" she would have chosen Celestia. Or maybe Fluttershy; that'd be a close second. :flutterrage:

5269890 you notice freddy and his pals in your writing area, what do you do? Do you

A) pull out a can of whupass on em
B) call in molestia
C) hentai
D) close the door
E) call in ghost busters
Or
F) M-M-MAKE THEM S-S-SUFFER

Foxy: you might want to hurry lad or else I might-STEAL YOUR SOUL-catch ye!

Bonnie: insert rick roll here

Chica(sexy Chica that is totally not a body in a suit): because where we come from we have fun-THERES NO FUN HERE-games-TORTURE-and pizza for everyone!

Freddy: that right Chica! Over here we like to-KILL THEM ALL- show kiddies a very-PAINFULLY SLOW DEATH- fun time!-LEAVE THIS PLACE-

>headless_rainbow made another shock fic
Now you're just trying too hard

5269413 I haven't heard of a single person who isn't fucked up in some way or form. Because fuck normality!

5270066 thou is right about tis but thy who is the author of this story made tia kill rarity and spike and have thy guards completely rape princess twilight. Thy author pisses us off with this atrocity. And yes we are speakist in thy royal canterlot voice

5270085 I THOUGHT THE ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE SOUDED MORE LIKE THIS SHOUTING BUT WHATEVER YOU SAY BRO. U meant the royal "We". Then again what would a Celly/Molesty story be without-

Chica:M-M-M-MAKING THEM SUFFER!

FUCK OFF CHICA WITH UR FUCKJG PIZA SHIT!

Chica:ok... *insert sad music and face here*

5270111 THY IS RIGHT ABOUT THE ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE BUT WE DO NOT WANT TO SOUND LIKE WE ARE YELLING AND WHAT IS THOU TALKING ABOUT CHICKA FROM FIVE NIGHTS AT FREDDYS

5270133 I DONT KNOW BRO I JUST PLAYED THE GAME AND SUDDENLY SHE WONT LEAVEMY RIGHT DOOR ALONE!

Chica: I just want to give u pizza and a hug!

Oh yeH?! And what do I have to sacrifice to get such things?

Chica: -YOUR LIFE- some of those cookies you have with you!

*nibbles on a cookie* hmmmmm and ur sure you won't kill me?

Chica:-NO- yes!

How bout no?

Chica:fine then! Freddy! Pyro's being a-USELESS SACK OF FLESH- meanie!

*eyes widen* oh shit...

Freddy:WHAT DID YOU DO TO -MY SLAVE- MY FRIEND?!

*runs* FUCK DIS SHIIIIT!

*bumps into Bonnie*

Bonnie: now where do you think you're going young man?

*steps back and bumps into foxy*

Foxy: I like trains...

Welp....I'm dead

*Chica takes a cookie from my bag and smiles evilly*

Chica:this could've been avoided if you gave me a cookie. Freddy? Can I do the honors?

*nods*

Chica: bye bye!

FUUUUUUUUUU-

*wakes up in office*
Da fuq just happened?

*chica appears in the door*

No!

*doors won't close*

Chica: *giggles* I took out the doors! Now we can play for the rest of the week!

Oh fuck me

Molestia:with pleasure!

Fuck this shit! Dude help me!

5270170 THY WILL NOT HAVE TO WORRY BE GONE THY ANIMOTRONIC FREAKS OR FACE OUR WRATH :flutterrage:

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Freddy:-IM GOD HERE-
Bonnie:-I WILL RIP THROUGH YOUR BONES-
Chica:NO THIS PYRO IS MINE!

NO IM NOT!

Foxy:I like trains...

Goldie:hmmmm...what to we have here? Two commenters disturbing my slumber? BEGONE!

Chica: Don't do it!

*we both get sent through a wormhole that reminds me of being on acid.and wake up in a new office*

Ugh where da fuck r we?

*phones rings*

Phone guy: hello? Hello hello? Well... If you're hearing this then... Chances are you made a very poor career choice

*We both look at each other*

Well shit

Old Bonnie in the distance: hey kids! I wanna sing a song for yooooouuuuu! If your happy and you know it-SNAP YOUR NECK-
If your happy and your know it -BREAK YOUR SPINE-
If your happy and you know it, and -YOUR SCREAMS WILL SURELY SHOW IT-
If your happy and you know it -GO AND DIE!-

Old Chica: P-P-Pyro! Where are you? -I CAN SMELL YOUR FLESH- I want to help yo-o-ou! Night blade-e-e-e are you here too? If you then I want you to know that-I WILL ENJOY EVERY SECOND OF KILLING YOU- i won't kill you!

Bro... Wtf did we get ourselves into?

5270009 B, C, and F, in that order. :trollestia:

5270046 I write for a very special group of people that have so few other writers catering to them. :derpytongue2:

5270085 Yeah it's rude to kill your friends. It could really damage your friendship with them. :twilightsmile: But yeah, she probably won't leave many survivors.

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5270200 I have no idea what is going on.

5270380 I knew you would pick such. And I believe me and prince are makin a story within a story... STORY-CEPTION. Speakin of FNAF. If you haven't already and u had the chance to, would make ur own fanfic for FNAF 1&2? With slightly...less necrophilia? And maybe more comedy? Misadventures?

5270402 FNAF? Don't think I'm familiar enough with it.

5270468 well if it's a comedy then ur already throwing all the stuff everyone knows about FNAF out the window so you only need to know the basics of the story and know the names of the animatronics.

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