Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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what's this? a hint of actual plot?
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yeah, chrysalis will die as soon as celestia returns.
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Believe it or not, it does actually have a plot going, that started in the very first conversation between Celestia and Chrysalis even. It's just that I go off on a lot of tangents for fun stuff that doesn't really have any bearing on that plot, so it's nigh impossible to dig out.
But I really want to finish this, so even though the story will continue to be horribly perverse, every chapter from here to the end will have some bearing on the plot, Even when it's an absolute fuck-party, some event in that chapter will make something happen or not happen that the plot needs.
I'm also doing a lot of time jumps, so after I'm done with the plot, I may still add in other for-fun chapters between other chapters.
7858254 wow. just went back and took a look at the first chapter. I dunno if you changed it, or I just wasn't paying close enough attention, or what, but I now realize that celestia had chrysalis imprisoned long before this story started, and they were talking for a long time. and apparently, celestia was using a magic blocker on her. did it wear down, and chrysalis attempted a little brainwashing, and it went horribly right? cause that would suck for equestrian, but be kind of awesome.
7858311 That's part of it, but when you get a more detailed explanation in the next chapter, you'll see that it sucks for Equestria much more than that. Which I guess means it's even more awesome
7858513 well yeah, cause she can't control what she created this is going to be epic
Poor Clone Celestia, all she wanted to do was rape everything that moved.
This actual plot is the only redeeming quality of this fic for me and I hate how invested I actually am in this.