Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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is it bad that until Very Sleepy corrects the gender bending problem with A Changeling Invasion that I find this story more morally pure? as in this story has better morals than A Changeling Invasion simply because it cannot get the Gender bending thing on that level?
7265587 I like changelings too, and they are an important part of the plot later, what little plot a story like this could have.
7265739 thee thing is, really it's just chryssi causing hell for the stallions, but she has taken every mare she and her changelings could get their hands and turning them into willing sex slaves leaving stallions confused, betrayed and angry at the world, then she starts having her drones start turning them into mares, raping and impregnating them. and for that very reason i feel this story is still morally purer than that damned story.
7265764 I'd like to see the story if you point me to which one it is.
7265812 A Changeling invasion by Very Sleepy.
I need to know, is it best to read the chapter here or on the other site (expliciated? Explickt? Forget it) or should i read both, and in what order?
Sorry for any bad grammar btw.
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Oh, and by that\/ i mean: to get the whole experience *winkwink*
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I would say the other site, but I'm a f'ed up sick-o when it comes to stories like this!
7266003 Well the one on this site is the one that is 'canon' to the story and will be referenced later, and that's the way it's required to be if I want to keep the story here.
At any rate, I'd suggest at least reading the first small bit up to the line ""You better mean torture when you say that," reminded magic Celestia." on this site, because it's amusing. After that it's all non-sexual hard vore, so if you get off on vore for the sake of vore, then you'll want to read the rest.
If you enjoy sexy lolis and foalcon, then read the other one, but think of it more as a fanfic of this fanfic rather than part of this fanfic, if that makes sense.
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Ok, i think I understand? Maybe? I'll just start by reading this one and then the other one k?
K.
Love the "story" if you can call it that. Keep up the "good" work
OK I read this chapter and was pretty fuckin pissed and was ready to come and bitch a lot but then I saw your authors note about the sex thing and honestly I'm still pretty pissed off.
Its mainly cause I got my hopes up and was just disappointed, I kept thinking/hoping it was joke a joke and at some point celestial wouldn't be able to resist anymore and use them like living(temporarily at least) cock sleeves but that point never came and it just felt like one huge tease that blue balled me.
I understand why you didn't but honestly I feel like if you weren't gonna do it you just shouldn't have done this chapter at all, even understanding why there was no sex I still feel like this chapter was a big disappointment for anyone whose been reading this story all this time.
I think if you weren't gonna do it you shouldn't have done the crusaders at all, or just did the next chapter instead of this and posted an external link there for what this chapter SHOULD have been.
Sorry that this is long and still me mostly just bitching anyways but I had to get that out cause this chapter was very disappointing in that you held back when it coulda been so much more 'fun', I know cause I've been reading this from the beginning and I think that's part of what frustrates me about this chapter so much is that this is a fic with no boundaries with 50+ chapters and then there's this chapter, it kinda feels like an insult to the series.
Ug sorry I ramble a lot my point is I was mad and disappointed you semi-censored this chapter and even if I understand why you couldn't do it I'm still a bit mad and disappointed you didn't find a way to do it anyways and personally I'd rather this chapter not exist at all then have this mediocre version. If this were a general horror fic this chapter would be amazing but its not its a cruel sadistic fapfic with no limit to its depravity so a censored chapter just feels like an insult to the story and its loyal readers
The hard vore in this chapter wasn't particularly interesting to me, but Celestia's lines about the rules were hilarious. Although... if Celestia knows the FIMFiction rules, then she must be aware of our world too! In the words of Twilight Sparkle, "I have never been this afraid."
The rules about killing vs. sexing children in stories are not entirely nonsensical, although it's hard to express why. I think it's not about "sex is worse than murder" but rather the way it is intended and used. Fiction about children (or anyone else) being murdered is not primarily written or read for the gratification of murderers. However, explicit fictional stories or drawings of sex involving children is typically for the pleasure of those who want to do such things. What doesn't make sense to me is sex with pony foals gets a pass but not anthro/human children.
To end on a lighter note,
Oh don't be silly, chicken is delicious; although eating you raw isn't really a good idea.
*eats scootaloo* taste like chicken
I've read the chapter on the other site, & I consider it to be the canon version.
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That is one way to see it
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I worry for the genocide. I worry for myself, and my family.
honestly this chapter made me laugh, which makes me doubt my own mental sanity, which I think is funny in itself.
Reading the other site version first made the fimfic version way funnier than it should’ve been.
I do prefer the original version just because this version feels so out of place.