Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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5598016 I don't know about amusement parks. There would probably be cannibal cafes and sacrifices to Celestia and/or snuff games held in public on holidays. She'd appoint an education adviser to keep track of school and make sure they were receiving properly perverted education (ie that children were getting raped). I don't think ponies will ever like the fact that she randomly murders ponies, but rape would eventually become an acceptable method of reproduction and fun, while marriage would become less common.
What really suprises me is she didn't have the crowd start an orgy right then and there for her amusement.
SHIT DAMN IT FUCK princess celestia found me today and she raped me really bad I Don't want to describe it let's just Say it was worse then luna or the cake family
5620945 I haven't even gotten to publishing the chapter I consider the sickest.
ahahahahahahaahhahahahaah!!!!!! I came so hard! That was great!
Your fucked up fan,
XxRUSxX
Could there be a chapter of
the mane 6 pets attempt to avenge their owners
Or discord and/or Sombra return
Foreign emissary maybe Griffin or Minotaur shows up for a visit ( would love to see another country get subjugated)
Good work so far!
I'm kinda hoping that the moon starts falling. Maybe due to Luna's magic and soul no longer existing, maybe as a final curse as she was dying, maybe because the moon is actually alive and spiteful. In any case, while Celestia COULD just put it back in orbit, why not make an example of it, too? So she turns the full moon into a giant butt (ba dum pish), the sun into a supermassive penis, and rapes the hell out of the celestial object, the molten remains of the moon falling to the planet and wiping out many, many inferior species.
Because to hell with them :D
You know, the kinda thing that can't just be outlived if Celestia went to ground for a few millenia. The kind of violent, impulsive, over-the-top sadism that will scar not just mortals, but the planet itself, forever ^_^
I realize isn't particularly perverse in the visceral way the rest of the story has been and doesn't really mesh well with the sadistic clop the rest of the story has laid out, but yeah. It would just be so excessive and I like seeing Celestia outdo herself repeatedly.
5622887 Thinking about griffons though I haven't thought of a good way to handle it yet. As for the pets, I don't know how I'd handle that either, or how they'd attempt such a thing, and that'd be a bit too silly I think for the tone of the story. Same reason I don't really know about including Discord.
5623714 That would be even sillier Though crashing the moon into an enemy nation is an interesting idea.
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Yeah, come on, you GOTTA do something with the moon. It's a big, worthless orb just sitting up there in the sky! A pale imitation of the sun for a pale imitation of the goddess. Celestia should make it useful for once in its existence by using it to flatten other worthless things :)
I still like the imagery of the sun breaking the moon and causing it to rain down, though. Symbolic. She could even then feed the remaining stars to her sun, bloating it like she bloats with souls. Leave everyone lightless nights without Luna, the guardian of dreams, so that it's that much easier to remember how truly little they have without their goddess as they toss and turn in their sleep for fear of waking up to Celestia's grinning face.
If luna is the Goddess of the moon, does that mean that it is possible for her to, or maybe another goddess to be made for the moon? It would be an interesting way to end the story when you are ready. Have a new goddess appear from the moon, rise up and slay Celestia. Then a new Goddess of the Sun would arise from the sun and Harmaney would resume one more...
Just a thought though....
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Yeah, only way to save the Planet is kill Celestia.
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Celestia already is Mary Sue. Why do the things worse?
If the plot submitted to logic, then Celestia will have the many problems, like economic, manufacturing, demographic, civil war (Not one town, but probably 2/3 of country population) , and all other countries will start to break all diplomatic and economic relationship with Equestria (No one normal country will wont to have business with country like this.) and strengthen their borders around Equestria to make Equestria in full blockade. How the country can exist in such conditions? Only matter of time when country like this will collapse. But Celestia is Mary Sue and can overcome these problems. (Now, she on new level: previously she kill one pony in 3 chapters, now she can slay all town in one chapter. On the next level she probably will be capable to slay country in one paragraph.)
