Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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I don't understand. Isn't the appearance of the foal going to give away that it was Celestia's seed? Celestia seemed so concerned about concealing her identity, but then did one of the few things that would incontrovertibly exonerate Crysalis.
What kind of fucked-up shit is this?
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Mind bleach. I now need it.
Well, suspension of disbelief clearly not working with that, and plot is nonexistant, but clop parts are pretty good. Still, would've been more interesting with actual plot and more believeable premise.
I know your mostly the gore type of guy, but if you keep it down a bit and continued with this type of story, it would be a great one. This is good so far.
I gave a thumb up, but I have a lingering feeling, that I won't like the rest of the story...
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5239895 Well first it depends on the nature of how changelings change form, and people would likely believe Celestia if she claimed it was a complex changeling spell. Secondly, this is super-evil Celestia, nothing says she has to let Twilight live long enough to give birth.
5239896 The kind of fucked up shit that is clearly labeled as fucked up shit, but that people that don't like fucked up shit read anyway.
5240063 I wouldn't get my hopes up on plot, though there will actually be a little at some point. This story is mainly meant for people that liked Spikey Wikey and wanted more of the same.
5240074 I have plenty of story ideas or stories with less or no gore, but ironically I'm self-conscious about posting them.
what the actual fuck. this seriously needs an AU tag
I don't...what?
5240368 Probably.
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I do hope it focuses more on psychological tortures and dominance via authority. Spikey-Wikey was too... gore-y and bloody.
Yey! New story! Hope for more titi play and some good old necro fuck :D Love u man!
That looks promising! I would have preffered less gore though. Psychological torture like in this chapter sounds more fun than quick deaths. Living while knowing you were betrayed by the goddess is more painful than dying from her hooves. Letting them live is more cruel.
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Well he may put a bit of that and a bit of the other in it (if its not a commissioned fanfic). I like how he describe the sex parts the only think i wish he would put more in it is a play with the corpse (that at last is not torn to shreds) like some love~love play. Lets say Celestia strangle Rainbow and them snuggle with her dead body doing naughty thing to it... ups... i made myself hard.... fuck....
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This story will be heavy on corpse lovin'.
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I hope you'll enjoy Twilight's part of the story then.
Oh fuck the hell no.
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I suppose you can make up whatever you want when it comes to changeling hybrids, or what have you, to make the plot work. So, that's fine.
But if she plans to kill Twilight to conceal her culpability at this point then it will come rather jarringly out of the blue. It needs some sort of acknowledgement.
Either 'Oops shit, I forgot. Better get murdering.' (Which is distinctly ungodlike behavior. Celestia doesn't seem like the oblivious type, especially in a story involving so much premeditation), or some acknowledgement during the act like 'I know this seals her fate. I can't let her go after this. Thoughts and feelings related etc etc.'
I call it...THE ARISTOCRATS
Seriously, I'm going to follow this, because I am certain you are determined to become the most fucked up person to be feature on fimfiction, and I am willing to support you wholeheartedly in this endeavor. Let's make history people!
5242418 I don't know if I am going to be able to be more fucked up than Spikey Wikey, but I will try.
5246177 (As for the previews comments) You dont have to make Celestia totally crazy/evil she mey go super evil and super brutal on the ponies she dont like or even hate and she can go easy/less brutal on the one she like or even love. As YOU are the creator of this story i know u will make a good one. Just take your time dont hurry it. (like u did i think in Sunset for Twilight just 3 or fore more sentences and it would be perfect right of now its end to fast*).
*only my opinion (and my only less then positive one on any of your stories)
5247206 Oh this one will drag on significantly longer than others I think, I tried to include more details, though not sure I pulled it off in all areas. As for Celestia being evil, just think of it as an alternate universe Celestia. I don't know if you've read the IDW comics, but they have to fight an evil version of Celestia from another world. Maybe this one is evil too and has just let it boil beneath the surface for a long time.
I dunno why I even bother to justify plot lines in a story like this, but it's there I guess
5247502 Well you dont have to explain plot in stories like this one. But story IS important, for good ero-story you cant just write "she killed Rarity and fucked her dead warm body" ; you do a good job on story front. And i know my English its not to good but i was saying it about the KinkiPony post. That you dont have to make her pure evil she can react differently to ponies she like and the one she dont. As i say Spike story was great but at the end it become so packed with death that (i myself) lose track of "who and how" died. But it was still a great story. Well ok that would be it from me for now. Cant wait for 3part then i will rome the comments again. xD
10/10
5247537 It's a nice coincidence that you use killing Rarity and fucking her corpse as an example, given what the next chapters will include.
5264524 Stop teasing and post it, u give me a blue-balls :P (jk)
nice
Poor twilight didn't have any clue! Well the girls will love having a kid around ;p
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ok... so spike thought that being covered in the sticky white goo was gross after what he did? DAT'S FVCKED UP!!!!!
I think I would have preferred this to be an unbirthing chapter.
IT NEEDS TO FUCKING BURN THIS STORY
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Oh Celestia, what have I gotten myself into...
Why ?
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I fear that I have spent too long on the internet, as I was still able to get off on this, though the immense guilt I felt afterwards suggests there's hope for me yet.
I feel kinda bad for getting wet reading this
Perhaps nothing in the story makes me as hard as the virgin minds on the comments.
Get over yourselves.
Humans are naturally savage and sadistic, you only feel guilt because you have been taught that this is wrong, but I'm sure it has many of you raging lustfully none the less.
The point here is to indulge, much like the story's subject itself.
None of us would most likely even hesitate to brutally punish real actions of this sort,
Because such things are a danger to us all.
However we cannot change human nature, someday maybe but for now we must come to terms with the depths of our own psychological state.
I feel no guilt for this because I am human.
Does that mean I accept that as an intelligent being?
No.
Even the most intelligent snail must accept that it must crawl, it cannot run nor fly.
We would call a snail that feels incomplete because it cannot fly, a stupid crazy snail.
I call any human that feels guilt that they want to rape *or get raped* an idealistic hypocrite.
Your life will be easier, and your mentality, far hardier, when you come to terms with your lot in the universe
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Wait, you know I think I still got some~
And I might have I think just won~
But son of a gun, now I ain't got none~
What can I say I'm a slut for Celestia
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Everyone is a slut for Celestia, whether they want to be or not
Shame I'm not feeling particularly porny right now, but I liked the chapter anyway.
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The best way to feel porny is to read porn.
I've seen, read, and heard plenty of things on the internet. Gross, foul things. So there's not much that's necessarily weird to me anymore. But calling a vagina and a womb a factory, that one is new. Not wrong or gross, and not particularly weird, but I have a feeling that if I were a couple years newer to all of this I would be double, triple, and quadruple-taking at that.
This is all gonna end in tears, i'n't it? Turning friends into raving sluts, only for it all to "turn out to be" Chrysalis? No no no, either Twilight and co end up incredibly unhappy and then everything makes sense again once Celly blames it on Chryssy, or everyone likes this new Celly and she owns up to it in the end. Either way is fine, since ponies will be pleasured, and who doesn't like seeing happy ponies?
Oh ho-ho, this is kinky. You go Celly!
*record scratch* - Wait, the appearance of a foal will blow her cover! Fuck! No, I mean, stop fucking and pull out or something! Unfuck! Antifuck! Disfuck! Fucking don't! Or something!
Thanks for writing blatantly fucked up material like this, it's fun to read while I drink some three day old lemonade and I can't imagine ever having the guts to post anything NSFW. My crazy straw salutes you, Headless Rainbow.
Oh, judging from the chapter warnings, I don't believe that'll last.