Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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Ember drew a hoof back and slammed it into Ember’s muzzle hard, knocking her back against the throne.
Chrissy
I love how you manage to keep interesting storyline through all that rape-sex-fetishy fic. And you actually explained why Celestia did all of this, or why ponies go along with it.
No one died in this chapter... Are you feeling ok Headless Rainbow?
gotta agree with 7864958 . I would've thought chrysalis would absolutely gore those three dragon suitors to death. seems more the style of this story. that doesn't mean you have to change it though.
7864402 Thanks, I hope that I haven't done that a lot, especially in chapters where I switched out one character for another.
7864763 I know most people don't care in stories like these, but I am glad that someone appreciates the plot.
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7864969
It is more my style, but I'm being a slave to continuity. Ember would be angry if Chrysalis killed a dragon unnecessarily, and Chrysails is trying to get into Ember's pants on a more officially permanent basis.
Spoiler, but probably something you've predicted anyway: Also as I've said before, I often make characters form emotional attachments so the impact will be more for one when the other dies. Whenever you see me have two characters get attached romantically, one of their lives are probably in danger.
7865024
Oh, yes, I do! At first this story looked just like convenient way to write more rape chapters. Then, sometime in the middle, I've realized that you keep Celestia in character, while making her a complete psychopath: she expands her empire, deals with rebels, still teaches Twilight, still expands her wisdom to her little ponies. Yes, tone of those things changed, but core persona still remains.
Also, amazing stuff with dragon culture, 'friendly rape' and 'might makes right' mixed together. That looks like Spike would've had no chance, but as we know from your "Spikey Wikey" story, he would, just make him greedy and voila!
I know that you make more new stories, but I really like how you still manage to write here and hope you'll finish it properly, because story actually is pretty fun to follow, and your type of sex still nice to see.
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I do have a conclusion planned and will mark this story complete when it gets there, but may add more in the future as there are a lot of time jumps in the story that could be filled. Right now it looks like chapters 84 and 85 will be the 'final showdown' and 86 will be the fallout from said showdown.
As for the gender thing, everyone loves to do the tired old 'Fall of Equestria' culture, so I've started to make sure even cultures with dominant males aren't just a copy of that. And I made Equestria female dominated in this because it doesn't really make sense otherwise.
Also, things don't change overnight They aren't going to go from a matriarchy to willfully sending their wives and daughters to meat farms the second invaders suggest it's a good idea. One of my goals of this story was to make things happen gradually; there is about a month between each of the mane6 murders, and the entire thing happens over a period of at least several years. Just the time Celestia is trapped in the human world is going to be a full year.
I mean yes, the concept and art it spawns are hot, and if all you're looking for is porn, then that's fine, even awesome, but I feel the need to at least have them use a system that wouldn't result in the rapid elimination of their population.