Moon is not worthless. The inflow and the outflow depending on the position of the Moon, and the Moon is capable of causing earthquakes. With the power of the Moon and the Sun Celestia capable to destroy every country she want in ten seconds flat. Our OP Mary Sue only need to glow her horn.
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Good idea, but this is Headless_Rainbow's fic, and, if there will appear new goddesses of the Sun and Moon, then they only will be slayed by Celestia in
3 chaptersone paragraph spawn. Headless_Rainbow already mentioned that there probably will be Lauren Fausticorn, but only to die on Celestia's cock. (I hope that Celestia don't kill her so quick and play with her mother.) Anyway all resistance will be slay quickly. No matter this is small group, town, country, or goddesses.5621574
Can't imagine what would that be. (About chapter №29.) Only full country slayind at once.
P.S. Headless_Rainbow, please don't kill ponies so fast, (in every chapter) make snuff as dessert not as main dish, because if eat too much sweet then possible to ache with diabetes. (People tend to get used to repeating things.) Please do that story more than just heartless and plotless snuff fic.
5621574 I want her to titfuck my ass
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Um... yeah. I know. It's got a lot of interrelations with the earth's magnetosphere. The real moon being destroyed, or even just removed, would be catastrophic.
I'm just echoing what I figured would be Celestia's thought process in the fic. She certainly doesn't care. This whole fic is just a gorefest.
It's not meant to be realistic. At the very least there's no reason to believe the majority of the nation, or even the guard, would just go along with all this stuff. They'd try and subdue someone who was clearly only Celestia in physical appearance alone.
Realism, insofar as it can be achieved by magical ponies, is not the point. This is just fun. Take things less seriously.
And again, I only want her to destroy the moon (or something equivalent) because her original plan was to blame everything on chrysalis. Assuming that falls through (and it probably will), she could always use her immortality to disappear for a few millennia and pop up in an age where no one remembers her, the world and its peoples having recovered. If she does something as catastrophic as destroying the moon, though, time will never erase it :D
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Are slaying entire town and committing genocide is not enough?
I understand that fic about talking little horsies already is unrealistic and we need assumptions and conventionality to this fic can work. I wont more realism or any wortchy opponent to balance Celestia's Mary Sueish powers and make her rule a bit harder. I like what Celestia does in this story, but really hate that she does it without any consequences. Each action need the counteraction. And I am a bit bored of repeating plot in Headless_Rainbow's fics. There always pony try to snuff someone, then she/he will like this and become unstopable, most powerful Mary Sue, who do what she/he wont without any consequences. I don't wont to CRV became the another plotless gore story. (Previously Celestia not only killed ponyes, but destroyed them moraly too, this innovation and distinction is over now. In each subsequent chapter we have more violence and less sexy stuf. Celestia even stoped to play with her victms.) And I am wont unexpected plot twists and unexpected ending, not just another ending, where Equestria became Rapequestria.
Do not understand me wrong. I realy like this story, but from my POV story have a few problems: lack of plot, Mary Sueish main character, lack of filings, and to much deaths per chapter. (I think will be better if characters will die rarely, but their death will cause compassion, pity and sympathy to them, not only poker face.)
5636657 If you're looking for something more like that, you should read Luna's Lunacy if you haven't. I do sometimes end things with the bad guy losing, and you still never know for this one
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Yeah, good story. For me LL been the defloration of reading rape/murder fics. (I read it about a year ago.) I think this is your best fic, and proof that you can write stories with plot and unexpected plot twists. Why you don't do that in another stories? Strarge, but I am don't hate Nightmare Moon and Corona in LL as I hate Celestia in CRV. This Celestia is my most hateable character ever, despite the fact that normal Celestia is my third favorite character. And I want to squeeze kind Tia's butt and use it as pillow.
I will know when I read final chapter in CRV.
You have made me very happy, Headless.
Very Happy. With my cock.
5643063 I'm glad it hurts so good then
5643585 Happy cocks are important