Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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what the fuck did i just read...................i not sure if i should be arouse or thorw up or be sick or all 3 at the same time...............
this is a wonderfully story of what could happen if people let go of they morals....... i kind of want this all to end with the pricness wake up form a nightmare........
"Oh Tiiiiaaaa! MOTHER'S HOME."
"...Rape?"
Gorgeous! The unique [or at least rarely seen] take on zombie-ness, characterization in dialog, decisions & action showing the characters to be pervy & becoming horrible ponies but at the same time understandable & relatable, beautifully horrific events & yet with verisimilitude {at least good suspendability of disbelief}, the 10-kilo-Boom-magnitude devices that show Celestia learned from the earlier rebellions & started a policy for dealing with them in a Death Star-y way (again, character by action & decision!), having good reason to toss Harshwhinny to the wolves -- while using that development both to build suspense about any of them escaping & to show the reader more about the zombies. Also nice use of zombiism to bring back characters {more or less!}, give Celestia a possibility of nomming more souls, & steer the story toward ...*certain things* down the line you've mentioned in PM. I could probably write essays or thesis papers analyzing & demonstrating the quality of your work in depth, no matter what the surface elements are (& yet how you use them to great effect!), especially now that you've gotten even better than you started.
[Oh, I kind of do that, already, don't I? *^.^* ]
Suffice to say, congrats on keeping up the effort as well as making the end product so enjoyable for us sicko-psycho pervs! =^,.,^=
Celestia should create soul traps underneath each city so death is no escape and she gets to torture/eat/destroy every soul.