Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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oh, this is exciting. 58 chapters of hating celestia and wishing she were dead and finally plans are set in motion. i hope this isn't a trick to get the readers excited and then snatch the rug out from under us.
7341875 There is cock vore. I should probably do more of that though; it's so delightfully fucked up. It seems pretty unlike Celestia though, since she likes having a body left to fuck.
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Loving this story so far! Thank you & congratulations for publishing such... let's call it "emotionally engaging" reading material! =~,.,^=
{counting emotions like curiosity, lust, bloodlust, & as other comments have implied, anger, fear, sadness, disgust, & a perverse sort of joy; rather apt comparing the effect to Inside Out in fact, considering some of the victims!} (And thanks for the chance to make the pun!)
Unlike some, I get the sense that even if Celestia isn't aware of the entire plans unfolding & how changelings operate (she has studied Chrysalis pretty well though!), she can tell something is in the works by those who call themselves her foes, & wants to see how the mice play it out for a little fun before she pounces. We haven't seen her have visions here as the little bit in the show, but it's possible that what she's done either has blocked that ability or enhanced it, or twisted it to suit her new ends & personality. (perhaps 'dreams' of terror she can inflict?) That aside, she obviously set up Treehugger & Molly to fail EPICLY, and almost as certainly put other dynamics in the council knowing they'd disrupt the group's effectiveness {no matter how good or bad the individuals may lead their divisions otherwise}.
I have little doubt she is taking advantage of the time away & her foes' activities not only to have fun in the furless-ape world* but also let them get bolder, stir up some trouble, & reveal themselves. Should her representatives miraculously win the day in her absence, she can count it as a trial by fire, have fun with what remains of the enemies, reward & congratulate her council {at least in private} & have a little fun with them, and accept most of the public credit herself. (Even if they already took some credit, she can take it for having delegated well, & punish them for the insolence!) If they fail or merely stall, she gets to tear into the rebels, changelings, dragons, Mother, zombie ponies & whatever else, AND what's left of the council. {Were I in her horseshoes, I'd see that scenario a prime time to forcibly restore Twilight's horn, wings, & perhaps double or more her old magic, so they could cover more ground, have fun separately, or execute a classic pincer strategy. Later of course some fun re-breaking, re-stripping the magic/souls, & maybe telepathic debriefing in excruciating detail of the excruciating details!} Considering she started down this path with experimentation arising partly from boredom, this would fit right in. Frankly I would be more surprised if she hadn't intentionally played the fool to engineer the situation.
*Also a bit I hope in the Crystal Empire, this time with more of their own flavor & twisting their traditions like the Crystalling, Crystal Heart Fair, or something made-up but in their style! If you won't have it next, or have it happen next but tell it afterward eg in flashback or story-in-story, what with the great way you've played around with the timeline the last few chapters**, going back later for a bit could be intriguing ...if Celestia doesn't blow the place up or raze it down first! For some of the victims, perhaps there really were some anti-Celestians in the CE who found out what she was doing & went to break the portal, but they got discovered by her guards/harem or local pro-Celestia devotees/pervs, or she returned first? Not only would the detour build on the mention in this chapter, but also give Canterlot more time to either stamp things down or build to a rolling boil for a full climax as it were. The traditions angle reminds me, I hope we see sometime how she's messed around with things like birthday parties, the Grand Galloping Gala, Hearthswarming, Nightmare Night, &/or of course the Summer Sun Celebration!
**BTW, that's some very good storytelling, being able to skip back in time to fill in story elements while still building up to a climax, and yet keeping rather easy to follow!
So yeah, thank you for posting things like this that get me thinking & feeling, I admire the work, hope to see more, & wish you well! =^u^=
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Thank you for that detailed ramble about stuff, especially since it actually gave me a few ideas, and I like the ideas enough that I'm willing to make retroactive changes in order to make them possible.
Chapter 57 now has a slightly different ending.
Is that what you meant? I did get confused when it said or a mother but I think you meant of a mother.
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That is indeed what I meant, thanks
You know, having read this chapter again, I just realized that this is not the canon MLP Equestria, even at the start of this story.After reading that Celestia was raped during the Canterlot Wedding, you realize that she probably endured much more during her reign.And while she is clearly the villain here, can you actually blame her for wanting "a small vacation"?If I was tasked(because I didn't have a choice, mind you) to rule a kingdom, to protect its people and making sure they are happy and prosperous, while at the same time being raped and tortured by villains for thousands of years...then sure as hell I would need a long ass vacation...
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It was probably more than that (not sure if it explained why Celestia went nuts at this point, but I did include flimsy reasoning at some point)
Should be manage, not manager
Finally some cool things are going on. It’s a nice change of pace from constant rape + gore each chapter.