Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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7877285 That cop was probably trying to fill his quota or something similar. It sucks the big one, but it happens. His superior probably yelled at him for wasting time and money, which doesn't make it a fair trade, but it does make him a bit more leery of being so absolutely retarded. If the cop Gibsed him, it probably increased his IQ a few points.
And that's why I like story you've woven into this clopfic a lot.
7877425 I also thought that Maud deserved a sincere stab at Celestia.
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And yet you put Photo Finish face in your comment. Foreshadowing?
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I was originally intending to kill Sonata first for exactly that reason, which is why I tried to get in as much of that dynamic as I could before Adagio bit it, but I did a 'who should die?' poll in my fan club group and Adagio got the most votes to die, so die she did. I might have still done it that way if the poll was close, but Sonata was way at the bottom, one of the last place names.
In the end, it actually worked better for plot though, since there is a role late in the story that Adagio would be the least likely of them to consider. Also I like to hurt my characters emotionally, and Adagio would be the least devastated by losing a comrade.
Also notably though, Sonata isn't necessarily the most useless. A siren is supposed to keep their victims off guard, and she could be said to do that the best.
7877458 I used it cause you quoted her and I should probably use more faces
Hooray, the lost 5th pie sister has decided to finally show herself. I've been anticipating watching her lose her mind in a flurry of murder, espionage and sedition... Oh wait, that's what I hope happens when Chryssi shows her smexy buggy booty
Twilight was already nutty, but she seems a bit nuttier than usual. Did Celestia remove part of her brain and replace it with a testicle?
Ah, so that must be the start to any mindfuck situation! I never would have guessed.
Wait a minute here. If you are a masochist and you shove something up your ass, it comes out the head of your dick? I might need to go find a gold ingot. I'm sure it would be a hell of a party trick...
I hear some echo of something. I'm not totally sure, but it sounds like it's saying something about hot dogs and hallways
You remember the thing you used to do with dandelions? "When Moondancer was a baby, a baby, a baby, her head used to pop off like this,"
Gotta be honest here, I'm kinda hoping Celly keeps Limestone's head alive and makes her eat her parents or something.
HOLY HORSESHIT BATMAN!!! SHE'S NOT A ROBOT!!!
I get that Mr. Robot there, there just actually showed emotion, but seriously. Why the fuck would you tell the person that they are being predictable and that there's a trap for them and they are falling into it?
Twilight's got competition...
Woohoo! Bake that birdy. We might even get a turducken out of it!
Kinda random, but I wonder if griffons that were real would have cloacas.
I might be in the minority here, but her staring up at me like that would probably be one of the absolute hottest things possible.
I didn't miss a chapter, or at least I don't think I did, and I don't remember ever hearing about Gabby before like 3 chapters ago... She must'a killed them with syphillis. Sorry Cadence...
Her soul just realized what it's like to be a mouse and have a cat catch you
Holy shit. This one doesn't have balls. She has planets.
I decided to poke some fun at different things in this chapter. Consider it a half-assed version of reading sins. I hope anyone who read all of this got a laugh out of it.
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Minestone is Pinkie's secret rape-baby by Cranky.
Twilight is in fact nuttier than before, but a lot of time has passed in story. That's why Celestia is starting to dislike Twilight, because she's used up. Twilight has reacted to Celestia's increasing boredom of her by lashing out at anypony that might be a suitable replacement for herself. It's why she delights in Sunset's torment so much as well.
Literal mindfucks can be fun.
Well not sure if that is an actual question or just a joke, but what I was trying to say is that she rammed the horn in there, then rammed her cock into the same hole so that it pushed the horn deeper.
Keeping a head alive would be neat, and something similar to that, but much worse, will happen later to some pony.
The best thing about Maud is that you can show how serious something is by making her have an emotion.
Maud believes, possibly correctly, that Celestia will make more mistakes if she's paranoid.
Twilight knows it; that's why she despises Sunset so very much.
I have always assumed dicks with barbs, since the half with their fun-parts on it is feline.
Sadly Cadence doesn't appreciate it fully.
That's more of an assumption on Cadence's part. The council meeting comments made it apparent that Moondancer has become quite the vicious tyrant herself, so Cadence came to the conclusion that anyone Moondancer would put on her Small Council probably isn't much better.
What a fitting vengeance for all those innocent mice that Gabby gobbled up, or at least I assume that's the sort of thing that griffons eat.
She probably might!
I don't think I covered it enough in previous chapters, but Photo Finish has been Celestia's friend since early on, as Photo's 'snuff model studio' is obviously an attractive idea to Celestia, and Photo sends her free copies of all her work to garner favor. She's probably the only pony to get close to Celestia without regularly being raped by her, and possibly second only to Twilight as someone Celestia trusts not to oppose her.
And obviously when Celestia left, that was true of Photo, but there's no way for Celestia to know for sure if she still is due to the special mental defense all the council members were given.
7878002 Well at least in this fic, being dead doesn't mean you won't still get laid!
not much I can say at this point, but something that occurred to me after last chapter: if celestia has access to non-pony magic like she told ember, would removing her cutie mark actually stop her? it might weaken her, but if she can still use non-pony magic she could kill everyone around her and steal her cutie mark back before they realized their mistake.
unless its my mistake in thinking this.
7878225 That is a good catch and a possibility! If they try to take her mark, their bet would be that it still acts as a focal point and that the ball of tormented dead souls that actually powers her would come with it, which is highly theoretical regardless of their confidence in their plan since no one, including Celestia, understands that power. On top of that, it would take an extraordinary plan to get Celestia into a situation where the cutie mark plan could even be attempted without getting instantly swatted and corpse-fucked.
7878264 Guessing that's where chrysalis comes in- leading the changelings and dragons as a distraction. the true wild card may just be sunset shimmer. will she become like twilight, and embrace the darkness? or use the opportunity to strike back at the evil one who tried to turn her into a monster? you don't need to answer that right now. actually, please dont' I want to read it in the story.
another thing I thought of: it would be kind of cool if you reordered the story so that everything in the equestria girls universe, up to and including celestia's return, happened before we got to read about canterlot and the zombies and all that. then the audience would have the same reactions as celestia while reading: why the fuck is the portal closed? what the fuck happened over there? where the fuck did my entire capitol city go? and then we get to find out. I feel like it would flow better that way.
Every, not ever. You Missed a y.
Should be soldier not solder unless she’s supposed to be soldering something here for some reason.
I like the celestia mind games but I can’t figure out how they work. I know why maud lives, but why does photo finish survive here?
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Celestia just sort of has whims for who lives and dies I think, also it's been a while since I last read through this so I'm not sure
Also thanks