Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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Finaly rebels, yay. Anyway, they will never succeed. (They can reach Celestia, but they probably will be blasted by magic, or just they execute Chrysalis) We need someone with magic abilities compared to Celestia's, but all of them already is dead. (Celestia most powerful creature on Equis, now) And she anyway will be unharmed.
Will be shown here as ponyes lifes and mentality get changed with that kind of rule? Will there be amusement parks with lethal devices and snuff games (where loser will die), cannibal cafes, labirints with tentacles and monsters, and etc? Will be there sacrifices to Celestia? Will be shown here as ponyes will slowly degrade from "rape is disgusting" to "rape-murder is fun part of thein lives"?
Way too much physical and not enough sexy and psychological torture. Start was epic, but afer 10-ish chapter its going dull. Please, more chapters like first three-four.
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Yeah, in last chapters actions happen too chaotically. There so much killing, Celestia even not play with her victims anymore.
Psychological torture a part of preparation to physical torture. Already broken victims not only sense the pain, but fear it, that make physical more painful and funny. I was surprised, when known that Celestia held Cadence all week and do nothing. She don't visited and rape Cadance. Crushing in stone crusher so much psychological torture as physical death,you lay and see like painful death slowly close to you. Probably you will fill nothing, because you lose consciousness due to fear (one of instincts of self-preservation), or already be dead because your heart couldn't sustain such loadings and stopped.
And l really liked to read as Twilight degraded in first chapters, but this is ower. Now, Celestia and Twilight neend a new victim (Lauren Faust will be fun. No way that she can able to do something to Celestia, and maybe that way she will live more than few chapters. How Celestia can refuse to play with her mommy?) to degrade, or Headless need to change the emphasis to more global and show us how ponyes and other races slowly will degrade, and how economy and manufacturing will be ruined with this kind of rule. (For example: Why a need to buy clotches if I can to murder designer and take all clothhes to myrself? And, why I ned to work to ern the money if I can have what I wont? I only need to learn how to kill previous owners. In the end survive only unicorns with repe/murder cutiemark, (And Celestia) who only able to kill and don't able to bild houses, create things, grow groceries and etc. But they will start to kill each other, because this is only what they able to do. And in the end only Celestia stay alive as most skilled and powerful rapist.)
And another problem with Celestia's rule: When she allowed to freely rape/murder, then she increased deatch rate, but the birth rate has remained the same, (Celestia's foals don't count. They mean nothing in global case.) that mean the aging of the nation and reduction of population. Anyway Celestia in the end still alone with full planet of rotting corpses, and to survive all races of Equis need unite and kill her. Alternative is only fall to oblivion.
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Actually trying to put a bit more mind games into chapters now, though I'm writing significantly ahead of where I'm publishing in an effort to have regularly published chapters. It looks like I may catch up to myself anyway though. I'm dragging it out too far
5595573 I still think you crazier then pinkie pie
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Glad to hear that. Writing beforehand really helps to get rid of the holes in the plot. But there already exists a few plot holes. (I already mention them in my previous comment.)
Any chancess that Celestia will solve the economic and demografic problems? This is abous her toys survival. She doesn't want that her toys ended, isn't it?
Please, ansver on my questions:
Will be there in Equestria amusement parks with lethal devices and snuff games (where loser will die), cannibal cafes, labirints with tentacles and monsters, and etc? Will be there sacrifices to Celestia? Will Celestia check correctness of training in the school? Will be shown here as ponyes will slowly degrade from "rape is disgusting" to "rape-murder is fun part of thein lives"? (If you think about answers on this questions as spoilers, then just write in PM, please.)
Definitely needs proofreading.
I couldn't get off to this even if it was my fetish...
One of the few fics where I wish to obliberate equestria.
No rush, of course.
That's ominous.
They should.
should be “taught you”, instead of talk you.
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Huh, after all this time. Thanks