Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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6069147 Actually you're right, so I added a bit of a throw-away line to that chapter as a compromise:
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"I thought you said you ate their souls," Chrysalis commented blandly.
"Oh I did," Celestia explained, "And they're most certainly gone, but I can animate the corpses with an imprint of their last memories. It's sort of a cheat; they're really just briefly living copies that believe they are the old one, and every time I bring them back they'll be reset to that state, but it will still be fun, right? And the pregnancies will still be from their body, anyway, so it still counts!"
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Let me know if that broke anything else in the story that you can think of, but it should plug that plot hole, and I do love plugging plot holes.
This is just fucked.
I...
Just...
I must see how this ends.
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Oh. we passed fucked somewhere around chapter 3, this... this is something different.
you lost me at chapter 4.
so how about a trip to equestria girls through the mirror or alternate universe (R63) celestia rapes her male counterpart and others?
Well........the only thing left would be going after the author^^
6084575 Yes, end this by going after the author. That would be a fantastic ending to this lunacy.
I feel like this can only end with reality itself being destroyed, or Celestia getting killed with one punch.
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If judge by character list, then probably Doctor Hoofs can go into past and tell Faust what Celestia done in the future and together they stop her before she became a Mary Sue. Grand finale where Celestia being gangraped by her victims and publicity executed by her mother and sister. But nothing of it will be happen, because Celestia is Mary Sue and with every chapter she's become stronger and stronger. I fear that will end where Celestia conquered all countries and universes. If Celestia survive in the end, than it will be a big dissapointed.
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Celestia visited Earth and killed the author and by it she wiped herself from existence. lol!
6082407 None that I can think of. The only problem I'd have left right now is how Lauren, by giving her her real, actual name, is a bit too close to an actual real person for my taste, herself obviously. But as mentioned, that is a question of taste.
This shit's crazy, only made it past the list of contents… but in the debate in morals vs curiosity I'll eventually give it a try
5768627 I swear if I could have the power to write stories as well as they seem in my head, my oc Vee, (an anthro fox with reality breaking abilities) would hunt you down and strangle you, the author of this story, and anyone else who gets a kick out of abusing little children in literature.(P.S this is only how vee and a part of me feels due to the fact that this is how Vee is and my mom runs a daycare, other than that this story isn't bad)
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In all honesty though, did you enjoy writing this? Oh, and thanks for compiling a list with (expect for a few things) all the major red flags.
6130876 I enjoyed writing most of it! There were a few times that I had time writing a part, not that I can really remember what those parts were now.
6130948 Aw, you didn't get to a lot of the really extreme stuff! It's okay though.
that list of fetishes is a little intimidating
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Do you mean that if Luna being animated second time than she would not remember 1st time? This animation thing like load savefile? I think would be more interesting if victim can remember previous "animation". Something like Celestia can find victim's soul in her "soul folder" and connect it to a corpse on limited time, or resave the "savefile" and load it from previous "animation time" not from moment of death. At least she can do it to Luna and Lauren. They are her MOTHER and SISTER, she MUST do something special to them, not just corpsefuck them just like others. Eternal torture in your way don't have a sense, if they can't remember it.
Did Lauren have a same fate as Luna? (Eternal animated fuckcorpse with lost memory)
Did Celestia want to introduce her son and daughter to Lauren and Luna? (Probably that doesn't have a sense if they wouldn't remember it anyway.)
6136521 Well I had already said their souls were gone forever, so I guess I did that to keep from contradicting that.
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I understand that their souls were gone forever, I just don't fully understand how this animation thing works. And I don't understand: did they can remember their previous animation time?
If this is some sort of AI who act and think about itself as a pony and use memory from savefile from the moment of death, then why Celestia can't rewrite that file? That way we will have victim, who can remember all her/his deaths.
Also you didn't answered:
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6129039 ahem. NOBODY GIVES A DAMN ABOUT YOUR OP OC, BADLY WROTE OR OP OCs ARE THE WORST THINGS EVER.
What a wonderful story.
I suggest you e-mail this masterpiece of literature to Lauren Faust, so she can appreciate the wonderfully creative minds she inspired with her work.
I’m 999% certain she will love it and show it to everyone.
