Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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Dear lord is nothing sacred? Not even death will stop Celestia's rampage?
How can this get still more and more insane?! I lmfao on every single new chapter
Poor Luna. Now it seems more in Celestia's style.
Headless_Rainbow, what do you think about snuff chess with living ponies? I understand that idea is cliche.
1. Will Luna appear in other chapters?
2. What Celestia do to her and Luna's foal?
Answers on those 2 questions I'll prefer to see in the story.
1. Will Celestia breaks her life cycle? She only wake up, rape-murder somepony, go to sleep, repeat it daily. Will she do something different?
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Yup, would be fun to see Evil Cadence from "Reflections. I don't know why Celestia didn't want to visit her ex. Lack of originality is mayor problem of his fics. There always the same plot. Somepony try to rape-murder, like it, become unstoppable Mary Sue and do nothing then rape. His ficks have a good writen clop, but didn't gave anything other then clop. I seen many people said him to add more storyline and plot twists, but he acts like Pinkie Pie in this comic.
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5939183 I'll probably have to make a few chapters that are more plotful if I want to bring this to an end, and I'm not sure I can outdo what I've done. We'll see.
5939201 Well Celestia does do different things and I would assume she doesn't kill someone every single day; it's just that I concentrate on her most fun days
Snuff chess is a nice idea, but writing out a whole chess game would be awfully long. Also I don't really have enough characters left to kill for snuff chess, maybe I could do that in some other story.
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I hope you will find time to your MAS fic soon too
5939497 I probably will! I want to integrate some of the characters I've missed in that, but am short on ideas for it. It's not easy for me to limit myself to ideas that don't involve murder
I'm hoping that your going to skip a couple of years after you finish the main storyline. See what happens to equestria if this becomes the norm..?
Honestly, I know how fucked up this is. But I can't stop. Nope. But I would (and will) put a stop to this 'Celestia's' reign. So, if anyone wants to help kill the bitch, talk to me.
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What do you think of a few ideas?
1. About sacrifices to Celestia at Summer Sun Celebration. Where Celestia flayed in the air with some filly impaled at her cock and cum on the crowd while she lifted the Sun. Would be fun to see how Celestia say to shaked in fear filly (How about Dinkie?) in motherly tone something like "Don't worry little one. Everything will be alright. You will die soon in agony, while all ponies see it" and nuzzled her before start a ritual.
2. As I understand that you rejected my ideas about evil Cadence and snuff chess. But what if connect them in one? Celestia going into Reflections universe to visit her ex. (All action would be afrer comic end.) She seems that Cadence raped him and Celestia helped her to kill him and take over mirror Equestria. They botch conquer Equestria2 and public executed Celestia2 and Luna2. Because of it two words become united at one and there will be only one goddesses of rape. Cadence2 and Celestia1 decided to play in snuff chess to choose who will rule new lands. Celestia definitely will win. There probably all characters that you killed before would be alive.
If really hard to write snuff chess, than what about just Celestia's trip to Equestria from Reflections comic?
Sorry, if I annoyed you with it. I just want to read a story about evil Cadence, but not cliche rampage story, and try to make this story more plotful.
Also, what do you think about possibility to introduce Luna to her niece and nephew?
5985645 Yes, you should be clopping furiously to this.
my god is going to be mad at me for reading this. but, whatever your doing dont stop.
I have no idea why, but I love this genre of fan-fic! I love the detail on the loss of life the the lack of remorse from Celestia or Twi when it comes to the most innocent of life.
Damn that sounded weird.
~Squiggle-Squiggle~
I got a cuestion (dont think thats how its written) when you started this story, did you think it would get as f****d up as it did?
And wen do you post the nest capter? And is lauren faust gonna be in that one? I saw her in the diskription.
Gotta say sorry for my poor english, not that good at spelling.
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6063789 I didn't expect it to drag on for quite the time it did no, but I finally have an end game in mind at least. And yes, I have plans for Fausticorn, probably not healthy plans. I'll post more soon.
I must say I'm personally not too happy about this particular move - it kind of retcons the whole idea of soul vore as the ultimate and permanent destruction of the victim. This way it's just kind of storing for later use, takes away the preciousness of the moment in a way.
Still an absolutely lovely read, as everything you have written so far. With the long hiatus right now, it also had me wondering - could it perhaps be that my earlier request for a commission might be better timed now that you aren't working on so many stories at once?
The parts were testicularies are crushed/eated are very.......painful to think about, well done!