PS: Try to copy and paste the Lauren Faust saga into the content of the email so Lauren can read all the important parts.
6163640 Even I can tell that would be a terrible idea. I'm actually starting to consider renaming her for the sake of the story.
Well... this is... interesting.
Well written and the story is quite good, it does get a bit dark at some points but the descriptions you use are very well done.
Good job!
Also, add more cervix penetration!
Way too few stories involves, or focus, on cervix penetration. So it is a nice change seeing that several of your chapters does include that fetish. It would be awesome if you could write a chapter, or a part of a chapter, that focuses on Celestia/Twilight or some other random futa-mare penetrating the cervix of another mare. Or you could add that as a bonus in the EG chapters that I heard you're planning on writing.
Good luck with the writing in the future!
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Oh don’t please, its perfect like it is.
Always remember art can not be censored, don’t let society’s petty puritan morality restrain your creativity, art can not be stopped, art can not be censored.
The internet, a realm where the artist would not fear the censor, where the scientist would not be bound by petty morality, Where the great would not be constrained by the small!
I think this suggests that I’m sarcastic since “YO you can not ever go over 100%”(unless you are an economist).
6169480 If you're freaked out by those chapters I can only imagine how you might react to the really bad ones.
Thank you, headless_rainbow, for this wonderful story. Truly you are the hero of the rather select group of people that do indeed masturbate madly at the idea of Celestia murdering ponies for her own pleasure and entertainment. May you forever rise above the naysayers and hopefully continue this story with more sick ways to make your fans orgasm.
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The fact that you believe one need justify indulging their fantasies via fiction tells me everything I need to know about you with regard to this issue. Have you ever, say, watched Law & Order? Read a mystery novel? Played a liitle Call of Duty? How does one "justify" creating or enjoying series built on theft, rape, murder and unrestrained slaughter? Here's a hint: it's a trick question. There's a cookie in it for you if you can figure it out without phoning a friend~.
Fuck me. Who's she going after next? I hope it's Moondancer, skull fuck her right through the glasses! Grind up her brain with a bloody cock and shards of glass. Soaked in cum, phew... I need to take a cold shower.
6429905 I like your name
I have decided to look at this from a !!science!! point of view. If my calculations are correct, a universe is created for every work of fiction, as that is a consious decsion, and thus an offshoot of string theory. Clearly, this means that the events that unfolded in this work, have unfolded in an alternate universe. As such, Mary Celestia, and her immense power, exist. Thanks authour. You've doomed us all. Also, this provides more incentive to get my transuniversal micro-fusion transportation system concept off the ground. So that I can kill this bitch.
6442733 oh. So what if he writes her crossing into this universe? I can see no greater death then charging Celstia, armed with a spork.
6444992 >spork
I'm taking a rifle, get on my level m80
I normally despise stories like this. However, somehow I enjoyed this. I think it may because of my secret desire to go to Tartarus so that I can climb out and into the pony world.
Jesus tucking Christ, I got a bit woozy from reading the schedule for each chapter. There is a such thing as overly descriptive, and you have redefined it.
6489795 Yep saw. Now I'm hoping the story will continue again. Would be grand if he managed to find inspiration and new ideas.
6490387 And you... Did you improvised yourself this author's personal police, lawyer, and PR person or something ? 15-20+ replies/multi-replies to anyone and everyone, really ?
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Apologies; I did kind of let myself go for a while there.
6489557 No, they just said I was not mentally well enough to join, becuse I will go and get torn apart by mechine gun fire the first chance I get.
6491321 Nah, it is just to read stories and think of all the diffrent ways to microwave a cat. Not that I would.
The oven is better.
These stories are one of a kind and quite a rarity! :D
Truly you balance out the amount of hugboxing and romance this place has.
Frankly I'm also surprised that these are not as badly written as I thought! I've seen many clop tryhards, and given the themes you're working with, i think its not half bad! Still room for improvement, but seriously man, your stories are one of the precious niche ones out there. Happy to have found you.
It's like you got cancer, concentrated it, then turned it into story. Like holy shit, even 4chan doesn't go this far.
6536467 That might be the best description of my writing I've seen so far
6537387 You accept your fate don't you?
This just got worse.